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The First Argentines #4
Fate's Ransom
Betrayal, war, and the risks of loyalty collide in the epic conclusion of the First Argentines series by the Wall Street Journal bestselling author of Lady’s Ransom.
Ransom Barton has served three Argentine kings. The new successor to the throne is the ruthless Jon-Landon, a fallible strategist when it comes to war. After losing against the Occitanian armies, the king forces Ransom to bear the blame and removes him from the council. But Jon-Landon isn’t yet through with humbling the honorable knight of Ceredigion.
When a retaliatory battle succeeds, Jon-Landon invites Ransom back into his circle. Though Ransom’s Fountain magic is made stronger by his fealty, he’s once again forced to make a terrible choice. And this time, Ransom’s wife, Claire, and their sons could pay the price for Ransom’s loyalty.
But as tensions between Ceredigion and Occitania reignite and alliances at court begin to crumble, a desperate Jon-Landon discovers his only ally is the knight he betrayed. With the future of Kingfountain hanging in the balance, Ransom agrees to help. And as secret enemies reveal their endgame, Ransom knows that he may have to make the ultimate sacrifice for the survival of the Argentine dynasty.
Ransom Barton has served three Argentine kings. The new successor to the throne is the ruthless Jon-Landon, a fallible strategist when it comes to war. After losing against the Occitanian armies, the king forces Ransom to bear the blame and removes him from the council. But Jon-Landon isn’t yet through with humbling the honorable knight of Ceredigion.
When a retaliatory battle succeeds, Jon-Landon invites Ransom back into his circle. Though Ransom’s Fountain magic is made stronger by his fealty, he’s once again forced to make a terrible choice. And this time, Ransom’s wife, Claire, and their sons could pay the price for Ransom’s loyalty.
But as tensions between Ceredigion and Occitania reignite and alliances at court begin to crumble, a desperate Jon-Landon discovers his only ally is the knight he betrayed. With the future of Kingfountain hanging in the balance, Ransom agrees to help. And as secret enemies reveal their endgame, Ransom knows that he may have to make the ultimate sacrifice for the survival of the Argentine dynasty.
455 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 4, 2022
About the author
Jeff Wheeler
93 books4,918 followersWall Street Journal bestselling author Jeff Wheeler took an early retirement from his career at Intel in 2014 to write full-time. He is a husband, father of five, and a devout member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. Jeff lives in the Rocky Mountains.
Learn about Jeff’s many worlds at www.jeff-wheeler.com, or participate in one of his online writing classes through Writer’s Block (www.writersblock.biz).
Learn about Jeff’s many worlds at www.jeff-wheeler.com, or participate in one of his online writing classes through Writer’s Block (www.writersblock.biz).
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April 1, 2022
Ransom the hero started out well but later turned into this Gary sue who, for no logical reason, was "chosen" as the savior of a family of kings who were all fools.
I wish he'd allowed them to all die even at the risk of destroying their world. Now, that would have been a story that made sense. What an eejit.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 2, 2022
4 stars
You can read all of my reviews at Nerd Girl Loves Books.
This is the final book in an exciting, action-packed YA Fantasy series and does not disappoint. Jon-Landon has ascended to the throne and wears the hollow crown. His reign is as bad as Ransom thought it would be. The new King is petty and cruel and makes his hatred of Ransom clear to all. In fact, he goes out of his way to humiliate Ransom in an effort to get him to do something for which he can be deemed a traitor and thereby killed.
Despite wanting to lash out, Ransom takes everything the King dishes out, doing his duty and obeying the will of the Fountain, including sending his twin boys to Kingsfountain as hostages. Luckily the boys see it as an adventure and have a lot of fun exploring the castle and vying for the attention of the Princess. The Espion spy Claire watches over the two, easing some of the fear Ransom and Claire have for their safety.
Ransom and Claire are apart for most of the book, as Ransom races from one end of the kingdom to another fighting back enemies attacking the kingdom. His ultimate duty, to see that Jon-Landon's son ascends to the throne, is his sole goal. Will Ransom be able to save the Prince from his father's many enemies?
This is another great series set in the world of Kingsfountain. There are plenty of characters to love and hate. The main characters, and even some of the minor ones, are well formed and have full and complete story arcs. This author does a great job of tying up storylines and does not often leave loose ends hanging - unless it's on purpose. Despite this author being quite prolific, his books continue to be creative and enjoyable to read. I know I will never be disappointed when picking up his books.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from NetGalley and 47North. All opinions are my own.
You can read all of my reviews at Nerd Girl Loves Books.
This is the final book in an exciting, action-packed YA Fantasy series and does not disappoint. Jon-Landon has ascended to the throne and wears the hollow crown. His reign is as bad as Ransom thought it would be. The new King is petty and cruel and makes his hatred of Ransom clear to all. In fact, he goes out of his way to humiliate Ransom in an effort to get him to do something for which he can be deemed a traitor and thereby killed.
Despite wanting to lash out, Ransom takes everything the King dishes out, doing his duty and obeying the will of the Fountain, including sending his twin boys to Kingsfountain as hostages. Luckily the boys see it as an adventure and have a lot of fun exploring the castle and vying for the attention of the Princess. The Espion spy Claire watches over the two, easing some of the fear Ransom and Claire have for their safety.
Ransom and Claire are apart for most of the book, as Ransom races from one end of the kingdom to another fighting back enemies attacking the kingdom. His ultimate duty, to see that Jon-Landon's son ascends to the throne, is his sole goal. Will Ransom be able to save the Prince from his father's many enemies?
This is another great series set in the world of Kingsfountain. There are plenty of characters to love and hate. The main characters, and even some of the minor ones, are well formed and have full and complete story arcs. This author does a great job of tying up storylines and does not often leave loose ends hanging - unless it's on purpose. Despite this author being quite prolific, his books continue to be creative and enjoyable to read. I know I will never be disappointed when picking up his books.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from NetGalley and 47North. All opinions are my own.
December 4, 2021
It always amazes me how much I have grown to love this author. This is the last and FINAL installment (at least for now) of this series, but it is actually the latest in a much longer series that is based in the world of Kingfountain. This book is NOT a standalone book. You at least have to read the prior 3 books in the series to REALLY understand what is going on, but if you are REALLY wanting to get the full picture, you need to start at the beginning of the Kingfountain series. You will NOT be disappointed.
So, this book starts where the last book left off. We now have Jon-Landon ascending to the Hollow Crown and he does NOT like Ransom. Ransom is torn between trying to fulfill what he knows the Fountain has asked of him and trying to hold back the VERY NORMAL feelings of anger at the AWFUL and horrible treatment he is recieving (and publicly) from his new King. Anyway, there are summaries out there everywhere. Just know that this was so hard to read. I have grown to adore Ransom (and Claire). This book was a challenge because you just KNEW that things were not looking good and for some reason, it seems that Ransom is always the one that has to suffer. Hasn't this poor man had to suffer enough? Sorry, off on a tangent....
