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17 July 2023

• 04:0604:06, 17 July 2023 diff hist −370‎ Robert Osborne ‎ Removed unnecessary words. Removed inaccurate and redundant source. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:0204:02, 17 July 2023 diff hist −11‎ Robert Osborne ‎ Removed unnecessary word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 July 2023

• 16:5616:56, 13 July 2023 diff hist −25‎ Tonya Harding ‎ Fixed style error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 July 2023

• 06:4506:45, 3 July 2023 diff hist +185‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Minor edits Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:4406:44, 3 July 2023 diff hist +12‎ Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Limited or Anthology Series or Movie ‎ Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3906:39, 3 July 2023 diff hist +12‎ Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actor in a Limited or Anthology Series or Movie ‎ Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3606:36, 3 July 2023 diff hist +34‎ Academy Award for Best Supporting Actress ‎ Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3006:30, 3 July 2023 diff hist +30‎ Academy Award for Best Picture ‎ Minor correction Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2206:22, 3 July 2023 diff hist −213‎ Academy Award for Best Supporting Actress ‎ Removed superfluous content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3905:39, 3 July 2023 diff hist −1‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Minor Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3805:38, 3 July 2023 diff hist +713‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Adding sources Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:2005:20, 3 July 2023 diff hist +442‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Adding sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1405:14, 3 July 2023 diff hist +4‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1105:11, 3 July 2023 diff hist −802‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Restructured content to reflect encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4804:48, 3 July 2023 diff hist −837‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Restructured content to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2004:20, 3 July 2023 diff hist −294‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Removed text unrelated to subject's early life. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1704:17, 3 July 2023 diff hist −14‎ Diana Scarwid ‎ Removed unnecessary word and corrected style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 June 2023

• 20:4520:45, 30 June 2023 diff hist −1,941‎ Dolores Hart ‎ Removed voluminous superfluous text. Re-cast sentences in proper encyclopedia style. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:3720:37, 30 June 2023 diff hist −875‎ Dolores Hart ‎ Removed more superfluous text. As dictated in Wikipedia MOS, we write in encyclopedia style, which is different from any other style of writing. We provide only the basic facts to summarize our subject. This is not a biography or a press release. We are not here to entertain. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:3120:31, 30 June 2023 diff hist −456‎ Dolores Hart ‎ Removed superfluous text and text not supported by source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1820:18, 30 June 2023 diff hist −1‎ Dolores Hart ‎ Corrected grammar mistake. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:5104:51, 30 June 2023 diff hist −10‎ Yvette Mimieux ‎ Fixed the citation even better! Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4704:47, 30 June 2023 diff hist −78‎ Yvette Mimieux ‎ Provided proper citation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4304:43, 30 June 2023 diff hist −105‎ Yvette Mimieux ‎ Removed improper source. The Los Angeles Times obit for Mimieux was on January 20, 2020. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:3504:35, 30 June 2023 diff hist −81‎ Yvette Mimieux ‎ →‎Personal life and death: Fixed wording issues. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 June 2023

• 18:0618:06, 17 June 2023 diff hist −230‎ Phil Valentine ‎ →‎Early life and education: corrected source information. Restructured a couple of sentences for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:5217:52, 17 June 2023 diff hist −5‎ Phil Valentine ‎ Remove unnecessary word Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:4817:48, 17 June 2023 diff hist −11‎ Capital of Japan ‎ Remove superfluous words Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:4717:47, 17 June 2023 diff hist −8‎ Capital of Japan ‎ Removed redundancy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 June 2023

• 19:1419:14, 16 June 2023 diff hist −73‎ Song of Love (1947 film) ‎ Removed peacock language and vague time references. Restructured sentence to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 June 2023

• 00:2600:26, 11 June 2023 diff hist −131‎ Don Novello ‎ Removed unnecessary words and unsourced content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:2400:24, 11 June 2023 diff hist −68‎ Don Novello ‎ Removed editorial comment and unnecessary words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 June 2023

• 23:1923:19, 4 June 2023 diff hist +338‎ Gregg Burge ‎ Added a much needed source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:1623:16, 4 June 2023 diff hist −39‎ Gregg Burge ‎ Removed peacock language, and restructured run-on sentences. Where are the sources for this article? Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 June 2023

• 03:4903:49, 2 June 2023 diff hist −33‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Corrected misconstructed sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 June 2023

• 20:2520:25, 1 June 2023 diff hist −74‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Tightened sentences for proper style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:2320:23, 1 June 2023 diff hist −94‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Restructured sentence in keeping with proper style. Please note how the cumbersome sentences of "With the Colorado Springs Police Department (CSPD), Kenda eventually became a homicide detective. He worked in the CSPD homicide unit from 1977 to 1981 and 1984–1996" is changed to the direct, simple sentence of "Kendall worked as a homicide detective with the Colorado Springs Police Department from 1977 to 1981, and from 1984-1996." We must keep information direct, using the fewest words possible. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1620:16, 1 June 2023 diff hist −570‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Tightened text to keep in proper encyclopedia style. Removed on necessary text neighborhood. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1220:12, 1 June 2023 diff hist −109‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Removed more unnecessary information. We must keep in mind that Wikipedia MOS indicates that articles are to be a summarization of the subject. We do not add facts simply because we have them. That is taken directly from the MOS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1020:10, 1 June 2023 diff hist −57‎ Joe Kenda ‎ These subject's hometown's proximity to Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania is not relevant information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:0920:09, 1 June 2023 diff hist +11‎ Joe Kenda ‎ Restructured sentence for better readability and in keeping with encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:5103:51, 1 June 2023 diff hist +4‎ William Powell ‎ Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:5003:50, 1 June 2023 diff hist −2,104‎ William Powell ‎ Made significant edits of puffery content, peacock, content, and other unnecessary text. Articles should be written in encyclopedia style. Encyclopedia style is vastly different from writing found in books, magazines, newspapers, press, releases, and biographies. Added several sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:1603:16, 1 June 2023 diff hist −145‎ William Powell ‎ Removed redundant information, and content that was unnecessary. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:1303:13, 1 June 2023 diff hist +5‎ William Powell ‎ Minor correction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:1203:12, 1 June 2023 diff hist −41‎ William Powell ‎ Removed unnecessary content and corrected grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 May 2023

• 23:4923:49, 31 May 2023 diff hist −115‎ Beverly Sanders ‎ Restructure sentences to be more in line with encyclopedia style. Removed a sentence that is a conclusion or observation drawn by the editor, which violates Wikipedia's original research rule. This article is vastly in need of sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 May 2023

• 23:0223:02, 30 May 2023 diff hist −94‎ Dolores Moran ‎ I got confused on my previous edit. There was so much time that elapsed between when I made the edit and when I saved it that I forgot whose article it was. Please forgive my mistake. My edits here were for tightening the text in keeping with proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5922:59, 30 May 2023 diff hist −615‎ Dolores Moran ‎ Removed content that was not supported in the source given. Removed some content that is not important enough for this article. The affair between Hawks and Moran should be in their Wikipedia articles. It may be true that Hawks' affair was the result of being snubbed by Bacall, but that is not important. Articles are to be summaries of subjects, according to Wikipedia MOS. The MOS says specifically that we don't include facts just because we have them. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 May 2023

• 04:2404:24, 22 May 2023 diff hist −9‎ Terrence Mann ‎ Removed redundancy, the bane of writing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit