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Wikipedia talk:Short description

Redirects with short descriptions

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Editors who watch this page may be interested in Wikipedia talk:Redirect#Question on redirects with short descriptions. Certes (talk) 16:24, 23 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Long and/or bad short descriptions

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Just wanted to report that I've been shortening or otherwise changing short descriptions that match common mistakes, using a quarry script.[1] I know other methods of searching are available but I've found a nice workflow this way. I can turn on one or two filters to get a bit of variety with the type of problem being corrected.

So far I've managed to prune down all the SDs over 100 characters and nearly all those of exactly 100 characters. Counting all the SDs in excess of 60 characters, there's over 100 thousand such articles that may need attention. It's steady work :) Wizmut (talk) 19:25, 31 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for doing God’s work for short descriptions. It would be awesome if you were able to track long short descriptions generated from templates if it’s possible. I wager there’s a lot of template generated short descriptions between 80-99 characters hiding in sight. -1ctinus📝🗨 20:30, 31 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've looked into your question, but the only coherent output I've gotten is a list of articles which have SD-generating templates that are not generating any SD: [2] I'm not sure why this happens but there's thousands of them.
The problem with finding induced SDs is that the database which tracks instances of templates on pages, templatelinks, will say that Template:Short description appears on any page with either an explicit or induced SD. Overall my attempts at distinguishing between the two using the database have come up short. Wizmut (talk) 07:12, 5 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Proposal of creating a short description for Template:Infobox book

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I am working on a proposal for creating a short description of Template:Infobox book in the template's talk page. Any constructive help to improve the proposal would be greatly appreciated. -1ctinus📝🗨 00:57, 2 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Article with two Short descriptions

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Greetings, Asking if anyone here can check article Patil_(Koli_title) that has 2 short descriptions. I'm not sure if that is Okay? Regards, JoeNMLC (talk) 15:13, 15 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, I removed the more redundant one. Jähmefyysikko (talk) 15:22, 15 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Inherit?

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Sometimes, an infobox sets a good SD and we really do not want the text to be overridden by a local SD in the article. So we have a problem:

  • If we leave the article without a local SD template, there is the danger that somebody else will add one (to "fix" the article) and so block the infobox value.
  • If we "import" the SD text from the infobox to a local template, this means that any future improvement to the infobox SD text will be lost.

Do we:

  1. accept that, if we "import" the infobox SD text into an article and later the infobox SD text is improved, then we just have to repeat the import for all of the articles using the infobox
  2. accept that, if we "import" the infobox SD text into an article and later the infobox SD text is improved, then we just have to not mind
  3. add some sort of comment to the article text saying not to create a local SD, and accept that few people will see it or read it
  4. treat an empty SD as being valid (do not add the article to Category:Pages with empty short description) so the empty SD marks the article as "fixed" but also does not set the local SD value
  5. invent a new SD value of "inherit" which (being special like "none") does not set the SD, but allows the value to be inherited from a subsequent infobox

Thoughts? — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 15:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

When is a short description that is identical for every article that uses that infobox better than a local SD (assuming the local SD is specific to the article)? Schazjmd (talk) 16:02, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Per WP:SDCONTENT, the short description is part of the article content, and is subject to the normal rules on content. So it should always be possible by local consensus to override any 'default' infobox text. Of course, local consensus may occasionally be worse than the infobox version, but that's just a feature of "the normal rules on [editing] content". I don't think it's something we need to worry about too much. MichaelMaggs (talk) 21:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Per the above comments, if "we" do not want the infobox's SD to be overwritten, "we" should put the article on our watchlist and ensure that the article's content is not changed in an undesirable way. Perform option #3 above, a hidden comment, if necessary. – Jonesey95 (talk) 19:48, 24 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
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Guidelines include "Extinct group of molluscs" as an example. "Extinct" is time-related, not unlike "defunct", one of the deprecated words. Surely such permanent time-related adjectives are OK? Robin Patterson (talk) 23:47, 26 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Yes, "extinct" is definitely OK. The existing wording Avoid time-specific adjectives like "former", "retired", "late", "defunct", "closed", "current", "new", "recent", "planned", "future", etc is intended to discourage editors from constantly updating the SD as things change over time, eg from "Footballer" to "Retired footballer" or from "Company" to "Defunct company", but it doesn't really address your point. It would be better for the guidance to suggest focusing on what the subject matter is (currently) best known for: so in the first example, the subject is best known for being a footballer, not for being a retired footballer. As with "extinct", there are rare examples where time-specific adjectives are not only OK, but are really needed. If others feel the same we might consider working up some better wording. MichaelMaggs (talk) 08:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
An exemplary case in point (apart from missing the WP:SD40 target) being: Woolly mammoth (Extinct species from the Quaternary period). I would also make a case for "defunct" being acceptable in some cases too. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 09:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Shuffling chairs