Even with the hard things, there were great things. Seeing his boys (the twins) made me smile every time they were on the page. The place where Mr. Wheeler excels is in the character relationships. I grew to LOVE Dearley, Dawson, Simon (of course) and absolutely loved Ransom and Claire's children. This book really showcases loyalty and honor, and the consequences for not bowing to public pressure and continuing to stay on the right path.
Did I cry? Yep, you better believe it. I think though, that the ending was done in a way that made the reader come away still feeling like this was a HEA. Typical HEA this was not, but I was okay with that.
Thank you to NetGalley for allowing me the opportunity to read this ARC. The opinions above are mine and mine alone.
So, this book starts where the last book left off. We now have Jon-Landon ascending to the Hollow Crown and he does NOT like Ransom. Ransom is torn between trying to fulfill what he knows the Fountain has asked of him and trying to hold back the VERY NORMAL feelings of anger at the AWFUL and horrible treatment he is recieving (and publicly) from his new King. Anyway, there are summaries out there everywhere. Just know that this was so hard to read. I have grown to adore Ransom (and Claire). This book was a challenge because you just KNEW that things were not looking good and for some reason, it seems that Ransom is always the one that has to suffer. Hasn't this poor man had to suffer enough? Sorry, off on a tangent....
Even with the hard things, there were great things. Seeing his boys (the twins) made me smile every time they were on the page. The place where Mr. Wheeler excels is in the character relationships. I grew to LOVE Dearley, Dawson, Simon (of course) and absolutely loved Ransom and Claire's children. This book really showcases loyalty and honor, and the consequences for not bowing to public pressure and continuing to stay on the right path.
Did I cry? Yep, you better believe it. I think though, that the ending was done in a way that made the reader come away still feeling like this was a HEA. Typical HEA this was not, but I was okay with that.
Thank you to NetGalley for allowing me the opportunity to read this ARC. The opinions above are mine and mine alone.
February 8, 2022
2.5 stars.
I was hoping this last book in the series would be an improvement over book three, but unfortunately, I didn't care for it. I liked this one the least out of the four books in this series, and it was mainly due to the way things end up for Ransom. That's all I'm going to say about the plot, because I don't want to spoil anything.
Sometimes I like Jeff Wheeler's story-telling a lot. At those times I can feel the struggles his characters are going through, as they try to make the right decisions, and deal with heartbreak and disappointments in their lives. Other times his protagonists come off as a little too perfect. I liked Ransom a lot as a character, but I feel like he was just a little too perfect at times, and that made him seem not as realistic. As for Claire, after reading book three, I was hoping that I would like her character again. She got on my nerves so badly in the last book, which is a shame, because she was a character that felt more real to me. Thankfully, she was back to being the Claire I knew and enjoyed reading about in books one and two, but her role was rather small here.
Overall, I don't like this series as much as Kingfountain. It's one of those take or leave it ones for me. I've also reached a point in my reading of fantasy that I'm very tired of the "fated to happen" trope.
Review also posted at Writings of a Reader.
I was hoping this last book in the series would be an improvement over book three, but unfortunately, I didn't care for it. I liked this one the least out of the four books in this series, and it was mainly due to the way things end up for Ransom. That's all I'm going to say about the plot, because I don't want to spoil anything.
Sometimes I like Jeff Wheeler's story-telling a lot. At those times I can feel the struggles his characters are going through, as they try to make the right decisions, and deal with heartbreak and disappointments in their lives. Other times his protagonists come off as a little too perfect. I liked Ransom a lot as a character, but I feel like he was just a little too perfect at times, and that made him seem not as realistic. As for Claire, after reading book three, I was hoping that I would like her character again. She got on my nerves so badly in the last book, which is a shame, because she was a character that felt more real to me. Thankfully, she was back to being the Claire I knew and enjoyed reading about in books one and two, but her role was rather small here.
Overall, I don't like this series as much as Kingfountain. It's one of those take or leave it ones for me. I've also reached a point in my reading of fantasy that I'm very tired of the "fated to happen" trope.
Review also posted at Writings of a Reader.
February 17, 2022
Can my review just be 30 crying faces? 😭 no? Darn
https://onereadingnurse.com/2022/02/1...
I was lucky enough to be invited to read Fate’s Ranson, the final installment of The First Argentines series as an ARC. While normally I would drop my TBR and jump on it, I knew what was coming … and I put this one off for a few weeks.
My apologies to the publisher but even in a better state of existence the end absolutely ruined me!! Ruined! Not ugly crying but more the silent streaming tears of ruination kind!
I will do the review without spoilers, although this is absolutely not a standalone and you need the first three books in order to read the ending.
...
The synopsis really says it all: Jon-Landon is an insufferable twat and his spy master is even worse. Ransoms pays the heaviest price as petulance and jealousy destroy the kingdom from the inside, while opportunistic kings attack the borders.
There is a little more magic in this book. The real history of the Wizr board is revealed with how this particular game began. There are miracles of the fountain to behold. Alix hints at having more abilities than anyone is aware of, and I really wish we had seen more of her and Estian’s motivations that what we learned at the end. (I wonder if maybe in reading the two books about Ankorette, we learn these poisoner secrets so that Alix only had to give a nod to it in a later book? I skipped them but am going to go back for sure).
There was so much intrigue, as in every book, although I felt like this was more about Jon-Landon cutting off his own arms than having a good reason to conquer his own allies. Ransom stayed loyal to the Fountain above all else. There were some parts that almost turned to dark fantasy, as in, children were murdered, graphic poisonings, etc, but even in the darkest times there was a way forward.
There was the typical dose of battles, strategy, reconciliation ,and heroism that I come to expect from these books. The “Dex Aie” chapter was pretty much everything. Ransom and Estian finally had their showdown, although I could have gone for an epic duel.
What else… oh yes, the family scenes. I wish Wheeler would do families in more of his books, I just loved seeing the twins causing mayhem with the princess. I think he’s got a strong sense of family and it shows in the pages, it surprised me that this isn’t something he has written before. The twins were somewhat of the comic relief in some otherwise terrible situations. I have theories about how they will grow up and be married and further the realm for sure.
My only question was – so obviously some years had passed in the beginning of the book, but I don’t think everything else aged consistently. Dappled would have been older too and probably not as strong and resilient as he used to be. Ransom’s kids didn’t seem to age appropriately either, either that or there weren’t really that many years that had passed.
Either way, let me close by giving Claire the spotlight – I think she deserved the protectorate position at the end, so much!! She was the most capable queen and saved the day so many times throughout the series. While the devastation at the end did absolutely ruin me, I couldn’t have hoped for a better outcome for Claire. I don’t know how I feel about the fact that she more or less converted to the belief of the Fountain, although again, the ending, the ending, the ending. I’m glad she affiliated herself with Constance and got to see the Deep Fathoms for herself.
