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Illusive #2
Deceptive
You don’t belong with us.
These are the words that echo through the minds of all immune Americans—those suffering the so-called adverse effects of an experimental vaccine, including perfect recall, body manipulation, telepathy, precognition, levitation, mind-control, and the ability to change one’s appearance at will.
When great numbers of immune individuals begin to disappear, fear and tension mount, and unrest begins to brew across the country. Through separate channels, super-powered teenagers Ciere, Daniel, and Devon find themselves on the case; supercriminals and government agents working side-by-side. It’s an effort that will ultimately define them all, for better or for worse.
Pairing high-stakes action with a compelling cast of superhuman characters, Emily Lloyd-Jones’s thrilling sequel to Illusive will have readers on the edge of their seats.
These are the words that echo through the minds of all immune Americans—those suffering the so-called adverse effects of an experimental vaccine, including perfect recall, body manipulation, telepathy, precognition, levitation, mind-control, and the ability to change one’s appearance at will.
When great numbers of immune individuals begin to disappear, fear and tension mount, and unrest begins to brew across the country. Through separate channels, super-powered teenagers Ciere, Daniel, and Devon find themselves on the case; supercriminals and government agents working side-by-side. It’s an effort that will ultimately define them all, for better or for worse.
Pairing high-stakes action with a compelling cast of superhuman characters, Emily Lloyd-Jones’s thrilling sequel to Illusive will have readers on the edge of their seats.
368 pages, Hardcover
First published July 14, 2015
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Emily Lloyd-Jones
12 books1,796 followersEmily Lloyd-Jones grew up on a vineyard in rural Oregon, where she played in evergreen forests and learned to fear sheep. After graduating from Western Oregon University with an English degree, she enrolled in the publishing program at Rosemont College just outside of Philadelphia. She currently resides in Northern California.
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July 18, 2021
This was a good ending, but unexpected? Not what you usually expect from found family books. It was an interesting choice.
I still really enjoyed this and had a lot of fun reading it. If you’re craving an underrated superhero series, I’d highly recommend it. :)
I still really enjoyed this and had a lot of fun reading it. If you’re craving an underrated superhero series, I’d highly recommend it. :)
June 23, 2015
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Deceptive by Emily Lloyd-Jones
Book Two of the Illusive series
Publisher: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
Publication Date: July 14, 2015
Rating: 4 stars
Source: ARC sent by the publisher
Summary (from Goodreads):
Don't miss this thrilling, high-stakes sequel to Illusive.
You don’t belong with us. These are the words that echo through the minds of all immune Americans—those suffering the so-called adverse effects of an experimental vaccine, including perfect recall, body manipulation, telepathy, precognition, levitation, mind-control, and the ability to change one’s appearance at will.
When immune individuals begin to disappear—in great numbers, but seemingly at random—fear and tension mount, and unrest begins to brew across the country. Through separate channels, super-powered teenagers Ciere, Daniel, and Devon find themselves on the case; super criminals and government agents working side-by-side. It’s an effort that will ultimately define them all—for better or for worse.
What I Liked:
The first thought in my mind when I cracked open the review copy was: crap - I've forgotten most of what happened in book one, Illusive! I remember the characters, the general conflict, the world-building, but not a lot of specifics. For one, I don't remember very much of what happened to Daniel, in Illusive. I loved Illusive, but there are a lot of holes in what I remember. So I thought this book would be a struggle. Luckily, it wasn't!
In this sequel to Lloyd-Jones's stunning debut, Ciere, Daniel, and Devon are split up and fighting on each of their ends, on very different sides. People who are immune are being kidnapped, and the kidnappings don't seem random. Two individuals are of interest, and Ciere, Daniel, and Devon all have a stake in the arrest of these suspects. But each teenager is not prepared for the truths to be uncovered, for the limits that will be tested, for the lives that will be lost.
This book is written in three perspectives - Ciere's, Daniel's, Devon's. Ciere and Alan Fiacre (the boy who has the formula for the Praevenir creation memorized) are in the hands of Guntram, a powerful illusionist they owe. Daniel is in the hands of the FBI, with a man named Gervais. Devon has been offered an internship position in a small branch under the leadership of a man named Macourek. The three teens have gone in three different directions, willingly or unwillingly.
This book is written in third person POV, with three separate perspectives (each chapter has a different perspective). Ciere's was the most interesting, but I liked Devon's, too. Devon is kind of like a spoiled troubled rich kid who needs a bit of direction, so he is recruited to the for the small organization to work as an intern, doing data entry. Devon is spoiled, but he wants to work hard. Ciere is determined to protect Alan, even if it seems like the only thing he cares about is protecting the formula. And Daniel - he hasn't seen Ciere in quite some time. He's busy with the FBI, trying to figure out the mystery of the disappearances of immune people.
I think Ciere's character development is the easiest to spot, and I'm happy about the direction her characterization was taken. Ciere really learns how to use and wield her illusionist ability. She grows more comfortable with her own skin, and can do powerful illusions, under the tutelage of Guntram. I like Ciere a lot. She's tough, she's been through quite a bit, and she never stops.
There IS romance in this novel - YAY! I do remember mentioning in my review of Illusive how I wanted more romance in the sequel. Well, there is a subtle development in two people's relationship, which was really sweet. It wasn't super important to the plot, but it is clear as it develops. I love the pair! I can't remember much of their interactions in Illusive, but I love them in this book, little as they interact!
I'm quite happy with this book's story, characters, resolution, and even the subtle romance. I really enjoyed both books in the series. I'm not sure if there will be more books (probably not - the ending of this one was really wrapped up), but I wouldn't mind more. Nor would I mind if this series ended as is. I'll definitely be looking out for more of Lloyd-Jones's books in the future!