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I frequently see short description changes in my watchlist, and they frequently look like chair-shuffling ie. It's too long. Now it's shorter. Oh wait, it needs to say this, now it's longer. Oh wait, it needs to be rephrased. Oh wait, it's too short, we need to make it longer etc etc .. it would be funny if it wasn't for my poor watchlist and attention overload. I'd love to see these things moved to their own database somewhere out of mainspace. Like Wikidata or Commons. -- GreenC 16:39, 29 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

You forgot the /s markup at the end of your last sentence. – Jonesey95 (talk) 16:48, 29 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
we’ve come full circle, given that wikidata was previously used. haha. the best way to possibly implement that would be for the watchlist program to have a setting to be able to ignore changes w/ shortdesc helper. -1ctinus📝🗨 00:40, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
There's the option to exclude the #Shortdesc helper tag in watchlists through the filter settings. Won't catch all cases of shortdesc changes (i.e. those done manually without the gadget) but should cut out a decent amount of edits (plus, editors who use shortdesc helper are more likely to be experienced in shortdesc editing and hence need less monitoring of their edits). Liu1126 (talk) 01:20, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Short descriptions are on Wikipedia because some editors here didn't want Wikidata material appearing in their articles. MichaelMaggs (talk) 08:20, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
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In Wikipedia's List of things named after Leonhard Euler, we find this:

Euler's partition theorem – Relates the product and series representations of the Euler function Π(1-x^n)

Do I need more to prove beyond all doubt that the use of annotated links is vandalism? Every Wikipedia article that uses an annotated link to that article will see THAT! Including this:

Π(1-x^n)

Is THAT how we now do mathematical notation in Wikipedia articles? We will now discard an deprecate all the work that's gone into WP:MOSMATH and condone things like THAT?

In articles we can write

Π(1 − xn).

To be fully explicit I will point out several obvious things:

  • A minus sign differs from a stubby little hyphen (as you see above).
  • Spaces precede and follow a minus sign when it is used as a binary operation symbol (as you see above), unlike what is done when it is a unary operation symbol.
  • Variables are italicized. (Unlike things like cos, log, max, sup, det, etc., and unlike parentheses and other punctuation.)
  • We have the ability to write xn rather than x^n.
  • We also have the ability to write  

Now annotated links come along and tell us we must write like illiterate cave men. Michael Hardy (talk) 16:33, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

There is another option: fix the short description to match our guidance. – Jonesey95 (talk) 17:08, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Jonesey95: Not an option, last time I checked. Superscripts in short descriptions are not allowed. Nor italics, if I recall correctly. Have those bugs been fixed? Michael Hardy (talk) 17:51, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Jonesey95: You've got to be kidding: You changed it so that it says "Theorem in number theory." Do you really think it would be appropriate in List of things named after Leonhard Euler to describe that item by saying "Theorem in number theory"? Many of the other items in that same list are theorems in number theory, and obviously those interested in that list will want immensely more specificity than "Theorem in number theory". It is as if a list containing miscellaneous geographic locations that satisfy some criterion said:
  • Paris – a place
  • Berlin – a place
  • Honolulu – a place
Besides lists of annotated links often have some links beginning with a capital letter and some with lower case, in a context where lower case is clearly the appropriate option. And they are not adapted to the context. Michael Hardy (talk) 17:57, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Of course that's an appropriate short description; it follows the guidance on this page. If there were a music album in that list called Euler's Party Theorem, I would expect its short description to be something like "1978 rock album by Group Theory" or whatever. That SD would help me distinguish the music recording from the mathematical theorems.
I don't know why you are posting strawman arguments (Paris: Paris – Capital and largest city of France; Berlin: Berlin – Capital and largest city of Germany; Honolulu: Honolulu – Capital city of the U.S. state of Hawaii) and complaining here. If {{annotated link}} is vandalism, discuss it on the talk page for that template, or start a TFD. If annotated links should begin with a lower-case letter, propose that change at the template's talk page. If {{annotated link}} gives undesirable results at List of things named after Leonhard Euler, don't use the template there. – Jonesey95 (talk) 18:16, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
That's just a slightly-lower tech way of writing the same information, how is it "deliberately intended to obstruct or defeat the project's purpose"?
If you don't like the annotation just write your own, its perfectly reasonable to use annotation templates for some items in a list but write out a custom description for others, you can even subst: it nif you want. Orchastrattor (talk) 18:26, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

What such lists look like:

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Here is a capitalization correction:

  • Paris – a place
  • Berlin – A place
  • Honolulu – a place

That's what lists of annotated links look like. Michael Hardy (talk) 17:59, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

There is no use of {{annotated link}} above. Please link to an actual list that displays this problem, preferably from the talk page of the template in question. Also you might want to RTFM. – Jonesey95 (talk) 18:17, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Semi-protected edit request on 7 July 2024

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Gilmoregreatniece (talk) 03:46, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I am the great niece of W.E. Garrett Gilmore. He is know by this name and not “William Gilmore”. The photo accompanying the entry “William Gilmore” is NOT W.E. Garrett Gilmore. The text IS correct for W.E. Garrett Gilmore!