All in all – yes definitely recommend these books for those seeking an exciting medieval fantasy series. I think they are great books for teens too, easy to follow plots and very clean content. I am interested in checking out the history and books that the series and Ransom character are based on. There was a knight named William Marshal and his service to four kings (the Plantagenet line, predecessors of the Tudors) was a real piece of history. There’s a fantastic author note about it all.
https://onereadingnurse.com/2022/02/1...
I was lucky enough to be invited to read Fate’s Ranson, the final installment of The First Argentines series as an ARC. While normally I would drop my TBR and jump on it, I knew what was coming … and I put this one off for a few weeks.
My apologies to the publisher but even in a better state of existence the end absolutely ruined me!! Ruined! Not ugly crying but more the silent streaming tears of ruination kind!
I will do the review without spoilers, although this is absolutely not a standalone and you need the first three books in order to read the ending.
...
The synopsis really says it all: Jon-Landon is an insufferable twat and his spy master is even worse. Ransoms pays the heaviest price as petulance and jealousy destroy the kingdom from the inside, while opportunistic kings attack the borders.
There is a little more magic in this book. The real history of the Wizr board is revealed with how this particular game began. There are miracles of the fountain to behold. Alix hints at having more abilities than anyone is aware of, and I really wish we had seen more of her and Estian’s motivations that what we learned at the end. (I wonder if maybe in reading the two books about Ankorette, we learn these poisoner secrets so that Alix only had to give a nod to it in a later book? I skipped them but am going to go back for sure).
There was so much intrigue, as in every book, although I felt like this was more about Jon-Landon cutting off his own arms than having a good reason to conquer his own allies. Ransom stayed loyal to the Fountain above all else. There were some parts that almost turned to dark fantasy, as in, children were murdered, graphic poisonings, etc, but even in the darkest times there was a way forward.
There was the typical dose of battles, strategy, reconciliation ,and heroism that I come to expect from these books. The “Dex Aie” chapter was pretty much everything. Ransom and Estian finally had their showdown, although I could have gone for an epic duel.
What else… oh yes, the family scenes. I wish Wheeler would do families in more of his books, I just loved seeing the twins causing mayhem with the princess. I think he’s got a strong sense of family and it shows in the pages, it surprised me that this isn’t something he has written before. The twins were somewhat of the comic relief in some otherwise terrible situations. I have theories about how they will grow up and be married and further the realm for sure.
My only question was – so obviously some years had passed in the beginning of the book, but I don’t think everything else aged consistently. Dappled would have been older too and probably not as strong and resilient as he used to be. Ransom’s kids didn’t seem to age appropriately either, either that or there weren’t really that many years that had passed.
Either way, let me close by giving Claire the spotlight – I think she deserved the protectorate position at the end, so much!! She was the most capable queen and saved the day so many times throughout the series. While the devastation at the end did absolutely ruin me, I couldn’t have hoped for a better outcome for Claire. I don’t know how I feel about the fact that she more or less converted to the belief of the Fountain, although again, the ending, the ending, the ending. I’m glad she affiliated herself with Constance and got to see the Deep Fathoms for herself.
All in all – yes definitely recommend these books for those seeking an exciting medieval fantasy series. I think they are great books for teens too, easy to follow plots and very clean content. I am interested in checking out the history and books that the series and Ransom character are based on. There was a knight named William Marshal and his service to four kings (the Plantagenet line, predecessors of the Tudors) was a real piece of history. There’s a fantastic author note about it all.
January 6, 2022
Tears and More Tears
This is only the second book that I have ever read that brought me to copious tears even as I write this. Be sure to read the author's note at the end of the book as it will help you understand the final chapters. This series was so worth the time to read; our current world could use a man like Ransom Barton.
This is only the second book that I have ever read that brought me to copious tears even as I write this. Be sure to read the author's note at the end of the book as it will help you understand the final chapters. This series was so worth the time to read; our current world could use a man like Ransom Barton.
February 1, 2022
4.5/5.0
A beautifully touching finale to another great series by this incredibly gifted author. It is full of action, intrigue, betrayals and of course love, commitment, loyalty, honor and integrity. All juxtaposed to highlight both the best and worst of human nature.
In this story, Ransom is once again required to serve a new king. Only this time it is the incredibly self-serving, petty and corrupt Argentine of all, Jon-Landon. This pits Ransom’s determination to honor his oath to the king against his deeply held beliefs of right and wrong. It is incredibly hard to even read at times because the King is just as determined to destroy Ransom’s reputation and find a way to be rid of him. The story is both heartrending and hopeful, as we see Ransom rise repeatedly.
One of the things I love most about this series is that it is so very real. Although considered fantasy - and for good reason, as there is a bit of magic that weaves throughout - it is more a deep and riveting historical epic. So much of the events, the world and wars, and the relationships are drawn directly from our own history. We, as readers, are able to really understand how hard it was for families in the age of knights and kings to be pulled from one fickle ruler to another and have their very livelihoods depend upon it. We also see the struggle those fighting have. It is very real and riveting to read.
My only complaint in the entire book and series is the ending. While it fits and is understandable, I hated it! Although it does end in peace and closure, I guess the romantic in me always dreams of that happily ever after even though it is not always realistic.
A beautifully touching finale to another great series by this incredibly gifted author. It is full of action, intrigue, betrayals and of course love, commitment, loyalty, honor and integrity. All juxtaposed to highlight both the best and worst of human nature.
In this story, Ransom is once again required to serve a new king. Only this time it is the incredibly self-serving, petty and corrupt Argentine of all, Jon-Landon. This pits Ransom’s determination to honor his oath to the king against his deeply held beliefs of right and wrong. It is incredibly hard to even read at times because the King is just as determined to destroy Ransom’s reputation and find a way to be rid of him. The story is both heartrending and hopeful, as we see Ransom rise repeatedly.
One of the things I love most about this series is that it is so very real. Although considered fantasy - and for good reason, as there is a bit of magic that weaves throughout - it is more a deep and riveting historical epic. So much of the events, the world and wars, and the relationships are drawn directly from our own history. We, as readers, are able to really understand how hard it was for families in the age of knights and kings to be pulled from one fickle ruler to another and have their very livelihoods depend upon it. We also see the struggle those fighting have. It is very real and riveting to read.
My only complaint in the entire book and series is the ending. While it fits and is understandable, I hated it! Although it does end in peace and closure, I guess the romantic in me always dreams of that happily ever after even though it is not always realistic.
January 29, 2022
Ugh! Wow. I have strong feelings about this one, both good and bad...
I've invested a lot of time in Ransom, the hero of this tale, since this is the fourth and final book. On one hand, all of Wheelers' stories tend to feel quite similar, as do his heroes... but that's kind of what keeps me coming back. He's one of VERY few modern authors who writes real heroes anymore. His main characters have true integrity based upon something larger and more important than themselves and their own desires. Lord Ransom serves The Fountain (God), and because of his loyalty to do the Fountain's bidding, he also stands by his oath to serve the Argentine line, kings who wear the Hollow Crown--no matter what. This is THE defining trait which drives Ransom's every decision. And it's tested throughout this entire story.