What I Did Not Like:
At times, this book was a bit slow. Also at times, I really struggled with not remembering things from Illusive. Overall, Lloyd-Jones made it so you really didn't need to remember too many specifics, but at the same time, the gaps in my memory were pretty large. Not necessarily a negative, on Lloyd-Jones's part, but a fair warning to readers.
Would I Recommend It:
I'd highly recommend this series! The original comparison for Illusive (which I usually hate, fyi), was something like X-Men meets Ocean's Eleven, which is a pretty hardcover comparison - and a good one, too. Lots of action, great world-building, hilarious characters, sweet romance. An all-around fantastic package!
Rating:
4 stars. I'll be awaiting more novels from this author, whether they be sequels to this book, or new works! Lloyd-Jones has a knack for writing amazing world-building and unique characters. More, please!
Deceptive by Emily Lloyd-Jones
Book Two of the Illusive series
Publisher: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
Publication Date: July 14, 2015
Rating: 4 stars
Source: ARC sent by the publisher
Summary (from Goodreads):
Don't miss this thrilling, high-stakes sequel to Illusive.
You don’t belong with us. These are the words that echo through the minds of all immune Americans—those suffering the so-called adverse effects of an experimental vaccine, including perfect recall, body manipulation, telepathy, precognition, levitation, mind-control, and the ability to change one’s appearance at will.
When immune individuals begin to disappear—in great numbers, but seemingly at random—fear and tension mount, and unrest begins to brew across the country. Through separate channels, super-powered teenagers Ciere, Daniel, and Devon find themselves on the case; super criminals and government agents working side-by-side. It’s an effort that will ultimately define them all—for better or for worse.
What I Liked:
The first thought in my mind when I cracked open the review copy was: crap - I've forgotten most of what happened in book one, Illusive! I remember the characters, the general conflict, the world-building, but not a lot of specifics. For one, I don't remember very much of what happened to Daniel, in Illusive. I loved Illusive, but there are a lot of holes in what I remember. So I thought this book would be a struggle. Luckily, it wasn't!
In this sequel to Lloyd-Jones's stunning debut, Ciere, Daniel, and Devon are split up and fighting on each of their ends, on very different sides. People who are immune are being kidnapped, and the kidnappings don't seem random. Two individuals are of interest, and Ciere, Daniel, and Devon all have a stake in the arrest of these suspects. But each teenager is not prepared for the truths to be uncovered, for the limits that will be tested, for the lives that will be lost.
This book is written in three perspectives - Ciere's, Daniel's, Devon's. Ciere and Alan Fiacre (the boy who has the formula for the Praevenir creation memorized) are in the hands of Guntram, a powerful illusionist they owe. Daniel is in the hands of the FBI, with a man named Gervais. Devon has been offered an internship position in a small branch under the leadership of a man named Macourek. The three teens have gone in three different directions, willingly or unwillingly.
This book is written in third person POV, with three separate perspectives (each chapter has a different perspective). Ciere's was the most interesting, but I liked Devon's, too. Devon is kind of like a spoiled troubled rich kid who needs a bit of direction, so he is recruited to the for the small organization to work as an intern, doing data entry. Devon is spoiled, but he wants to work hard. Ciere is determined to protect Alan, even if it seems like the only thing he cares about is protecting the formula. And Daniel - he hasn't seen Ciere in quite some time. He's busy with the FBI, trying to figure out the mystery of the disappearances of immune people.
I think Ciere's character development is the easiest to spot, and I'm happy about the direction her characterization was taken. Ciere really learns how to use and wield her illusionist ability. She grows more comfortable with her own skin, and can do powerful illusions, under the tutelage of Guntram. I like Ciere a lot. She's tough, she's been through quite a bit, and she never stops.
There IS romance in this novel - YAY! I do remember mentioning in my review of Illusive how I wanted more romance in the sequel. Well, there is a subtle development in two people's relationship, which was really sweet. It wasn't super important to the plot, but it is clear as it develops. I love the pair! I can't remember much of their interactions in Illusive, but I love them in this book, little as they interact!
I'm quite happy with this book's story, characters, resolution, and even the subtle romance. I really enjoyed both books in the series. I'm not sure if there will be more books (probably not - the ending of this one was really wrapped up), but I wouldn't mind more. Nor would I mind if this series ended as is. I'll definitely be looking out for more of Lloyd-Jones's books in the future!
What I Did Not Like:
At times, this book was a bit slow. Also at times, I really struggled with not remembering things from Illusive. Overall, Lloyd-Jones made it so you really didn't need to remember too many specifics, but at the same time, the gaps in my memory were pretty large. Not necessarily a negative, on Lloyd-Jones's part, but a fair warning to readers.
Would I Recommend It:
I'd highly recommend this series! The original comparison for Illusive (which I usually hate, fyi), was something like X-Men meets Ocean's Eleven, which is a pretty hardcover comparison - and a good one, too. Lots of action, great world-building, hilarious characters, sweet romance. An all-around fantastic package!
Rating:
4 stars. I'll be awaiting more novels from this author, whether they be sequels to this book, or new works! Lloyd-Jones has a knack for writing amazing world-building and unique characters. More, please!
July 9, 2015
Wow. Literally amazing.
I was hooked by book one in this series, ILLUSIVE, and DECEPTIVE was a perfect follow-up. Talk about incredible story-telling, folks. I am so in love with Emily Lloyd-Jones' writing style. She writes like a movie, and her scenes are so perfectly plotted and laid out that it kind of makes me want to cry.
Book 2 is just as twisty and power-packed as book 1. We have another awesome mystery, lots of fun heist scenes, and to my great surprise, a little more romance than book 1. I just love this series, and I can't wait for book 3. (Please tell me there's a 3rd?!)