  Not done: this is the talk page for discussing improvements to the page Wikipedia:Short description. Please make your request at the talk page for the article concerned. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 03:48, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Changing descriptions to a bland triviality, by heavy pruning of anything implicit from the name

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Any thoughts on these (just one of many)? This, from "Class of 55 South African 4-6-0 locomotives" to "Design of steam locomotive" for South African Class 6B 4-6-0 is really not an improvement. Likerwise [3]. I presume these were done because some of the description is also implicit in the name. Except that we don't always have the names visible in the same context as the description. Also the resultant description is still, and now entirely, implicit in the name. That makes the changed description completely useless (to the point where we might as well delte it altogether). Andy Dingley (talk) 13:04, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

The first revision change is better due to WP:CONCISE, and I would disagree with the idea that "South African Class 6B 4-6-0" is implicit of a steam locomotive design. What you're describing is a common problem for a lot of articles whose titles are on the edge of describing themselves and not. -1ctinus📝🗨 14:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
CONCISE is about article titles, not shortdescs. Nobody claims '"South African Class 6B 4-6-0" is implicit of a steam locomotive design'.
This may be a common problem (that's why we support 'none' as a short desc). But that's no reason to go from a reasonable description to one that's "the sky is blue" levels of self-evident. Andy Dingley (talk) 14:57, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
See WP:SDDUPLICATE and WP:SDLENGTH. We generally want short descriptions to be 40-characters or less if possible. So duplicate words such as "South African" in both and "4-6-0" in the first (which also seems to be jargon that is also discouraged) shouldn't be repeated in both.
If we look to WP:SDDATES, it would probably be more helpful to identify the most relevant dates for each than the number of cards built, which seems more trivial and less definning. Something like "Steam locomotive class (1897-1973)" for the first and "Electro-disel locomotive class (1992-)" might be better with the necessary adjustments if the industry convention is to use only the build years, or the first run year. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 14:42, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
The description here is 43 characters. Which is entirely in keeping with a practice where 80% are <=40 chars, and 60 is seen as a limit.
'4-6-0' is no more 'jargon' than 'president' is in our masthead example. What's a president? Is that like a king? My country has prime ministers instead, are they the same thing? Everything assumes some level of field-specific knowledge. '4-6-0' is extremely common terminology for anyone with any interest in railway matters. That's a very broad scope and entirely appropriate to use for descriptions of locomotives. What we don't need here are more of these "choo-choo pull train" descriptions that convey absolutely nothing to either audience. '4-6-0' is a good description: it's clear and conceptually atomic: I can look-up 4-6-0 and find a specific article. It also conveys to those with a passing interest in the field rough ideas of the size, purpose and era of the locomotive, and obviously that it's a steam locomotive. Year dates though (which neither version uses) are not helpful. They're annotational, not defining. There are very few locomotives where their date is significant, or it affects their function as locomotives. Andy Dingley (talk) 14:57, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think the only place I see a short description is when searching, and in those cases I already have the class name. Yes, anyone familiar with steam locomotives knows that a 4-6-0 is a steam locomotive. In situations where the search results are ambiguous, explicitly stating "steam locomotive" is probably helpful. Mackensen (talk) 15:38, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Probably a side issue, but isn't your last point regarding dates also true for the number of produced units (which you insist on keeping in the SD, e.g., here, here, or here, where you reverted the change from "Class of [number] South African electric locomotives" to "Class of South African electric locomotives")? The number is entirely superfluous for the purposes of SDs (and less helpful for the reader or useful for disambiguation than dates, I would argue). It's certainly not worth the characters in a short description that's already >40 characters. While I agree that "Design of steam locomotive" is not really an improvement, something like "Class of South African steam locomotives" instead of "Class of 55 South African 4-6-0 locomotives" (or instead "Class of 55 South African steam locomotives") certainly is. Felida97 (talk) 16:07, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
To claim that, to the average reader or the general audience, "4-6-0" means just as much as "president" is not really helping your argument... However, leaving that aside, if '4-6-0' is extremely common terminology, wouldn't the people to whom that does mean something (as you say, anyone with any interest in railway matters) also recognize it in the title? So, the people to whom this addition conveys ... rough ideas of the size, purpose and era of the locomotive, and obviously that it's a steam locomotive would already know that from the title, right? Meanwhile, for the people to whom "4-6-0" means nothing, this part wouldn't be very useful, begging the question who benefits from this addition then. Felida97 (talk) 16:37, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Just because a description is under or close to 40 characters does not mean that WP:SDDUPLICATE does not apply, since other useful information could be added instead.
The primary purpose of SDs is to indicate the general category that an articles falls into, which in our case only necessitates including "locomotive" somewhere in the SD. If there is room, the secondary purposes of SD include disambiguation, for which we normally include helpful information such as date, nationality, genre/medium (for artistic works), etc.
The average reader they are just as likely to know what a "president" is versus a "4-6-0" locomotive wheel configuration is not a serious argument. While including field specific terms can be helpful in the SD, it should not come at the cost of the primary purpose or needlessly duplicate words that are already in the title. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 22:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@GhostInTheMachine: Courtesy ping, since it is their short descriptions being discussed here. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 22:06, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Everybody except the OP seems to agree here. Trying to maintain "Class of 55 South African 4-6-0 locomotives" treats the SD as a technical definition, which directly goes against WP:SDNOTDEF. The SD is not written for specialists in the field. Per WP:SDJARGON, it should avoid jargon, and use simple, readily comprehensible terms that do not require pre-existing detailed knowledge of the subject. @Patar knight is quite correct: the SD should be something like "Steam locomotive class (1897-1973)". MichaelMaggs (talk) 08:19, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Since I was the one being accused of edit-waring, it seemed wise not to comment any earlier. However, it seems that we do have a consensus for a general simplification. As suggested by Pater knight, I will try to add a date or dates. Since all of the titles already say class, how about a pattern like: Design of steam locomotive, 1897–1973 (37 characters)? If the industry norm prefers using the first build date, would 1897 design of steam locomotive (31 characters) be better? — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 18:05, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

