I started reading it because I've decided to finally tackle my digital tbr and this has been sitting on my e-reader for years. The premise sounded intI started reading it because I've decided to finally tackle my digital tbr and this has been sitting on my e-reader for years. The premise sounded interesting, so I gave it a go. Sadly, this one just didn't work for me and I'm dnf-ing at 16%.
The writing style just didn't click with me, partly because it's written in third person present I think and I'm really not used to that. Other than that, the dialogue is stilted and it feels like there's things between the lines I'm missing. It's not made clear where we are, who we're with, who's pov we're reading from... I'm just constantly confused and keep having to re-read passages because I'm lost. It's slowly giving me a headache and I can't take it anymore.
I'm obviously not going to comment on the story, because I've barely started, you can read other reviews for that....more