If you haven't picked up ILLUSIVE, do so now. This series is in my top reads of all time, and you're missing out if you haven't read it!
I was hooked by book one in this series, ILLUSIVE, and DECEPTIVE was a perfect follow-up. Talk about incredible story-telling, folks. I am so in love with Emily Lloyd-Jones' writing style. She writes like a movie, and her scenes are so perfectly plotted and laid out that it kind of makes me want to cry.
Book 2 is just as twisty and power-packed as book 1. We have another awesome mystery, lots of fun heist scenes, and to my great surprise, a little more romance than book 1. I just love this series, and I can't wait for book 3. (Please tell me there's a 3rd?!)
If you haven't picked up ILLUSIVE, do so now. This series is in my top reads of all time, and you're missing out if you haven't read it!
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August 25, 2015OMG.
DAT COVER.
OMG.
I'm so pumped. I can't even. I'm so pumped.
DAT COVER.
OMG.
I'm so pumped. I can't even. I'm so pumped.
July 20, 2016
4.5 stars
After reading Illusive, I was instantly addicted by this explosive world and couldn't wait to get my hands on book two. Deceptive is just as crazy amazing as book one and even better then I expected.
Emily Lloyd-Jones is such a fantastic storyteller! I absolutely love the her writing style. It's fast paced, in your face and solid entertainment from the first page, on. I adore the concept of super-powered teens working with different government agents with a mystery that entwines them together again. Ciere and Alan, Devon, and Daniel all work with different organizations, but I think that's what I love most about this series. They are friends, or well, not each others enemies. As an immune, they have no choice but to work with their 'respected organizations', but when push comes to shove, they are still protecting each other and when they're working together, the chemistry is off the charts fun.
The plot is a complete rush and I can't express how gripping and thrilling this series is. It's constantly moving, unpredictable and while I might not have cared for the whole mob/government agents before in my reads, I can't help but be addicted to it now. Then again, the whole immune powers really puts this in a rather intriguing place. But really, it's these incredible characters that really own this book. Cirea is a firecracker, Alan is protective and wonderful and Devon is still hilarious, reckless and amazing. I was happy to see more of Daniel in this book since he didn't play a huge role in the first book. I think I've got to know him better and while he's still somewhat of a mystery, I loved what he brought into this world. I'm also happy to see that some romance is playing out in this book, but I'm not sure it was the romance I was hoping for...still, it was sweet and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Bottom line, I loved this book. The writing, the concept, the storyline and the characters. This one has it all. It's fun and funny with quick wit and charming banter with an endless stream of action and thrills. The ending was decent enough, but there has to be more. It simple can't end here and I for one can't wait for the next book! An addicting read!
After reading Illusive, I was instantly addicted by this explosive world and couldn't wait to get my hands on book two. Deceptive is just as crazy amazing as book one and even better then I expected.
Emily Lloyd-Jones is such a fantastic storyteller! I absolutely love the her writing style. It's fast paced, in your face and solid entertainment from the first page, on. I adore the concept of super-powered teens working with different government agents with a mystery that entwines them together again. Ciere and Alan, Devon, and Daniel all work with different organizations, but I think that's what I love most about this series. They are friends, or well, not each others enemies. As an immune, they have no choice but to work with their 'respected organizations', but when push comes to shove, they are still protecting each other and when they're working together, the chemistry is off the charts fun.
The plot is a complete rush and I can't express how gripping and thrilling this series is. It's constantly moving, unpredictable and while I might not have cared for the whole mob/government agents before in my reads, I can't help but be addicted to it now. Then again, the whole immune powers really puts this in a rather intriguing place. But really, it's these incredible characters that really own this book. Cirea is a firecracker, Alan is protective and wonderful and Devon is still hilarious, reckless and amazing. I was happy to see more of Daniel in this book since he didn't play a huge role in the first book. I think I've got to know him better and while he's still somewhat of a mystery, I loved what he brought into this world. I'm also happy to see that some romance is playing out in this book, but I'm not sure it was the romance I was hoping for...still, it was sweet and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Bottom line, I loved this book. The writing, the concept, the storyline and the characters. This one has it all. It's fun and funny with quick wit and charming banter with an endless stream of action and thrills. The ending was decent enough, but there has to be more. It simple can't end here and I for one can't wait for the next book! An addicting read!
July 21, 2015
Freaking amazing! I love everything about this series, except that it might be over now. Please, please, tell me there will be a third book?!
November 14, 2019
3.5 Stars
October 22, 2017
Maybe this book wasn't actually as bad as I'm rating it, but I'm being bitter right now. Let me list the major problems I had with this book:
•This book has an ending that's incredibly unsatisfying for the end of a series. A lot of unexpected stuff happens at the end, like Daniel finding out that Gervais being a levitas and Devon deciding to work for Aristeus, but we never actually see the fallout from any of this stuff and are left hanging. It feel like the second book in a trilogy, not the final book in a series.
•I find Devon an extremely annoying narrator who I never felt connected to or liked. His addition as a narrator had relevance to the plot, but I didn't enjoy it. None of his character growth really went in a direction that I liked, especially his choice at the end.
•I don't think Ciere and Alan's romance was bad, but I wish they'd gotten together sooner. It felt like the part with Ciere thinking he didn't like her back was stretched out a little too long.
•None of the questions that I had at the end of Illusive are answered in this book. If we're being honest, this is my biggest complaint. How does Aristeus know Kit and Magnus? What kind of falling-out did they have that led to him working for the government? Are Kit and Magnus exes? (Answer: sure seems like it but is never confirmed in-text). Why do they hate each other when they first meet again in Illusive? What's Ciere's real name? Is TATE going to try and get Alan back? What does it mean for the world at large now that the formula for creating Immune isn't lost? Is someone going to discover who Alan really is? Is Daniel's sister going to appear? Deceptive was a pretty anticipated book for me because of all these unanswered questions, but the plot went in a completely different direction and we never got any answers.