WikiData

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It sure would be nice if this template could just be configured to grab the short description from the matching WikiData entry. That way an article wouldn't need to be frequently edited (and checked) just because people can't agree on a short description. Praemonitus (talk) 15:55, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

See Wikipedia:Short description#History for why the exact opposite of this suggestion is what is happening here. – Jonesey95 (talk) 16:22, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Also see the section "Why shouldn't I simply re-use Wikidata's item description? Isn't this superfluous repetition?" (WP:SD-VS-WIKIDATA) for the brief explanation why the description on WikiData and the short description on Wikipedia for a given article should not automatically be the same. Felida97 (talk) 18:35, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

"National flag" as short description

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I preferred the use of "national flag" as short description for conventional flag articles of UN member states. For organizational flags, use "organization flag" for United Nations, NATO, etc., and for regional and state flag articles, for example, California uses "U.S. state flag" as short description (if shortened). 49.150.13.247 (talk) 01:03, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Well, what you shouldn't do is unilaterally change what the guideline says and then make work on 100 pages others have to undo. Remsense 03:07, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@GhostInTheMachine: is there a consensus for a short description that "national flag", "<country> state flag", "<country> municipal flag", etc., that is using short descriptions for flag of the United States and flag of California? 49.150.13.247 (talk) 03:12, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
If "History of California" has an SD of none, why wouldn't this be? Remsense 03:14, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Exactly it is, all list articles are intentionally blank, but some history articles also intentionally blank. 49.150.13.247 (talk) 03:24, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Right, I'm saying I don't understand why almost all "in/of" articles in this vein shouldn't have an SD of none. Remsense 03:25, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
All I say is that replacing a WP:SDNONE with "National flag" under a "Flag of [nation]" article isn't automatically needed. Although understand the need for consistency among flags, but unsure of the idea of adding/maintaining "National flag" SD's everywhere. DankJae 08:00, 28 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
It is necessary to have short descriptions for flag articles. If you want to seek a consensus for short descriptions, please request for a comment. 49.150.13.247 (talk) 09:38, 28 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
No it is not necessary for filled SDs on flag articles, they are treated like any other article. Editors may decide whether a filled SD is needed or if SDNONE is fine for the purpose. DankJae 11:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Should "intentionally none" hidden notes be moved inside the template?

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I see a lot of articles that have at the top:

{{Short description|none}}<!-- This short description is INTENTIONALLY "none" - please see WP:SDNONE before you consider changing it! -->

However, certain tools for cleaning up template order like to move notes below all the templates at the top of page, separating this note from the short description template. I therefore think these should generally be changed to:

{{Short description|none<!-- This short description is INTENTIONALLY "none" - please see WP:SDNONE before you consider changing it! -->}}

Is there any reason why having the hidden text inside the template would not work? BD2412 T 20:15, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Why are these tools moving comments away from the location where an editor intended them to live? A diff showing such an edit would be helpful. – Jonesey95 (talk) 20:42, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
I don't have a diff at my fingertips, but I use AWB, which has this as one of its "general fixes" settings, and on more than one occasion I have had to move the hidden text back to the right place after making the AWB edit for disambiguation or comma spacing. BD2412 T 20:55, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
BD2412, this is a diff: 2021 New York City mayoral election (Diff ~1234286311). — Qwerfjkltalk 08:08, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks. I have posted a request for AWB to stop doing this. – Jonesey95 (talk) 12:52, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Discussion at Wikipedia:Bot requests § Change hyphens to en-dashes