This last installment opens with the death of the previous king at the hands of the almost all-powerful poisoner, Alex. With his dying breath, the Argentine king told Ransom that he wanted his brother, Jon-Landon, to be his successor. Unfortunately, Jon-Landon is evil, and Ransom and everyone else knows it. But, because Ransom has vowed to serve the Argentines and that is his king's dying wish, he makes the king's choice known--and feels the Fountain's approval for it. The Hollow Crown goes to Jon-Landon, who turns out to be every bit as capricious, selfish, and wicked as everyone anticipated. He also envies Ransom, and sets him up for failure at every turn, tempting him into betrayal. But the Fountain makes it clear to Ransom that he must continue to serve Jon-Landon--not for his own sake, but for that of his son Devon. Devon must be the next king, and if they depose Jon-Landon, the entire kingdom will fall.
I so appreciated this higher perspective of what was going on in the action of the story, because it told me exactly what I could expect (in part because I've read so many of Wheeler's stories now). I knew Ransom would be sorely tempted, but would stand firm and maintain his integrity, no matter the cost. I knew that because of it, even though it would look like his loyalty continued to enable a wicked regime, the Fountain saw more than he did, and his faithful service would turn out to be the only possible way forward. All Ransom had to go on was his trust in the Fountain, yet the reader knows that his trust is well-placed. I also anticipated that Wheeler would redeem even Jon-Landon: that Ransom's goodness would prick his conscience, win his affection, and ultimately change him into a better man by the end. I was not disappointed in this.
But. BUT! About 3/4 through the book, the foreshadowing of a sad ending for Ransom started to come fast and furious. I hate sad endings, so I started to emotionally detach on purpose, but I still had to finish it (I'd come this far, after all). Then I thought, the foreshadowing is SO thick, perhaps it'll be thwarted after all? Perhaps Wheeler is just setting us up to expect one thing, and then there will be a sudden loophole that will make everything all right? Maybe???
Nope.
I knocked off a star for the emotional trauma.
I've invested a lot of time in Ransom, the hero of this tale, since this is the fourth and final book. On one hand, all of Wheelers' stories tend to feel quite similar, as do his heroes... but that's kind of what keeps me coming back. He's one of VERY few modern authors who writes real heroes anymore. His main characters have true integrity based upon something larger and more important than themselves and their own desires. Lord Ransom serves The Fountain (God), and because of his loyalty to do the Fountain's bidding, he also stands by his oath to serve the Argentine line, kings who wear the Hollow Crown--no matter what. This is THE defining trait which drives Ransom's every decision. And it's tested throughout this entire story.
This last installment opens with the death of the previous king at the hands of the almost all-powerful poisoner, Alex. With his dying breath, the Argentine king told Ransom that he wanted his brother, Jon-Landon, to be his successor. Unfortunately, Jon-Landon is evil, and Ransom and everyone else knows it. But, because Ransom has vowed to serve the Argentines and that is his king's dying wish, he makes the king's choice known--and feels the Fountain's approval for it. The Hollow Crown goes to Jon-Landon, who turns out to be every bit as capricious, selfish, and wicked as everyone anticipated. He also envies Ransom, and sets him up for failure at every turn, tempting him into betrayal. But the Fountain makes it clear to Ransom that he must continue to serve Jon-Landon--not for his own sake, but for that of his son Devon. Devon must be the next king, and if they depose Jon-Landon, the entire kingdom will fall.
I so appreciated this higher perspective of what was going on in the action of the story, because it told me exactly what I could expect (in part because I've read so many of Wheeler's stories now). I knew Ransom would be sorely tempted, but would stand firm and maintain his integrity, no matter the cost. I knew that because of it, even though it would look like his loyalty continued to enable a wicked regime, the Fountain saw more than he did, and his faithful service would turn out to be the only possible way forward. All Ransom had to go on was his trust in the Fountain, yet the reader knows that his trust is well-placed. I also anticipated that Wheeler would redeem even Jon-Landon: that Ransom's goodness would prick his conscience, win his affection, and ultimately change him into a better man by the end. I was not disappointed in this.
But. BUT! About 3/4 through the book, the foreshadowing of a sad ending for Ransom started to come fast and furious. I hate sad endings, so I started to emotionally detach on purpose, but I still had to finish it (I'd come this far, after all). Then I thought, the foreshadowing is SO thick, perhaps it'll be thwarted after all? Perhaps Wheeler is just setting us up to expect one thing, and then there will be a sudden loophole that will make everything all right? Maybe???
Nope.
I knocked off a star for the emotional trauma.
January 20, 2022
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Kate Rudd puts in another fantastic job narrating the story. Her voices and expressions are what helps make this such a fantastic series to read. She set off a whirlwind of emotions by her tone and the ache in her voice when she read many emotional lines making me ugly cry. Jeff Wheeler does such a tremendous job building his characters and this beautiful world that he’s created in this amazing world. This is considered YA, but don’t let that throw you off, because to me this is just clean adult sword & sorcery, historical fantasy.
“The scion of King Andrew will be reborn through an heir of the Argentines. They will try to kill him. You are all that stands in the way”
I’ve loved this series since the first book I read, which was Storm Glass of the Harbinger series. So this breaks my heart to say that it looks as if the world of Kingfountain is finally at an end. But if this series is going to end, this was a perfect way to end the series.
This is a tragic story of courage, faith and redemption led by our favorite lionhearted hero, Ransom as he does everything he can to save Ceredigion and the Argentine line. This story will push you to the limits of your emotions of animosity, happiness and disparity, it will rip your heart out of your chest. As I stated above, I ugly cried, not just teared up a little, but it actually got me to legitimately ugly cry.
“Many are called by the Fountain. But
few choose to heed the call because the
road is never easy.”
Thank you Jeff Wheeler, for sending me on this amazing journey. I do hope that this is not yet complete, but if it is, you ended it in a spectacular fashion. Dex aie!
This is the final installment of the Kingfountain world, for a total of 20 books + novellas… at least for now? You can read & listen to every single book for FREE if you are a Kindle Unlimited subscriber.
Kate Rudd puts in another fantastic job narrating the story. Her voices and expressions are what helps make this such a fantastic series to read. She set off a whirlwind of emotions by her tone and the ache in her voice when she read many emotional lines making me ugly cry. Jeff Wheeler does such a tremendous job building his characters and this beautiful world that he’s created in this amazing world. This is considered YA, but don’t let that throw you off, because to me this is just clean adult sword & sorcery, historical fantasy.
“The scion of King Andrew will be reborn through an heir of the Argentines. They will try to kill him. You are all that stands in the way”
I’ve loved this series since the first book I read, which was Storm Glass of the Harbinger series. So this breaks my heart to say that it looks as if the world of Kingfountain is finally at an end. But if this series is going to end, this was a perfect way to end the series.