Conclusion: I might give this book a higher rating after thinking about it more, but for now I find myself extremely unsatisfied and wishing that there was a third book.
•This book has an ending that's incredibly unsatisfying for the end of a series. A lot of unexpected stuff happens at the end, like Daniel finding out that Gervais being a levitas and Devon deciding to work for Aristeus, but we never actually see the fallout from any of this stuff and are left hanging. It feel like the second book in a trilogy, not the final book in a series.
•I find Devon an extremely annoying narrator who I never felt connected to or liked. His addition as a narrator had relevance to the plot, but I didn't enjoy it. None of his character growth really went in a direction that I liked, especially his choice at the end.
•I don't think Ciere and Alan's romance was bad, but I wish they'd gotten together sooner. It felt like the part with Ciere thinking he didn't like her back was stretched out a little too long.
•None of the questions that I had at the end of Illusive are answered in this book. If we're being honest, this is my biggest complaint. How does Aristeus know Kit and Magnus? What kind of falling-out did they have that led to him working for the government? Are Kit and Magnus exes? (Answer: sure seems like it but is never confirmed in-text). Why do they hate each other when they first meet again in Illusive? What's Ciere's real name? Is TATE going to try and get Alan back? What does it mean for the world at large now that the formula for creating Immune isn't lost? Is someone going to discover who Alan really is? Is Daniel's sister going to appear? Deceptive was a pretty anticipated book for me because of all these unanswered questions, but the plot went in a completely different direction and we never got any answers.
Conclusion: I might give this book a higher rating after thinking about it more, but for now I find myself extremely unsatisfied and wishing that there was a third book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 5, 2015
I need this. I need it so bad.
September 13, 2016
I can’t think of a whole lot to say about this book, but I did really like it. There was just something very easy about the writing style and I loved this world that the author had created. As for the plot, it was a little disjointed at first. I kept wondering how what Ciere was doing connected with the woman that Daniel was hunting down and so on. Each character in the group was off doing their own jobs and missions and it wasn’t until the end where it all came together. Also, it was a bit weird because after finishing the book, it doesn’t seem like much happened. I still enjoyed the story a lot, but this felt more like a self-contained episode of a tv show than a full-fledged in-depth book plot.
This continues to be one of the few books where I like all the different point of views. I was a bit disappointed that there was barely any Magnus because he was definitely one of my favorite characters. I even wanted more Aristeus. He seemed a little too tame in this and I wanted to see more of that ruthless part of him. That said, I loved Daniel and Devon’s chapters. Surprisingly, Devon’s were the most interesting to me. It was interesting getting into his head and really getting to the meat of why his character acted the way he did. He was probably the most well-developed of them all. Ciere was the only person that I had problems with. It was fun to see her use her illusion powers to sneak into places. However, I kind of hated her when it came to her interpersonal relationship. I find Alan as interesting as a piece of bread, so I wasn’t into whatever romance they had going on. Even given his importance to the world and the knowledge he had in his head, he honestly was super irrelevant in the story. He was just kind of there. Relationship with Alan aside, I also hated how Ciere treated Devon. I was still pissed by her actions at the end of ‘Illusive’ and she continued to be a horrible friend to him. I hated how she acted like Devon . It made no sense to get so mad at Devon for something that he didn’t know he was a part of.
Overall, this was good, but not as good as ‘Illusive’. I think the issue I had was that I missed that fun group dynamic they had in the first book. Instead of having the whole crew working on the same mission, everyone was scattered to different parts. Also, I feel like this left me with even more questions than the previous book. I want to know so badly what the whole deal is with Aristeus, Magnus, and Kit. It’s like I kept getting hints towards some bad history between those characters, but it was never clarified. I’d be into a third book as long as the plot was good and I finally got some answers.
This continues to be one of the few books where I like all the different point of views. I was a bit disappointed that there was barely any Magnus because he was definitely one of my favorite characters. I even wanted more Aristeus. He seemed a little too tame in this and I wanted to see more of that ruthless part of him. That said, I loved Daniel and Devon’s chapters. Surprisingly, Devon’s were the most interesting to me. It was interesting getting into his head and really getting to the meat of why his character acted the way he did. He was probably the most well-developed of them all. Ciere was the only person that I had problems with. It was fun to see her use her illusion powers to sneak into places. However, I kind of hated her when it came to her interpersonal relationship. I find Alan as interesting as a piece of bread, so I wasn’t into whatever romance they had going on. Even given his importance to the world and the knowledge he had in his head, he honestly was super irrelevant in the story. He was just kind of there. Relationship with Alan aside, I also hated how Ciere treated Devon. I was still pissed by her actions at the end of ‘Illusive’ and she continued to be a horrible friend to him. I hated how she acted like Devon . It made no sense to get so mad at Devon for something that he didn’t know he was a part of.
Overall, this was good, but not as good as ‘Illusive’. I think the issue I had was that I missed that fun group dynamic they had in the first book. Instead of having the whole crew working on the same mission, everyone was scattered to different parts. Also, I feel like this left me with even more questions than the previous book. I want to know so badly what the whole deal is with Aristeus, Magnus, and Kit. It’s like I kept getting hints towards some bad history between those characters, but it was never clarified. I’d be into a third book as long as the plot was good and I finally got some answers.
December 14, 2015
Brilliant!!
Couldn't put this down either! This was much more awesome! Adored the adventures, thrilling action and all Immunes' abilities!
Oh, the subtle romance was really nice ^-^
Couldn't put this down either! This was much more awesome! Adored the adventures, thrilling action and all Immunes' abilities!