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  You are invited to join the discussion at Wikipedia:Bot requests § Change hyphens to en-dashes. — Qwerfjkltalk 09:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia:Database reports/Short descriptions containing invalid space characters report questions

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I've cleared around 100-200 entries from Wikipedia:Database reports/Short descriptions containing invalid space characters. The two left use & nbsp;m which is correct per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers#Unit names and symbols so not sure how to handle these. Additionally, is this tracking something that can be coded into the template itself? Having a tracking category at the bottom of the page allows more editors to see any issues. Gonnym (talk) 13:34, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I rewrote the short descriptions to avoid any need for the nbsp — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 13:52, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
It appears that these invalid characters are still being added via copy/paste, despite this bug fix that was posted on April 11 by Novem Linguae. Maybe the fix has not been deployed yet? – Jonesey95 (talk) 16:13, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Lifespan tags

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For WP:WPSHORTDESC, I feel there should be an initiative to add lifespan tags (e.g. "(1940–2010)") to biographical short descriptions. Roasted (talk) 22:13, 7 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Go ahead. The instructions support it. I think the consensus here is that populating missing short descriptions is the most important task. – Jonesey95 (talk) 22:26, 7 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
If we include lifespan dates for biographies of deceased subjects, but not birth year for BLPs (e.g., (born xxxx) – which seems less useful in the context of a SD), it could also serve as a handy shorthand to differentiate between the two at a glance. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 11:20, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Dates are recommended for both, unless there is other essential information to be included and the dates would make the SD too long. WP:SDDATES also notes that "birthdates for living people should not be included unless sourced within the article." MichaelMaggs (talk) 12:26, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for pointing that out. Might we consider changing the guidance on this if the logic for doing so is considered sound? -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 14:13, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
What did you have in mind? BLPs and other biographies are already distinquishable (at least when usable dates are available). One has (born xxxx), the other (xxxx–yyyy). MichaelMaggs (talk) 15:46, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I don't know how to do a query to determine how often each is used, but my hunch is that "born" is used much less frequently. My suggestion would be to not use it in SDs full-stop. If this were the norm, then seeing parenthetical dates in an SD would be a super-quick indicator that the subject is deceased. It would also give us eleven extra characters to use for living subjects (if needed).-- Cl3phact0 (talk) 16:02, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
To be honest I don't think that would be an improvement, and it loses useful information for BLPs: it's quite handy to be able to tell at a glance the rough age of the person. Are they 20 or 90? Those eleven characters are always available, anyway, if there is something more important than a date that needs to be included. MichaelMaggs (talk) 16:14, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ok, thanks. It's something I tend to do (and find useful). I'm not wed to the idea beyond my own quirks. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 16:20, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Help needed for short description of climate change

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Would anyone from this WikiProject like to weigh into the brainstorming of the short description for the article on climate change? I think it's a very important Wikipedia article and I'd like to get the short description just right. We've been tossing around some options here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Climate_change#Changing_the_current_short_description? Please join the discussion and help if you can. EMsmile (talk) 10:02, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

A bug at ice shelf?

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This is really odd: the article for ice shelf doesn't let me change its short description. Has anyone ever had this before? I can change it to "none" but when I try to change it to "Large platform of glacial ice" it goes back to "Antarctic ice shelf in the Amundsen Sea" which is wrong. Help? EMsmile (talk) 14:13, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Odd indeed. Even more so in that the corrected text appears as {{Short description|Large platform of glacial ice}} in the text editor. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 14:42, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
It is caused by {{excerpt|Thwaites Ice Shelf|templates=.*|file=no}}. The short description is being included by the excerpt. Because the SD in that excerpt is lower in the article, it is chosen by the MediaWiki software as the article's SD. – Jonesey95 (talk) 15:01, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the quick help! What do I have to do to fix it? And what does the "templates=.*" mean in the excerpt template syntax? EMsmile (talk) 15:38, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I seem to have found the solution: I removed the "templates=.*" at {{excerpt|Thwaites Ice Shelf|templates=.*|file=no}} and now it works. Pinging User:InformationToKnowledge because I think they might have added that syntax piece, for their information. EMsmile (talk) 20:01, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Removing that parameter also removes information from the Disruption of Thwaites Ice Shelf section (e.g., coordinates which are included in the source using the {{coord}} template), alas. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 05:57, 10 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Strict interpretation of WP:SD40

