Talk:The Dorilton/GA1: Difference between revisions

GA Review

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Nominator: Epicgenius (talk · contribs) 00:37, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

Reviewer: Found5dollar (talk · contribs) 18:37, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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The Dorilton is one of my favorite buildings in the city, and I am so excited to see it up for GA. I haven't done a review in a while but happy to take this on. It will likely take me a few days to comb through the article. --Found5dollar (talk) 18:37, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• the term "housing cooperative" is linked twice in the lead
• "The unit contained decorations" is this supposed to be plural or are you talking about the lobby or one specific unit?
• "Storefronts on the ground floor were added after 1919, many decorative elements were removed or had deteriorated by the 1950s." These two thoughts should either be connected with an "and" or "but" or separated into two sentences.