Oh, the subtle romance was really nice ^-^
August 16, 2015
This book actually surprised me in a good way. The writing was smooth, descriptions only helped to add to the imagery without being too wordy, and it had a fast pace. I usually don't like books with multiple points of view, but the author wrote in a way that made everything flow smoothly. I don't know if I was reading without much thinking, but there was a twist that actually caught me by surprise. Most often I can catch these before they are revealed, but this time I was caught off guard so good job Emily. You got me!
Strangely, I was more interested in the Ciere's friends than her and and Alan. The long hiatus between this book and the first might have made me lose interest in their connection. I just didn't feel that strong chemistry between the two. I really felt for Daniel, who has no control over his life and continually sacrifices himself for his loved ones, and for Devon, who struggles to find a place he belongs. I really missed Kit though. He doesn't have much of a role in this book, but I'm sure we'll see more of him in the next installment.
Although this novel wasn't so deep or heartfelt, I still enjoyed it mainly for the action and simplicity. If there were any plot holes or inconsistencies, I don't remember finding any. The author made it very easy to become invested in the story and its characters. I give this a solid 3.8.
Strangely, I was more interested in the Ciere's friends than her and and Alan. The long hiatus between this book and the first might have made me lose interest in their connection. I just didn't feel that strong chemistry between the two. I really felt for Daniel, who has no control over his life and continually sacrifices himself for his loved ones, and for Devon, who struggles to find a place he belongs. I really missed Kit though. He doesn't have much of a role in this book, but I'm sure we'll see more of him in the next installment.
Although this novel wasn't so deep or heartfelt, I still enjoyed it mainly for the action and simplicity. If there were any plot holes or inconsistencies, I don't remember finding any. The author made it very easy to become invested in the story and its characters. I give this a solid 3.8.
October 7, 2019
A rip roaring good time.
January 31, 2022
Loved reading this book, there was a lot going on, and I loved how it came together! I have hope that we'll get a 3rd book to wrap everything up, though!
September 16, 2018
Listen, I read the first book in high school and I liked it, I truly did. I was looking forward to the sequel and when I finally read it, it was fine. Honestly, fine. The pacing was a little fast but it worked with the story. I liked the world Lloyd-Jones built and I definitely liked the story. I grew to really dislike the main character, but it's told through multiple POVs so I managed to finish the story despite dreading every chapter about her.
The straw that broke the camel's back is one tiny thing that honestly got me beyond angry. It's so stupid and petty that it shouldn't discourage anyone from reading the book. In a total of four times, one of the characters is referred to as having "coppery" or "copper" skin. I don't know what that means. Instead of giving me a better picture of what this person looked like, I just got completely disengaged. After the third time she brought it up, I actually googled "copper skin" because maybe everyone knew what it was except for me. There is no solid conclusion. At the end of the day, it's probably some tanned white guy but if that's the case you do NOT refer to his skin as copper literally 4 times. There are some other problems I have with her descriptions of people, but this is my main one. The big issues. Why is it so important that he has "copper" skin when that doesn't help us visualize it at all or give an indications of his race or works into the story at all? Why bring it up? What does this mean? I'm at a lost and I'm still angry about this when will I know peace
The straw that broke the camel's back is one tiny thing that honestly got me beyond angry. It's so stupid and petty that it shouldn't discourage anyone from reading the book. In a total of four times, one of the characters is referred to as having "coppery" or "copper" skin. I don't know what that means. Instead of giving me a better picture of what this person looked like, I just got completely disengaged. After the third time she brought it up, I actually googled "copper skin" because maybe everyone knew what it was except for me. There is no solid conclusion. At the end of the day, it's probably some tanned white guy but if that's the case you do NOT refer to his skin as copper literally 4 times. There are some other problems I have with her descriptions of people, but this is my main one. The big issues. Why is it so important that he has "copper" skin when that doesn't help us visualize it at all or give an indications of his race or works into the story at all? Why bring it up? What does this mean? I'm at a lost and I'm still angry about this when will I know peace
December 26, 2018
ok. I really really enjoyed this book but a couple of things bothered me. the entire book I felt like I could not connect with the characters. like I would read Devon’s part and then Daniels and i thought it was the same person. I had to keep stopping and reminding myself who was who. that’s the second thing. ok hopefully this is not just me but did Daniel and Devon mix anyone up? like they sound similar and they both start with a D. I just could not keep track of who was who and it didn’t help that they BOTH work for the government. overall I thought this was a pretty good book, but I just could not keep engaged and connected with the plot and the characters.
Shelved as 'dnf'
September 13, 2019I sadly had to DNF this at about 30%
I was really hoping that I was gonna like this sequel because I did enjoy the first one enough to continue with the series. But I realized as I continued reading that I didn't care about any of the characters. Since I didn't care about them, I felt no motivation to continue reading.
Also, the writing isn't as awkward as it was in the first book, but it did feel a lot like "telling" with not much "showing".
I wish I could've finished this one, but I literally couldn't get myself to care about the characters or the story.
I was really hoping that I was gonna like this sequel because I did enjoy the first one enough to continue with the series. But I realized as I continued reading that I didn't care about any of the characters. Since I didn't care about them, I felt no motivation to continue reading.
Also, the writing isn't as awkward as it was in the first book, but it did feel a lot like "telling" with not much "showing".
I wish I could've finished this one, but I literally couldn't get myself to care about the characters or the story.
November 29, 2015
WHAT WHAT WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
I SWEAR WHEN I READ THIS LIKE SIX MONTHS AGO OR MORE THE ILLUSIVE TITLE WAS JUST ILLUSIVE NOT ILLUSIVE (ILLUSIVE, #1)
AND NOW AS I WAS CONTEMPLATING HOW ILLUSIVE WAS A STANDALONE (BECAUSE I SWEAR, I DIDN'T SEE ANYONE LABEL THIS AS A SERIES!!) IT ACTUALLY HAS A SEQUEL.