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This edit by Ltbdl seems to advocate a stricter reading of WP:SD40 than I have generally seen applied. There are many articles with descriptions in the 40-60 range where rote shortening is not an improvement and I believe this is one of those cases. ~Kvng (talk) 23:58, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

One thing I think about is I haven't really internalized how SDs longer than 40 characters get truncated. Does it just cut off the end of the string? Remsense 00:01, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Both of the SDs were in direct contradiction of WP:SDNOTDEF. It's helpful to read the whole page, not just one bullet point. – Jonesey95 (talk) 01:03, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Forgive me, but I can't see how they directly contradict NOTDEF? Are they jargon-y, or? What would you have, I'm curious. Remsense 01:10, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
"When a computing process stops progressing or responding to input" and "When a computing process stops progressing" are both definitions of the computing term "hang". See, for example, Cambridge Dictionary: "(of a computer program or system) to stop working or appearing on a screen". – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:47, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I'm still puzzled, as There is no objection to an otherwise-suitable short description that also happens to work as a definition. seems plain to me. It's not at all a rhetorical question, I really am curious what your ideal SD here is. Remsense 05:56, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The wording you quote means that even though a short description happens to work as a definition, it still complies with this page in all respects. Your example of 65 characters is not "otherwise-suitable" if it's that long. I'd suggest When a process becomes non-responsive (37 characters), as not only complying with this page, but also being more informative than "Term in computing". That may or may not work as a definition (it's a rather poor one if it is), but that doesn't matter as it is "otherwise-suitable" and achieves its its purpose. MichaelMaggs (talk) 09:01, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@MichaelMaggs congratulations, you're the winner! This is the kind of work that often needs to be done to shorten these longer descriptions. Just removing information until you achieve 40 characters may not be a net improvement; They often need to be rewritten. If you're not up for that, leave them longer. ~Kvng (talk) 13:16, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Remsense it is hard to predict exactly where the description will be truncated because how it is used is apparently controlled more by graphic designers than librarians. The consensus is we can assume that at 40 characters or less it is unlikely to be truncated. Between 40 and 60 it may be truncated but that will likely be tolerable. At over 100 truncation could be ugly. ~Kvng (talk) 13:25, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The truncation usually does not interfere with the usefulness of the SD. There is no 40-character "limit", and SDs should not be made worse in an attempt to enforce this nonexistent "limit". It is useful to read the discussion that led to the current wording of the guidance, and to look at the screen shots linked from that discussion. – Jonesey95 (talk) 14:00, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
And, with respect, your proposal is an example of worsening an SD presumably to shorten it. ~Kvng (talk) 15:09, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
My goal with that change was to comply with the overall guidance, not to shorten the SD. As I said above and in previous discussions, I don't think the 40-character guidance is a big deal. A good, truncated 60-character description is better than a bad 39-character description. – Jonesey95 (talk) 17:39, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The point I was getting at above is it really would depend on how it's truncated, imo. Remsense 诉 22:00, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Jonesey95, your effort to comply with the overall guidance did not improve the SD in this case IMO:
Term in computing < When a computing process stops progressing < When a process becomes non-responsive.
If edits don't improve things, we shouldn't be making them. Either the guidance needs work or your interpretation of it needs work or my understanding of a good SD needs calibration. ~Kvng (talk) 17:05, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Bug with List of Coastal Carolina Chanticleers head baseball coaches

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I typically use search to get lists of articles that qualify for WP:SDNONE, however, -hastemplate:"short description" prefix:"List of" keeps showing List of Coastal Carolina Chanticleers head baseball coaches, despite having a short descriptions. What's going on here? I have not seen this on any other page. -1ctinus📝🗨 14:04, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Interesting. I fixed that one yesterday, but the search system is seeing an older version of the article. I nudged it a few times, so maybe it will catch up... — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 17:18, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

We are under 900,000 pages without a short description

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under 900k short descs

Greetings from Wikiproject Short Descriptions! If you are reading this, this means that we have reached the sub-900,000 mark! To facilitate this continued progress, I am going to ask a bunch of questions for administrators and other members of the WikiProject for conesus for formatting for short descriptions, and some requests for fellow editors to continue adding short descriptions to parts. -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