This is a tragic story of courage, faith and redemption led by our favorite lionhearted hero, Ransom as he does everything he can to save Ceredigion and the Argentine line. This story will push you to the limits of your emotions of animosity, happiness and disparity, it will rip your heart out of your chest. As I stated above, I ugly cried, not just teared up a little, but it actually got me to legitimately ugly cry.
“Many are called by the Fountain. But
few choose to heed the call because the
road is never easy.”
Thank you Jeff Wheeler, for sending me on this amazing journey. I do hope that this is not yet complete, but if it is, you ended it in a spectacular fashion. Dex aie!
March 3, 2024
Enjoyable series.
December 19, 2021
The final journey for our loyal hero Ransom Barton. This is a spoiler free review but you may need to have some tissues handy is all I'm going to say. The tale picks up as King Benedict lies wounded and Ransom fights to regain his home Josselin castle. Events lead to the loss of the Wizr board and the ascendancy of Jon Landon to the throne, who is influenced by others into some very poor decisions. The various threads that have been laid are all pulled back together, including Contances' son Drew, Alix the poisoner and of course with Ransom's main antagonist, Estian. Through the friendships gained, his marriage to Claire and his relationships with his children, all the losses he sustained throughout this story, you understand that the end of the journey for Ransom would be quite bittersweet. Overall, this is a strong finish to this series and I enjoyed each of the books. Learning a little about the life of knight William Marshall, who Ransom is based on, certainly adds a lot to the enjoyment of Ransom's tale through all of the stories.
Thanks to 47North and Netgalley for the ARC.
Thanks to 47North and Netgalley for the ARC.
July 10, 2022
8/10
This was a great change of pace from the first three. I really enjoyed the tension of his loyalty being tested. Also, the conclusion was amazing, and I had to choke back my tears while I was reading it since I was in public.
The only negatives I have are the action being minimal in this entry and also the fact that this series is supposed to be supplemental to the author’s other works. At the end, I finally started noticing that a lot of the specific content is explained much more in other books. Since I haven’t read the other series, the references and easter eggs lost their weight for me.
Now that I am done with this series, I am very excited to read the other books! I love the universe Wheeler has set up here and am excited to read more:)
This was a great change of pace from the first three. I really enjoyed the tension of his loyalty being tested. Also, the conclusion was amazing, and I had to choke back my tears while I was reading it since I was in public.
The only negatives I have are the action being minimal in this entry and also the fact that this series is supposed to be supplemental to the author’s other works. At the end, I finally started noticing that a lot of the specific content is explained much more in other books. Since I haven’t read the other series, the references and easter eggs lost their weight for me.
Now that I am done with this series, I am very excited to read the other books! I love the universe Wheeler has set up here and am excited to read more:)
January 4, 2022
I have grown so attached to this universe. I always wait for the newest entry so anxiously and am never disappointed! Fate's Ransom is the final in a series of four books about a warrior who gains power from showing loyalty to his king, but in this entry he finds that he serves a king who doesn't deserve that loyalty. Ransom Barton faces conflicts that test his very nature. The last installment in the series left several plot threads unresolved, and Fate's Ransom ties them up neatly. Legault's Claire deMurrow is one of my favorite characters in the series, and she really gets a chance to shine in this final entry. There is no cliffhanger, the story is resolved in a satisfying way, but I do hope that Wheeler is not done with the Kingfountain universe. I enjoy his other novels very much, but Kingfountain is really something special.
January 9, 2022
I finished this final book in the series in 2 days… could not stop reading it. What an emotional roller coaster. I appreciate the twists and turns, the loyal knights, and the fountain magic… I also appreciate the message of sacrifice, greatest love of all. The end of the book going to the deep fathoms made me not like the ending so much. But I still loved the whole journey, and following Ransom’s life through these 4 books has been a beautiful story to watch unfold. Thank you Jeff Wheeler.
May 25, 2024
3.5
Ransom is a Sigma boor who always does the “right” thing and abandons his family to save a selfish dynasty of kings. Nuf said. I really liked this series but got very tired of this predictable character and was frustrated w the end of the book.
Ransom is a Sigma boor who always does the “right” thing and abandons his family to save a selfish dynasty of kings. Nuf said. I really liked this series but got very tired of this predictable character and was frustrated w the end of the book.
September 3, 2022
Ransom's story is poignant. He chooses honor even in the face of humiliating unfairness.
Wheeler's women aren't damsels in distress, either. They are how I picture actual medieval women.
Wheeler's world's always draw me in to the point that I can't wait to get back to the story. It's time to re-read the Kingfountain series!
Wheeler's women aren't damsels in distress, either. They are how I picture actual medieval women.
Wheeler's world's always draw me in to the point that I can't wait to get back to the story. It's time to re-read the Kingfountain series!
July 13, 2024
Great end to a great series. Highly recommend.
December 15, 2021
There's always a temptation as a reader, to glance outside the four corners of the book, and use that knowledge to predict the outcome. Having read al of Jeff Wheeler's other books, I knew how this had to end, if not how each character's story ended. and when the big battle set itself up, the question finally posed stark and immediate to Ransom, there was no question what his answer would be. Yet almost 25% of the book remained???
In spite of that, Wheeler maintained a level of tension commensurate with an epic last battle for yes, almost a full quarter of the book! Hands down, best book in the series - even if I still would like to read the story of the Ceredigion's Poisoner. We know through glimpses over the story, much of her background, her motivations, the choices which drove her - in many ways, I think she was more fully realized than Claire. I won't give away her story here, or hint at any redemption arc, but I would enjoy reading more of her story from her viewpoint. Perhaps in a short story or two? As villian, she was very human, in scene we could empathize, or at least understand, her point of view. Perhaps Jeff's most successful villian to date.
I admit that it took me two days to read this, I plead exhaustion, not any measure od disinterest, and gladly gave up many hours sleep in which to do so. In my view, the strongest book of the First Argentine series.
and yes - full disclosure - I did recieve a free digital copy via NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review. As my reivewws of some other books I've recieved via NetGalley should make clear, or my Goodreads shelf (I have a custom status, "Returned as Unreadable" for some books I've checked out) that's not a promise I take lightly.
In spite of that, Wheeler maintained a level of tension commensurate with an epic last battle for yes, almost a full quarter of the book! Hands down, best book in the series - even if I still would like to read the story of the Ceredigion's Poisoner. We know through glimpses over the story, much of her background, her motivations, the choices which drove her - in many ways, I think she was more fully realized than Claire. I won't give away her story here, or hint at any redemption arc, but I would enjoy reading more of her story from her viewpoint. Perhaps in a short story or two? As villian, she was very human, in scene we could empathize, or at least understand, her point of view. Perhaps Jeff's most successful villian to date.