SOMEONE. HOLD. ME.
EMILY LLOYD-JONES, THANK YOU SO MUCH OH MY GOD I CAN'T I'M SO HAPPY THE COVER IS EVEN MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN THE FIRST ONE AHHHHHHHHHHHH
I SWEAR WHEN I READ THIS LIKE SIX MONTHS AGO OR MORE THE ILLUSIVE TITLE WAS JUST ILLUSIVE NOT ILLUSIVE (ILLUSIVE, #1)
AND NOW AS I WAS CONTEMPLATING HOW ILLUSIVE WAS A STANDALONE (BECAUSE I SWEAR, I DIDN'T SEE ANYONE LABEL THIS AS A SERIES!!) IT ACTUALLY HAS A SEQUEL.
SOMEONE. HOLD. ME.
EMILY LLOYD-JONES, THANK YOU SO MUCH OH MY GOD I CAN'T I'M SO HAPPY THE COVER IS EVEN MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN THE FIRST ONE AHHHHHHHHHHHH
May 24, 2016
Love this soooo much! This series is awesome and so much fun. I love the world, I love the super powers, I love the non-stop action. This series is just a win. I want more books in this series. Please don't say this is the end, or I will cry. Underrated series that needs to be known about. Just so great.
March 9, 2018
In the entertaining and thrilling second novel in the “Illusive” series, “Deceptive” Ciere Gilba and Alan Fiacre have joined the Gyr Syndicate under Brandt Guntram for six months to pay off her debt. But when of one of the team is killed and the Syndicate turns against Alan who’s found leaning over his body, Ciere begins a search for the real perpetrator of the crime, her suspicions growing that Guntram may be involved.
In parallel plots Daniel Burkhart working with FBI Agent Gervais and the UAI under Aristeus are investigating the multiple disappearances of vaccinated adults while Devon Lyre upset over Ciere’s abandonment and wanting to escape his father’s disappointment quickly accepts an internship with a law enforcement agency in Washington, DC. In a high-stakes game the criminals and government agents uncover clues linking Aditi Sens, an activist trying to repeal the Allegiant Act that requires anyone threatening American security with a blood test and to be tagged or detained by the military, converging on her reception at the Arata Suites in an expensive tourist district.
Set in a world where an experimental vaccine for a deadly virus left some Americans with supernatural abilities, fear and distrust have grown against the Immunes, giving rise to intolerance and government policies that ensure they are tagged and if deemed a threat are waylaid by the military or police agencies. In this atmosphere many Immunes survive by joining criminal organizations or government agencies like the FBI or UAI (Immune Only Intelligence Agency). Fast-paced and action-oriented the plot heats up not only with a murder that has Ciere searching for a killer, but Daniel and Devon have become involved in exposing a kidnapper who abducts Immunes. Intensity and suspense quickly escalate when Ciere not only confronts an Alberani assassin but the three reunite to expose a conspiracy.
Skillfully with twists and turns, surprising insight into agencies like the Gyr Syndicate and misaligned characters Emily Lloyd-Jones provides a heart-stopping, mesmerizing page-turner that keeps you on the edge of your seat. Yet amid all the violence, conspiracy and secrets, romance blossoms between Ciere and Alan, the teen whose purpose in life is to keep the formula for the Praevenir vaccine from falling into the wrong hands. Well-written and gripping as events unfold the story climaxes in a violent confrontation and shocking discoveries that leave you anticipating a third book.
Bringing the story to life are complex and unforgettable characters like Ciere Guba the audacious thief and illusionist who’s independent, clever, resourceful but irrational and impulsive at times. Alan Fiacre an eidos who holds the key to the coveted vaccine locked in his head is a survivor, who’s observant, optimistic, focused, smart and aloof. Devon Lyre expelled from school, a disappointment to his wealthy family and addicted to alcohol is ingenious, rebellious and a loner. Daniel Burkhart forced to join the UAI’s mission is capable, practical and protective who like Devon will have to choose a side if they’re to help Immunes like themselves.
I thoroughly enjoyed “Deceptive” rate it highly and look forward to the next book in the “Illusive” series.
In parallel plots Daniel Burkhart working with FBI Agent Gervais and the UAI under Aristeus are investigating the multiple disappearances of vaccinated adults while Devon Lyre upset over Ciere’s abandonment and wanting to escape his father’s disappointment quickly accepts an internship with a law enforcement agency in Washington, DC. In a high-stakes game the criminals and government agents uncover clues linking Aditi Sens, an activist trying to repeal the Allegiant Act that requires anyone threatening American security with a blood test and to be tagged or detained by the military, converging on her reception at the Arata Suites in an expensive tourist district.
Set in a world where an experimental vaccine for a deadly virus left some Americans with supernatural abilities, fear and distrust have grown against the Immunes, giving rise to intolerance and government policies that ensure they are tagged and if deemed a threat are waylaid by the military or police agencies. In this atmosphere many Immunes survive by joining criminal organizations or government agencies like the FBI or UAI (Immune Only Intelligence Agency). Fast-paced and action-oriented the plot heats up not only with a murder that has Ciere searching for a killer, but Daniel and Devon have become involved in exposing a kidnapper who abducts Immunes. Intensity and suspense quickly escalate when Ciere not only confronts an Alberani assassin but the three reunite to expose a conspiracy.