1. How should [x in y] articles be formatted in the United States? a. (x in State) b. (x in State, US) c. (x in State, United States) d. (x in State, U.S.) -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've been previously doing something along the lines of "Statue in California, USA" but I think "Statue in California, US" makes sense as well. The others - United States, U.S. - are needlessly long (especially when 40 characters is a recommended limit). LR.127 (talk) 16:41, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
[thing] in [state], USMOS:USA says Do not use U.S.A. or USA ...GhostInTheMachine talk to me 19:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Generally agree, but if space is short and [state] is unambiguous, "US" could be omitted. For example "[Thing] in [Texas]" but "[Thing] in [Georgia], US" (ie not Georgia (country)) MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:01, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I'm not seeing a consensus here if either A or B is the preferred option. Either way, I'd really like to see this added to the page when consensus is reached. I'm in favor of B -1ctinus📝🗨 19:24, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
It depends entirely on context, to ensure comprehensibility and usefulness to the reader. I don't accept that we need to choose exactly one of the four options you've proposed. MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:27, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Assuming that the country and/or state is not mentioned or implied in the article name and there is no potential for confusion with using "US", that should likely be the standard per MOS:USA, especially in cases where it would go over 40 characters. If there is room to fit "United States" within 40 characters, that can also be done if there are no other helpful words that could be used. In terms of automation, I guess B would be best, but it should be not be a requirement. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 22:42, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Consensus – dont use non fiction in short description to describe books
2. Should non-fiction books include "non-fiction" in the short description? Typically, genres are not included in short descriptions. -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
No. Say what it is, not what it is not. Books should start with the year of publication — 2189 book by Jacob von Hogflume, 2050 novel by Charles Morningstar, 2058 anthology by Linda MartinGhostInTheMachine talk to me 19:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
No, agree with @GhostInTheMachine MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:02, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Probably not. If there is more space in the SD after including the date, type of work, and author name for a non-fiction book, then a specific field is preferable (e.g. "1997 history book by Charles Smith" vs. "1997 non-fiction book by Charles Smith"). Otherwise, fine to just leave as "book". -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 22:48, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
3. Do "x of y" and "x in y" articles qualify for WP:SDNONE for subnational entities and municipalities, even if the average reader may not know of the region or municipality? (e.g. History of Jiangxi) If they do not qualify for WP:SDNONE, what is their proper format? -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Places should generally end with ... [top sub-division], [country]states in America, counties in England, oblasts in Russia etc. Events that happened in places can get lengthy, so sometimes it is necessary to reduce to country only. The country should always be included — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 19:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I’m not exactly following with what you are saying. What would be the proper SD format in your opinion for History of Jiangxi or Geology of Pembrokeshire, for example? -1ctinus📝🗨 21:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Both of those should be WP:SDNONE. The description for Jiangxi can explain that it's a province in China, but it's not the job of the description for History of Jiangxi to indicate this. I'm not opposed to the below suggestions along the lines of "History of the Chinese province" for subnational entities. Uhai (talk) 03:53, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
WP:SDNONE may work, but is not very user-friendly if the term is likely to be unfamiliar to the reader. Prefer "Aspect of Chinese history", "Aspect of Welsh history" MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:05, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think "Aspect of Chinese history" is not as good as say "History of the Chinese province"/"Chinese provincial history". If they do not know where Jiangxi is, there are multiple other things they might think it might be that might also be aspects of Chinese history. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 23:06, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I don't think SDNONE should be used for subnational/municipal entities. We can (somewhat) reasonably expect people to know countries, but not anything below that. The SDs for these articles should at least indicate what country is being discussed and ideally the level being covered if possible to fit within the SD (e.g. province, state, municipal). -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 22:54, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I’ve generally agreed with that, however, everything that is suggested is super ugly sounding and repeats the title slightly. The examples given "History of the Chinese province"/"Chinese provincial history" sound unpleasant and repeat the word history. This is my biggest problem with WP:SDNONE. is it "sufficiently detailed"? -1ctinus📝🗨 00:42, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Repeating one word isn't the worst, especially when it is "history" as opposed to something more jargony. We should assume that reader will know what that means instead of needlessly applying elegant variation. In respect to your last sentence, I would be shocked if most readers would be able to say that Jiangxi is a Chinese province as opposed to a number of other Chinese things that might plausibly have "History of X" articles. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 01:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
4. Do all filmography, discography, and bibliography articles qualify for WP:SDNONE? -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes and I have been adding none SDs to such articles for a while now. Many of these articles that I have not touched also have none SDs, so there may be an implicit consensus here assuming it's not a very small group of editors adding them. The rationale here is similar to above: Tom Cruise's SD should indicate he's an American actor born in 1962 but not Tom Cruise filmography's SD. Regardless; filmographies, discographies, and bibliographies are essentially list articles which should be WP:SDNONE anyway. Uhai (talk) 04:07, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
There's no overarching rule. WP:SDNONE is less informative than "American actor's filmography", which is what I'd use MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:08, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