I admit that it took me two days to read this, I plead exhaustion, not any measure od disinterest, and gladly gave up many hours sleep in which to do so. In my view, the strongest book of the First Argentine series.
and yes - full disclosure - I did recieve a free digital copy via NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review. As my reivewws of some other books I've recieved via NetGalley should make clear, or my Goodreads shelf (I have a custom status, "Returned as Unreadable" for some books I've checked out) that's not a promise I take lightly.
February 20, 2024
These Jeff Wheeler books are consistently great. He is an excellent storyteller. I think I've read about 20 of these books through various series. I love how all the series (Kingfountain, Argentines, Harbinger, Muirwood, and others) all link together. They are all terrific. You can start anywhere and get the entire link. I SUPER recommend this author and his books.
February 7, 2022
I really liked it. The bittersweet ending made it feel more real, somehow.
November 15, 2021
Thank you to the publishers, author and NetGalley for the free copy of this book.
It doesn't matter how many books I have waiting to be read, if a Jeff Wheeler book becomes available it immediately jumps to the top of my list! It almost physically pained me to wait until I finish the book I was currently reading so I could start this. I can't say enough how much I LOVE anything he writes, and yet again I was not disappointed. Everything about this- the world building, the characters, the way scenes are written with just enough detail to picture it perfectly- is top notch. I can't get enough. I had about 20 minutes left and was sneaking glimpses here and there while at work, trying not to cry happy/sad tears at the ending.
It doesn't matter how many books I have waiting to be read, if a Jeff Wheeler book becomes available it immediately jumps to the top of my list! It almost physically pained me to wait until I finish the book I was currently reading so I could start this. I can't say enough how much I LOVE anything he writes, and yet again I was not disappointed. Everything about this- the world building, the characters, the way scenes are written with just enough detail to picture it perfectly- is top notch. I can't get enough. I had about 20 minutes left and was sneaking glimpses here and there while at work, trying not to cry happy/sad tears at the ending.
April 28, 2022
A tragedy
I feel like Jeff Wheeler needs some new inspiration. I have read and listened to everything that he has written. A couple of times. I found this story to be very disappointing. Another tale of a faithful, loyal, and obedient man. He receives nothing but abuse, mistreatment, and accusation from those he serves. He gives and gives, only to be rewarded with death in the end. There were parts that I enjoyed. Overall, the story was exciting, fast paced, full of adventure. But all of the heartbreak became tedious. By the end of the last book I found myself wondering over and over again if Ransom would ever receive anything positive in his life. He does not. His life was one of tragedy and heartbreak. Yes, he had his salvation in the deep fathoms after his death. But his life story was horrible situation after horrible situation, being kept away from his wife and children to serve the whims of men that did not appreciate him. He was also faithful to the “fountain“ and it’s designs on him. More and more the “fountain/medium/magic system” seems quite capricious.
I feel like Jeff Wheeler needs some new inspiration. I have read and listened to everything that he has written. A couple of times. I found this story to be very disappointing. Another tale of a faithful, loyal, and obedient man. He receives nothing but abuse, mistreatment, and accusation from those he serves. He gives and gives, only to be rewarded with death in the end. There were parts that I enjoyed. Overall, the story was exciting, fast paced, full of adventure. But all of the heartbreak became tedious. By the end of the last book I found myself wondering over and over again if Ransom would ever receive anything positive in his life. He does not. His life was one of tragedy and heartbreak. Yes, he had his salvation in the deep fathoms after his death. But his life story was horrible situation after horrible situation, being kept away from his wife and children to serve the whims of men that did not appreciate him. He was also faithful to the “fountain“ and it’s designs on him. More and more the “fountain/medium/magic system” seems quite capricious.
January 31, 2022
I was very disappointed with this book. It just didn’t ring true to me. The whole business with Jon Landon’s treatment of Ransom made no sense. It felt like a excuse to perpetuate the cycle of Ransom’s unjust treatment. I can think of a number of different directions this book could of gone that would have been better. Seems like Wheeler’s imagination took a day off.
The first two books in the series were outstanding. Book three came down a notch and I had high hopes for this last installment. Instead, it was sub par.
Wheeler’s series always seem to get better with each book. Not so in this case. I want a re-write !!!!
The first two books in the series were outstanding. Book three came down a notch and I had high hopes for this last installment. Instead, it was sub par.
Wheeler’s series always seem to get better with each book. Not so in this case. I want a re-write !!!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 15, 2022
Got bored.
December 17, 2021
I was given a free copy of Fate’s Ransom by Jeff Wheeler (author), 47North (publisher) and Net Galley in exchange for an honest review. Fate’s Ransom is the fourth and final novel in the First Argetines series and will be published on January 4, 2021. Knight’s Ransom, Warrior’s Ransom, and Lady’s Ransom are the first three books in the series.
I did not read Knight’s Ransom, but I read Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom.
This review will be spoiler free.
I would characterize Fate’s Ransom as high fantasy featuring knights, kings, court intrigue, family drama, and magic against a backdrop of war and possibly a coup. I characterized Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom the same.
The setting of the story in what appears to be medieval European kingdoms at war with noble families choosing sides.
The magic system is limited to the main character and one of the antagonists, and it seems the ability to use magic is innate.
Fate’s Ransom has one main character (same as in Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom) who is knight and is virtuous, kind, loyal, honest, reliable, and nearly infallible. The added layer to the character of the main character is his wife is a featured as a significant minor character. The main character is three-dimensional and very engaging. As Mr. Wheeler did in both the second and third novels, he does a commendable job in fleshing out several of the side characters that interact with the main character. Each of these characters exhibit a different attribute or trait that the main character possesses but still and unique. More importantly, each of these side characters has his or her own character arc and add something to overall story.
Unfortunately, as I noted in both the second and third novels in the series, I thought the antagonists are flat and one-dimensional in Lady’s Ransom. I would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler wrote some of this story from their perspectives to get a better idea as to their motivations and reasons for doing what they are doing.
On a more positive note, I really enjoyed the letters of the main character’s wife at the beginning of each chapter. I think it took me until reading this story in the series that I understood why one of her letters is at the beginning of each chapter by setting the mood and tone of each chapter.
Additionally, the pacing of the story is at a steady clip from start to finish without any dead spots.
I would recommend Fate’s Ransom and the entire First Argetines series to readers who like fantasy stories featuring knights, warring within royal families, some political intrigue, and told in a straight-forward manner.
I rate Lady’s Ransom 4 stars.
I would like to thank Jeff Wheeler, 47North, and Netgalley for the free ARC.
I did not read Knight’s Ransom, but I read Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom.
This review will be spoiler free.
I would characterize Fate’s Ransom as high fantasy featuring knights, kings, court intrigue, family drama, and magic against a backdrop of war and possibly a coup. I characterized Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom the same.
The setting of the story in what appears to be medieval European kingdoms at war with noble families choosing sides.
