User contributions for SaintAloysius
A user with 340 edits. Account created on 26 October 2012.
16 May 2024
- 03:5503:55, 16 May 2024 diff hist +9 m Nocturne (2020 film) →Plot: Put Saint-Saëns's name in with "Piano Concerto No. 2" and put it in Roman per standard title style.
29 April 2024
- 16:1516:15, 29 April 2024 diff hist −40 m Benedict Jacka →Biography: Minor rewording. It seemed the perspective on his unpublished work was more personal than Wikipedia guidelines would prefer. current
25 April 2024
- 17:3617:36, 25 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Co-operative Commonwealth Federation →Origins: Changed spelling spelling of labour parties to "Labour" (Canadian spelling) to reflect articles in links.
30 March 2024
- 16:3916:39, 30 March 2024 diff hist 0 m All the Bright Places →Reception: Changed wording of comparison to "Eleanor and Park" and "Fault in Our Stars" to make it clear the review didn't suggest that "All the Bright Places" was somehow better ("favourably compared") than those books..
23 March 2024
- 15:4515:45, 23 March 2024 diff hist +43 m Chaos Walking (film) →Plot: Minor correction Tag: Reverted
- 15:4215:42, 23 March 2024 diff hist +637 Chaos Walking (film) →Plot: Copyediting in paragraphs 5, 6 and 7, mainly for sequence clarity. Tag: Reverted
23 February 2024
- 16:4016:40, 23 February 2024 diff hist 0 m CF Montréal →Team name, logo and colours: Put in Canadian spelling
12 January 2024
- 01:5701:57, 12 January 2024 diff hist −4 m Curve Lake First Nation 35 Changed ethnonym to Anishinaade per Curve Lake First Nation website. Deleted "native," as unnecessary.
16 December 2023
- 00:0700:07, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0 m Passchendaele (film) →Production: Changed reserve to match preference of the Nation, based on the linked article. Tag: Disambiguation links added
13 October 2023
- 13:4513:45, 13 October 2023 diff hist +31 m Guild (ecology) Revised the definition-explanation of "trophic species" by replacing the word "species" with "taxa" (per the footnoted reference) to clarify the fact that "trophic species" aren't members of the same "species" in the common sense of the word.
30 September 2023
- 17:4117:41, 30 September 2023 diff hist 0 m Picea mariana →Description: Changed "gray" to "grey" Canadian spelling (per perspective).
27 August 2023
- 14:0314:03, 27 August 2023 diff hist 0 m Ipperwash Provincial Park →Ipperwash Crisis: Canadian spelling of "centre."
5 August 2023
- 14:2714:27, 5 August 2023 diff hist +39 m Epistle to the Galatians →Background: Reframed the cited passage to make it clear that it's a quote. (There is a Wikipedia guideline on citations in the guidelines somewhere that justifies this).
1 July 2023
- 02:1002:10, 1 July 2023 diff hist −165 East Cree Reworded the first sentence of paragraph 2 and provided the total number of speakers for the dialect group (replacing the number for Cree as a whole).
- 01:4301:43, 1 July 2023 diff hist +1 m East Cree →Phonology: Changed to Canadian spelling of "neighbouring."
13 May 2023
- 01:4601:46, 13 May 2023 diff hist −32 m Anna Vinnitskaya →Biography: Changed the list of orchestras where she has been a soloist to better reflect soloist's stature.
7 April 2023
- 16:3216:32, 7 April 2023 diff hist −73 m Musée national des beaux-arts du Québec Trimmed style of first paragraph, since I was correcting a bit of it anyway.
- 16:2916:29, 7 April 2023 diff hist +9 m Musée national des beaux-arts du Québec Corrected the name of "National Battlefields Park". <ref>https://www.btb.termiumplus.gc.ca/tpv2alpha/alpha-fra.html?lang=fra&i=&index=alt&srchtxt=PARC%20CHAMPS%2DDE%2DBATAILLE</ref>
12 March 2023
- 16:2416:24, 12 March 2023 diff hist −7 m Peace River →History: Confirmed language of name from this article, reference to the Canadian Encyclopedia.
- 16:0216:02, 12 March 2023 diff hist +6 m Peace River →History: Re-worded previous attribution of river name. I couldn't confirm what language it was.
- 15:5715:57, 12 March 2023 diff hist +12 m Peace River →History: Attributed the river name. Changed spelling of Dane-zaa to match Wikipedia article reference.
30 November 2022
- 01:4101:41, 30 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Toronto Maple Leafs →Brendan Shanahan era (2014–present): Corrected type "seamed" to "seemed."
27 September 2022
- 00:5700:57, 27 September 2022 diff hist +20 m Italian electoral law of 2017 →Voting paper: Revised to gender-neutral language; corrected "can not" to "cannot."
4 July 2022
- 01:5001:50, 4 July 2022 diff hist +1 m 2022 Saanich shootout →Investigation: Canadian spelling for "armour."