Skillfully with twists and turns, surprising insight into agencies like the Gyr Syndicate and misaligned characters Emily Lloyd-Jones provides a heart-stopping, mesmerizing page-turner that keeps you on the edge of your seat. Yet amid all the violence, conspiracy and secrets, romance blossoms between Ciere and Alan, the teen whose purpose in life is to keep the formula for the Praevenir vaccine from falling into the wrong hands. Well-written and gripping as events unfold the story climaxes in a violent confrontation and shocking discoveries that leave you anticipating a third book.
Bringing the story to life are complex and unforgettable characters like Ciere Guba the audacious thief and illusionist who’s independent, clever, resourceful but irrational and impulsive at times. Alan Fiacre an eidos who holds the key to the coveted vaccine locked in his head is a survivor, who’s observant, optimistic, focused, smart and aloof. Devon Lyre expelled from school, a disappointment to his wealthy family and addicted to alcohol is ingenious, rebellious and a loner. Daniel Burkhart forced to join the UAI’s mission is capable, practical and protective who like Devon will have to choose a side if they’re to help Immunes like themselves.
I thoroughly enjoyed “Deceptive” rate it highly and look forward to the next book in the “Illusive” series.
July 22, 2019
3.75 stars
Summary:
Deceptive is the sequel to Illusive, and follows Ciere, Daniel and Devon, each following different paths on their super-powered journey to solve a case of missing people.
Characters 4/5:
The characters are really strong in this. I particularly enjoy Ciere, she's a bit of a morally grey character and her growth in this was really fabulous. I did have a little bit of trouble right at the start telling Daniel and Devon's chapters apart, but they are in similar and complementary positions in the narrative, and their names both start with a D, so I think that was why. It became clearer after the first quarter of the book.
Plot 3.5/5:
There were a few moments I was a little confused about the plot, again mainly towards the start of this novel, and I think it was become some moments about characters reasoning and explanations for their actions were skimmed over. The actual plot I thought was well designed and the pace was super fast.
World-building 3.5/5:
A lot of the world-building happens in the first book in the series, so I feel like this wasn't as expansive and as strong as it could have been, however it does open up to a lot of nuance within the society and how different people are dealing with the emergence of superhuman powers.
Writing style 4/5:
Fast-paced and super engaging, I really enjoyed reading this. It's not flowery or anything fancy but its addictively readable. From memory, this one is significantly more fast paced that the first book, so if that's something that worried you about the first one, that's a bit different here. I felt connected to the characters and although there were a few moments of narrative confusion, I think that might have been because its so long since I read book 1, so take that with a grain of salt!
Summary:
Deceptive is the sequel to Illusive, and follows Ciere, Daniel and Devon, each following different paths on their super-powered journey to solve a case of missing people.
Characters 4/5:
The characters are really strong in this. I particularly enjoy Ciere, she's a bit of a morally grey character and her growth in this was really fabulous. I did have a little bit of trouble right at the start telling Daniel and Devon's chapters apart, but they are in similar and complementary positions in the narrative, and their names both start with a D, so I think that was why. It became clearer after the first quarter of the book.
Plot 3.5/5:
There were a few moments I was a little confused about the plot, again mainly towards the start of this novel, and I think it was become some moments about characters reasoning and explanations for their actions were skimmed over. The actual plot I thought was well designed and the pace was super fast.
World-building 3.5/5:
A lot of the world-building happens in the first book in the series, so I feel like this wasn't as expansive and as strong as it could have been, however it does open up to a lot of nuance within the society and how different people are dealing with the emergence of superhuman powers.
Writing style 4/5:
Fast-paced and super engaging, I really enjoyed reading this. It's not flowery or anything fancy but its addictively readable. From memory, this one is significantly more fast paced that the first book, so if that's something that worried you about the first one, that's a bit different here. I felt connected to the characters and although there were a few moments of narrative confusion, I think that might have been because its so long since I read book 1, so take that with a grain of salt!
April 26, 2020
The story of Ciere & co continues in this book. Again overall the setting and world building grow and even Alan develops something of a personality- sort of.
The flashbacks continue although this time they are a little more cluttered and random as the reader gets flashbacks from different characters POV sometimes of a scene that already occurred. Also they aren’t as well delineated so it’s a bit more of realizing the beginning or middle of a chapter is in fact a flashback and also trying to figure out when/where in time it takes place- some flashbacks are detailed about time/setting so are easier to figure out.
There are some minor flaws as Devon who is an eidos and therefore is supposed to have perfect recall doesn’t realize who the party is for until he gets there, even though he was told several chapters ago and the reader is left wondering why he acts like it’s the first he’s heard of it. His decision at the end is understandable, however his criticism of Ciere seems rather harsh considering he witnessed her being chased by someone with a gun though he didn’t understand the circumstances he’s been portrayed as being intelligent to put it together and it’s odd he doesn’t.
Also Magnus’ appearance to assist Ciere felt a little deus ex machina and no reason is ever really given for it.
The plot again is more open & reactive. Which works but there doesn’t seem to be any overarching plot. Gervais was a nice surprise and his characterization was well done. Quite a redeeming factor for the ending. There are still many unanswered questions so it seems the story will continue. Overall it was interesting with a few more flaws than the first book but overall works.
The flashbacks continue although this time they are a little more cluttered and random as the reader gets flashbacks from different characters POV sometimes of a scene that already occurred. Also they aren’t as well delineated so it’s a bit more of realizing the beginning or middle of a chapter is in fact a flashback and also trying to figure out when/where in time it takes place- some flashbacks are detailed about time/setting so are easier to figure out.
There are some minor flaws as Devon who is an eidos and therefore is supposed to have perfect recall doesn’t realize who the party is for until he gets there, even though he was told several chapters ago and the reader is left wondering why he acts like it’s the first he’s heard of it. His decision at the end is understandable, however his criticism of Ciere seems rather harsh considering he witnessed her being chased by someone with a gun though he didn’t understand the circumstances he’s been portrayed as being intelligent to put it together and it’s odd he doesn’t.