The magic system is limited to the main character and one of the antagonists, and it seems the ability to use magic is innate.
Fate’s Ransom has one main character (same as in Warrior’s Ransom and Lady’s Ransom) who is knight and is virtuous, kind, loyal, honest, reliable, and nearly infallible. The added layer to the character of the main character is his wife is a featured as a significant minor character. The main character is three-dimensional and very engaging. As Mr. Wheeler did in both the second and third novels, he does a commendable job in fleshing out several of the side characters that interact with the main character. Each of these characters exhibit a different attribute or trait that the main character possesses but still and unique. More importantly, each of these side characters has his or her own character arc and add something to overall story.
Unfortunately, as I noted in both the second and third novels in the series, I thought the antagonists are flat and one-dimensional in Lady’s Ransom. I would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler wrote some of this story from their perspectives to get a better idea as to their motivations and reasons for doing what they are doing.
On a more positive note, I really enjoyed the letters of the main character’s wife at the beginning of each chapter. I think it took me until reading this story in the series that I understood why one of her letters is at the beginning of each chapter by setting the mood and tone of each chapter.
Additionally, the pacing of the story is at a steady clip from start to finish without any dead spots.
I would recommend Fate’s Ransom and the entire First Argetines series to readers who like fantasy stories featuring knights, warring within royal families, some political intrigue, and told in a straight-forward manner.
I rate Lady’s Ransom 4 stars.
I would like to thank Jeff Wheeler, 47North, and Netgalley for the free ARC.
September 3, 2022
The Argentine series is an interesting series that has a realistic depiction of medieval intrigues and politics, with a tinge of mysticism. In some ways it is comparable to the Songs of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) series, but in others, they differ a lot.
The similarities are that both series have a realistic background of medieval alternate Europe, with feudal kingdoms conflicting with one another and the characters being thrown around as chess pieces. There’s also quite a lot of warfare, with siege and lancing and all the things knights do to one another.
The differences are more pronounced where in this series, the story follows the story of one character only. Although occasional views from other characters are offered, the story focused mainly on one character, the knight called Ransom. The character development is paced quite well enough that the emotions and challenges really brought the reader along. However these come at a compromise, where other characters seemed to be underdeveloped. For example one of the bad guys, somehow changed his ways and became more matured after a few years. It was never explained how or why he changed, and I guess that does happen in real life, but the story feels a bit incomplete somehow. On another end, if the story is divulged like the Songs of Ice and Fire, this series might end up a bit too long.
Another stark different in this series is the character has such a strong sense of justice and hold his virtues very dearly, something that is rarely found in the Songs of Ice and Fire. Still, the story manage to blend it well because it does show moments where Ransom has some doubts or has fleeting evil ‘thoughts’. It still leaves you feeling a bit frustrated though when the villains or circumstances threw our hero around. The writer however clearly wants the sweet taste of virtue to be more pronounced when the happy endings are presented at the end. Whether you would find it cynical or inspiring, is another point. I do feel both of them as I read.
Overall I think the book is a worthwhile read, as the story is laid well and well researched, with the battles being based/inspired on real ones and the routines and life in the dark ages very well thought out. The language is slightly hard without detracting the reading speed. The book is also mostly ‘clean’, without any sexual scenes. The goody-good tone might feel a bit off to some but otherwise still a recommended read.
The similarities are that both series have a realistic background of medieval alternate Europe, with feudal kingdoms conflicting with one another and the characters being thrown around as chess pieces. There’s also quite a lot of warfare, with siege and lancing and all the things knights do to one another.
The differences are more pronounced where in this series, the story follows the story of one character only. Although occasional views from other characters are offered, the story focused mainly on one character, the knight called Ransom. The character development is paced quite well enough that the emotions and challenges really brought the reader along. However these come at a compromise, where other characters seemed to be underdeveloped. For example one of the bad guys, somehow changed his ways and became more matured after a few years. It was never explained how or why he changed, and I guess that does happen in real life, but the story feels a bit incomplete somehow. On another end, if the story is divulged like the Songs of Ice and Fire, this series might end up a bit too long.
Another stark different in this series is the character has such a strong sense of justice and hold his virtues very dearly, something that is rarely found in the Songs of Ice and Fire. Still, the story manage to blend it well because it does show moments where Ransom has some doubts or has fleeting evil ‘thoughts’. It still leaves you feeling a bit frustrated though when the villains or circumstances threw our hero around. The writer however clearly wants the sweet taste of virtue to be more pronounced when the happy endings are presented at the end. Whether you would find it cynical or inspiring, is another point. I do feel both of them as I read.
Overall I think the book is a worthwhile read, as the story is laid well and well researched, with the battles being based/inspired on real ones and the routines and life in the dark ages very well thought out. The language is slightly hard without detracting the reading speed. The book is also mostly ‘clean’, without any sexual scenes. The goody-good tone might feel a bit off to some but otherwise still a recommended read.
December 22, 2021
Anything by Jeff Wheeler is an automatic read for me. He is an amazing author and has crafted multiple series that are subtly interconnected. Fate’s Ransom is the 4th (and final) installment in the First Argentine’s series. This book, like all the others in the series, follows the tale of Ransom Barton who is a knight (among other things) sworn to protect the King and Argentine line.
This story takes place in a fantasy world that is similar to medieval Europe. There are castles, knights, tournaments, nobles, and warring kingdoms. There is also a magic system but it is limited to 3 characters (Ransom being one). The magic comes from the “ fountain” and it gives Ransom the ability to sense danger, assess opponents for weakness, and fight incredibly well. The Fountain guides Ransom as he protects the Argentine line and bids him to remain loyal to his King/ duty no matter what. Ransom’s magic is ultimately tied to his loyalty and he is tested many times throughout the series.
I loved the tale of Ransom. He’s truly an amazing character and well written. Ransom is so good and always does the right thing as a knight/noble. Ransom is just really too good for the world he lives in. Even when he has moments that make him question his loyalty or have negative thoughts, he wrestles those feelings and still manages to do his duty. He’s not petty nor does he seek revenge. So the ending of his story killed me. So beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.
Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher, and Mr. Wheeler for an eARC of this amazing book. Highly recommend to anyone! Also, pick up other Jeff Wheeler titles especially anything about Muirwood!!
This story takes place in a fantasy world that is similar to medieval Europe. There are castles, knights, tournaments, nobles, and warring kingdoms. There is also a magic system but it is limited to 3 characters (Ransom being one). The magic comes from the “ fountain” and it gives Ransom the ability to sense danger, assess opponents for weakness, and fight incredibly well. The Fountain guides Ransom as he protects the Argentine line and bids him to remain loyal to his King/ duty no matter what. Ransom’s magic is ultimately tied to his loyalty and he is tested many times throughout the series.