16 April 2022
- 19:2219:22, 16 April 2022 diff hist +26 m John Broadwood & Sons →2000s: Supplied citation
- 19:1119:11, 16 April 2022 diff hist +103 Prometheus (soundtrack) →Selected credits: Added Richard Watkins, solo horn, to the credits. The solo horn is mentioned in many of the reviews<ref>https://www.hornsociety.org/295-newsletter/992-from-ed-lockwood</ref>
13 April 2022
- 02:0102:01, 13 April 2022 diff hist +7 m Ghost Wars (TV series) Added "Canadian" <ref>https://www.imdb.com/title/tt6856484/</ref>
14 March 2022
- 02:1202:12, 14 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Naomi Klein →Honors and awards: Changed to Canadian spelling.
- 02:1102:11, 14 March 2022 diff hist −934 m Naomi Klein →Venezuela: Removed statement on criticism of Klein based on subsequent developments in Venezuela. The passage in question does not discuss Klein's views or positions on those developments. Tag: Reverted
24 February 2022
- 01:3101:31, 24 February 2022 diff hist −18 m Demet Özdemir →Life and career: Improved style.
- 01:3001:30, 24 February 2022 diff hist −18 m Demet Özdemir Changed some language to meet objectivity recommendations.
12 February 2022
- 23:3823:38, 12 February 2022 diff hist −5 m Racism in Italy →Anti-Roma racism: Removed racial epithet "Gypsy" and replaced with "Roma" as in source. Tag: Reverted
30 January 2022
- 23:1323:13, 30 January 2022 diff hist +9 m Pixies (band) →Breakup and solo projects (1993–2003): Changed "unbeknownst to the other members of the band," after checking source. (Previous wording meant that the other members didn't know he hadn't offered an explanation.)
29 January 2022
- 16:4516:45, 29 January 2022 diff hist −4 m Before Sunset Changed "greatest films of the year" to "best films of the year" based on the footnote further on in the text. The film did (as per the footnotes below) appear on some lists of "greatest" films, but in reference to the decade and to all time.
13 January 2022
- 03:0303:03, 13 January 2022 diff hist −42 m 2021 Western North America heat wave →Saskatchewan: Corrected minor grammatical errors and tenses.
- 02:5602:56, 13 January 2022 diff hist −31 m 2021 Western North America heat wave →Territories: Tense
- 02:5302:53, 13 January 2022 diff hist −5 m 2021 Western North America heat wave →Alberta: Changed tenses and changed to some Canadian spelling.
2 January 2022
- 23:0523:05, 2 January 2022 diff hist +4 m Psilocybin decriminalization in the United States →Ongoing efforts: Added link to Nicolas Scutari.
- 23:0323:03, 2 January 2022 diff hist +118 m Psilocybin decriminalization in the United States →Ongoing efforts: Replaced "unknown senator" with the name of the senator and added source.
29 October 2021
- 20:4220:42, 29 October 2021 diff hist +15 m Exaltasamba →History: Corrected a mistranslation (tocar means play, not touch).
- 01:0601:06, 29 October 2021 diff hist −1 m Gamete Corrected plural of spermatozoon (spermatozoa). Text had the singular.<ref>https://www.btb.termiumplus.gc.ca/tpv2alpha/alpha-eng.html?lang=eng&i=1&srchtxt=spermatozo%C3%AFde&index=frt&codom2nd_wet=1#resultrecs</ref>
17 September 2021
- 15:0715:07, 17 September 2021 diff hist −1 m Lease →General terms: Followup to previous edit. I hadn't noticed that there was a third term.
- 15:0615:06, 17 September 2021 diff hist −4 m Lease →General terms: Changed "and/or" to "and." Basic copyediting: "depending on" with "and" includes the possibility of "or."
13 September 2021
- 17:5417:54, 13 September 2021 diff hist 0 m Elbow Falls Changed U.S. to Canadian spelling of "metres"
4 September 2021
- 23:3323:33, 4 September 2021 diff hist −930 m Naomi Klein →Views: Removed mention of criticism of Klein by pundits after the Venezuelan economic crisis. Says nothing about Klein. The commentators in question hadn't changed their views. Tag: Reverted
26 August 2021
- 17:1417:14, 26 August 2021 diff hist −1 m Nine Lessons and Carols →History: Moved the word "multilingually."
- 17:1317:13, 26 August 2021 diff hist −72 m Nine Lessons and Carols →History: Edited style in the sentence about Bishop's College School and took out "the only place" as unsupported (and unlikely).
8 August 2021
- 00:5600:56, 8 August 2021 diff hist +27 m Kelsang Gyatso Correction to previous edit.
- 00:5500:55, 8 August 2021 diff hist +15 m Kelsang Gyatso Adjusted the wording in the early passage on Dorje Shugdan practice to restore neutrality (See "Words to watch," i.e., "claims") on the page Neutral Point of View.
- 00:3900:39, 8 August 2021 diff hist −813 Politics of Nova Scotia →From 1970 to present: Deleted criticism of pension plan from CTF as giving undue weight to such criticism. Also, CTF is not an unbiased source and other perspectives would be required.