Also Magnus’ appearance to assist Ciere felt a little deus ex machina and no reason is ever really given for it.
The plot again is more open & reactive. Which works but there doesn’t seem to be any overarching plot. Gervais was a nice surprise and his characterization was well done. Quite a redeeming factor for the ending. There are still many unanswered questions so it seems the story will continue. Overall it was interesting with a few more flaws than the first book but overall works.
April 19, 2018
I liked this book more than the first one.
It did have some twists I figured out on my own , but it also had some really great twists I didn't see coming which was a great improvement in comparison to the first book.
But I'm pretty sad that this series apparently got axed because the ending prepared some new story lines, but so far there is no new book in sight. Which is really upsetting because besides the new story lines we also have some unanswered question from book 1 which I'm still so curious about.
It did have some twists I figured out on my own , but it also had some really great twists I didn't see coming which was a great improvement in comparison to the first book.
But I'm pretty sad that this series apparently got axed because the ending prepared some new story lines, but so far there is no new book in sight. Which is really upsetting because besides the new story lines we also have some unanswered question from book 1 which I'm still so curious about.
January 6, 2019
I really started out liking this series a lot. I liked the characters and the writing. The suspense and the development were great. But ultimately I feel like it ended with a lot of loose ends. It feels like there should be one more books still. I don’t know.
We never learn anything about the history between arterius, magnus and kit. What happens to aditi sen? Hell what even happens to the main characters. They go their separate ways but they all seem to making “plans” and what not for the future. I don’t know. Not that things need to be wrapped up in a neat little package. I just feel like there are too many unanswered questions. If there ever is a third book, I’d love to read it.
We never learn anything about the history between arterius, magnus and kit. What happens to aditi sen? Hell what even happens to the main characters. They go their separate ways but they all seem to making “plans” and what not for the future. I don’t know. Not that things need to be wrapped up in a neat little package. I just feel like there are too many unanswered questions. If there ever is a third book, I’d love to read it.
April 27, 2023
magnus and kit are FOR SURE husbands. i love them. gay rights.
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the political element of this particular dystopian society is very interesting, in its parallels to our real-life social circumstance. the many outlooks and approaches of illusive and deceptive’s political injustices is SO cool to read and experience, through each character. emily lloyd-jones nails this. it very much makes you think, and i thoroughly enjoy how the issues aren’t black and white right and wrong, but explored in the depths of their ambiguity.
i’m not sure if this counts as spoilers or not — i don’t think it does, but better safe than sorry.
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the political element of this particular dystopian society is very interesting, in its parallels to our real-life social circumstance. the many outlooks and approaches of illusive and deceptive’s political injustices is SO cool to read and experience, through each character. emily lloyd-jones nails this. it very much makes you think, and i thoroughly enjoy how the issues aren’t black and white right and wrong, but explored in the depths of their ambiguity.
i’m not sure if this counts as spoilers or not — i don’t think it does, but better safe than sorry.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 22, 2021
Having finished Illusive recently I knew I wanted to jump into the next book before events of the first book become too faded from my memory. I loved seeing what the characters have been up to in Deceptive!
What I Liked:
- the unpredictable plot
- how the separate storylines converged
- the development of each character arc
- seeing the full scope of Ciere's immunity
- different groups of found family
- changes in relationship- mostly between Ciere and Devon
- the complication of divided loyalty for Devon and Daniel
- lots of different action- gun fight, car chase, etc.
- the obvious feelings Ciere and Alan had for each other
The Not So Much:
- I understand it's not a focal point of the story but I still would've liked more in the romance department XD
- the story feels a little unfinished, particularly in the Kit/Magnus/Aristeus area
"There are two key elements to a good crime: timing and location." (p. 203)
"The key to any crime is to observe, to calculate habits and exploit them." (p. 256)
What I Liked:
- the unpredictable plot
- how the separate storylines converged
- the development of each character arc
- seeing the full scope of Ciere's immunity
- different groups of found family
- changes in relationship- mostly between Ciere and Devon
- the complication of divided loyalty for Devon and Daniel
- lots of different action- gun fight, car chase, etc.
- the obvious feelings Ciere and Alan had for each other
The Not So Much:
- I understand it's not a focal point of the story but I still would've liked more in the romance department XD
- the story feels a little unfinished, particularly in the Kit/Magnus/Aristeus area
"There are two key elements to a good crime: timing and location." (p. 203)
"The key to any crime is to observe, to calculate habits and exploit them." (p. 256)
January 31, 2022
Hmm. I have mixed feelings about this book. The first book was amazing; I enjoyed it so much. This book though—not as much. The action was thrilling and exciting. I think the only thing I didn't like much about this book is the ending. Just too many questions left unanswered. There's no closure and it felt unfinished. I was a wee bit disappointed. But still, I liked the story. Looking forward to more of her novels.
May 1, 2018
This was a fun, action packed conclusion to a great story, and I really want more! I quite enjoyed the world that was created and I think that the whole concept of Immunes was really cool. The characters were great and multi faceted. They had some great development, and I liked the different POVs we were given.
December 15, 2019
Such an interesting end to this story! I really enjoyed watching each of our characters grow from their collective experiences and how everything was intertwined and not necessarily what you thought or were lead to believe. I would love to have more of these characters and this world but I am satisfied with how everything wraps up and look forward to reading more work from this author.
July 25, 2018
Definitely not as good as the first book. I even began to dislike Alan because I felt like he was portrayed as self-centred in the way that all his focus was on himself and the formula. Even after all the huge sacrifices Ciere made for him, Alan still continued to focus on himself
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