I loved the tale of Ransom. He’s truly an amazing character and well written. Ransom is so good and always does the right thing as a knight/noble. Ransom is just really too good for the world he lives in. Even when he has moments that make him question his loyalty or have negative thoughts, he wrestles those feelings and still manages to do his duty. He’s not petty nor does he seek revenge. So the ending of his story killed me. So beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.
Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher, and Mr. Wheeler for an eARC of this amazing book. Highly recommend to anyone! Also, pick up other Jeff Wheeler titles especially anything about Muirwood!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 22, 2021
I received an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for my honest and unvarnished thoughts.
One of the things I like about Wheeler's novels is that you know you're in for twists.
Fate's Ransom twists and turns more than a cat falling out of a tree. But will the story land on its feet?
Ransom is one of those characters I feel so sorry for. He is beholden to the King's line, and his special powers from the Fountain come through being loyal. When the king is an eejit, cruel, and mercenary, Ransom isn't given a pass to choose a better person. Instead, he must choose if he will betray his gift to save his family. But what will happen if he chooses family over his country?
I enjoyed seeing some of the next generation on the page. The king's heir and daughter, Ransom's sons, and a bit of his daughter are all there, giving hints of future possible stories.
I also liked that Claire felt more active in this novel through epistolary elements. Sometimes, I feel like some lines of action were out of order. If it's glossed over and then explained a few paragraphs later, it makes my brain stutter—thinking back to what I'd already read. This is a minor detail, and because this was an ARC, it might be fixed in the final version.
Finally, I like it when a series has an end. Even if there will be another spin-off, I want a sense of resolution. Fate's Ransom did this for me.
If you enjoy the original Kingfountain series, you won't want to miss the stories with Ransom.
One of the things I like about Wheeler's novels is that you know you're in for twists.
Fate's Ransom twists and turns more than a cat falling out of a tree. But will the story land on its feet?
Ransom is one of those characters I feel so sorry for. He is beholden to the King's line, and his special powers from the Fountain come through being loyal. When the king is an eejit, cruel, and mercenary, Ransom isn't given a pass to choose a better person. Instead, he must choose if he will betray his gift to save his family. But what will happen if he chooses family over his country?
I enjoyed seeing some of the next generation on the page. The king's heir and daughter, Ransom's sons, and a bit of his daughter are all there, giving hints of future possible stories.
I also liked that Claire felt more active in this novel through epistolary elements. Sometimes, I feel like some lines of action were out of order. If it's glossed over and then explained a few paragraphs later, it makes my brain stutter—thinking back to what I'd already read. This is a minor detail, and because this was an ARC, it might be fixed in the final version.
Finally, I like it when a series has an end. Even if there will be another spin-off, I want a sense of resolution. Fate's Ransom did this for me.
If you enjoy the original Kingfountain series, you won't want to miss the stories with Ransom.
March 23, 2022
ARC from NetGalley
4.5 stars
A bittersweet ending to Ransom's tale.
I quite enjoyed this series, though I wish it were a bit more to it. I would have liked for the story as a whole to have come to a conclusion instead of just Ransom's bit in it. I would have also liked to understand the magic a bit better and get a bit more on that and the deep fathoms and how they are all related.
I like that Ransom is so very honest and loyal, but there were many times it was irritating, especially since he just keeps getting dealt the shittiest cards. The thing with having a character like this is that there is an expectation that at some point they will be rewarded for their suffering, but he really never is. There is never a point of glorious comeuppance for his enemies. That was all quite a trickle when I was hoping for a deluge, a bit underwhelming and unsatisfying. There is never a that moment of vicarious joy where he FINALLY gets his. It's like playing a fighting game where every time you take damage, your meter builds up until you can finally release a devastating special attack, but Ransom never gets to release his special. I understand that this isn't always how life pans out in reality, but this isn't reality, it's a story. I suppose it isn't that kind of story though, and that's okay. It's still an excellent series, and I would still recommend it.
4.5 stars
A bittersweet ending to Ransom's tale.
I quite enjoyed this series, though I wish it were a bit more to it. I would have liked for the story as a whole to have come to a conclusion instead of just Ransom's bit in it. I would have also liked to understand the magic a bit better and get a bit more on that and the deep fathoms and how they are all related.
I like that Ransom is so very honest and loyal, but there were many times it was irritating, especially since he just keeps getting dealt the shittiest cards. The thing with having a character like this is that there is an expectation that at some point they will be rewarded for their suffering, but he really never is. There is never a point of glorious comeuppance for his enemies. That was all quite a trickle when I was hoping for a deluge, a bit underwhelming and unsatisfying. There is never a that moment of vicarious joy where he FINALLY gets his. It's like playing a fighting game where every time you take damage, your meter builds up until you can finally release a devastating special attack, but Ransom never gets to release his special. I understand that this isn't always how life pans out in reality, but this isn't reality, it's a story. I suppose it isn't that kind of story though, and that's okay. It's still an excellent series, and I would still recommend it.
April 24, 2023
Fate's Ransom Book 4 - A fitting conclusion
This is a wonderful series. I have always been a fan of stories like these. King Arthur and related legends will always remind me of honor, duty, and sacrifice. I admire those same traits in those who serve in military service. A favorite album of mine is Rick Wakeman's 'Myths and Legends of King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table'. It was the first musical interpretation of these types of adventures I had ever heard. I think that was 1975. I do remember the very famous stage performance, Camelot with Richard Burton and Julie Andrews from 1960. I blame my older brother for having the album. Yes, I would sing along with it in the privacy of my home. There are, of course, volumes of writings about similar adventures, but Wakeman (of YES fame) captured the emotions of each tale as only music can. Having said that, I add this caveat. This First Argentines series by author Jeff Wheeler definitely captured my imagination and emotions.
In Book 4, much is happening. Plots within plots and treachery everywhere. As Rick Wakeman is to music, Kate Rudd is to the written words. She is an amazing talent that I recommend having along with the excellent writings of Jeff Wheeler. I have very much enjoyed this series and look forward to reading Legends of Muirwood.
This is a wonderful series. I have always been a fan of stories like these. King Arthur and related legends will always remind me of honor, duty, and sacrifice. I admire those same traits in those who serve in military service. A favorite album of mine is Rick Wakeman's 'Myths and Legends of King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table'. It was the first musical interpretation of these types of adventures I had ever heard. I think that was 1975. I do remember the very famous stage performance, Camelot with Richard Burton and Julie Andrews from 1960. I blame my older brother for having the album. Yes, I would sing along with it in the privacy of my home. There are, of course, volumes of writings about similar adventures, but Wakeman (of YES fame) captured the emotions of each tale as only music can. Having said that, I add this caveat. This First Argentines series by author Jeff Wheeler definitely captured my imagination and emotions.
In Book 4, much is happening. Plots within plots and treachery everywhere. As Rick Wakeman is to music, Kate Rudd is to the written words. She is an amazing talent that I recommend having along with the excellent writings of Jeff Wheeler. I have very much enjoyed this series and look forward to reading Legends of Muirwood.
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