My issue is that that feels a little clunky because of the reuse of "filmography". I think I've seen some filmographies with SDs along the lines of "List of film performances by the American actor" which I like better but these are perhaps a little lengthy. I'm not opposed to either option instead of SDNONE. Uhai (talk) 23:07, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Maybe the shorter "Performances by the American actor" would be better? We wouldn't need to clarify film since "filmography" is in the title. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 03:27, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think SDNONE can apply, since the non-name "-ography" part of the title tells the reader what the article is going to be about. Would not be opposed to what Michael Maggs mentioned though as long as it tracks with the main biographical article. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 23:07, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
5. Which election articles qualify for WP:SDNONE? Does 1804 Connecticut gubernatorial election? Does 1960 New Zealand general election? -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've been previously using WP:SDNONE for all election articles. I think it should stay that way. LR.127 (talk) 16:42, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Most election articles have a fully describing title and so none is fine. If there is a temptation to add a SD, then perhaps the article title should be changed instead? — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 19:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
My concern with election articles is when the name of the election doesn't indicate the office(s) being elected. What does a "general election" in New Zealand mean? Does it only include parliamentary elections, or are there local offices as well? Are there any nationwide referenda or other offices chosen? For 2022 Brazilian general election, an SD of "2022 elections for Brazilian congress and executives" answers the question of where, when, and what the scope of the election is in a way that the article title doesn't. But it's also not a good article title, since the name of the election is the "general election". So I think SDnone needs to be a bit more judicious when it comes to election articles. VanIsaac, GHTV contWpWS 21:33, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The SD doesn't need to define what "general election" means for a given country; the article lede can clarify which offices are being elected. I don't see anything wrong with general election articles being WP:SDNONE. For 2022 Brazilian general election, "2022 elections for Brazilian congress and executives" is borderline too lengthy and unnecessarily restates the year and the word "election". The inability to avoid restating words from the article title is an indicator that the SD should be none. Uhai (talk) 04:16, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
These can be hard, as titles often include words that are unfamiliar outside the relevant country or region, eg "general", "gubernatorial", "union", "midterm", "primary" and so on. If there's no way to indicate even in general terms what or who is being elected, without writing a definition, it's best to be very general, making sure the country is included if not already in the title eg "State election in India". MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:25, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think SDNONE would apply to elections at the national level. At the subnational level, I think it is helpful to state what country the election is in and what level it is (e.g. "French regional election", "Japanese municipal election", Malaysian federal by-election"). Unlike countries, we cannot reasonably expect readers to be familiar with the overwhelming majority of subnational divisions or municipalities, and it is helpful to indicate what the elections are to readers. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 23:10, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Transparency, this is the stance I agree with when it comes down to elections. -1ctinus📝🗨 00:44, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
template capitalization doesnt matter, duh
6. Should the template be lowercase (short description) or uppercase (Short description)? Is it editor preference?-1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The SD helper script uses uppercase (Short description), but I don't think it matters. LR.127 (talk) 16:42, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
This does not matter, both "work". I have seen edits that just change the template name case and these are just evil — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 19:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Doesn't matter. MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:28, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I don't think this matters? If there is a meaningful, technical difference, than use whatever is best obviously. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 23:11, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Doesn't matter for either of them. Vulcan❯❯❯Sphere! 00:27, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
7. Should short descriptions include unsourced birth and death dates? Should tools allowing for quick extraction of birth and death dates for short descriptions be deprecated? -1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
If birth and death dates are unsourced, it should be removed from the article altogether (and not included in short descriptions, either). I'm not sure about automated tools. LR.127 (talk) 16:44, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
The SD should be "inspired" from the lead, and possibly the infobox and categories. The SD should not include information missing from the article. If the dates are unsourced, then they should be removed from the article or, at the very least, be flagged as {{CN}}. Sometimes, of course, there is a little room for patience with a very new article, but if the SD adds unsourced data, then you must re-visit the article a short time later and confirm that the data is now sourced. — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 20:04, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Everything in the SD should be supported by the article text and everything in the article text should be supported by reliable sources. Tools that extract data from the article for the SD should be fine if human-assisted rather than operating fully autonomously. Uhai (talk) 04:24, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
WP:SDCONTENT says The short description is part of the article content, and is subject to the normal rules on content. In practice, dates without in-line citations are sometimes copied from the article body to the SD, which generally isn't too serious a problem, as WP:V requires in-line citations only for material challenged or likely to be challenged. The situation for living people is different, though as WP:BLPSOURCES demands that unsourced contentious information (which is very likely to include a birthdate) "must be removed immediately". That's reflected at WP:SDDATES which states Care should be taken when the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy applies: birthdates for living people should not be included unless sourced within the article. The answer to your second question is likely to be no if the tool is human-assisted (each entry checked one by one by an experienced editor). MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:49, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ideally the dates should be supported by in-line citations, but unless it is a BLP (in which case the date should be sourced or removed from the body per other existing BLP rules), there isn't too much harm in using the dates in the article. Probably can be left to editor judgment, unless there is a way to filter for BLP entries. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 23:13, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
8. What is the format for sports drafts such as 2004 WNBA draft? As you can see, my attempt was rather clunky. Does it qualify for WP:SDNONE?-1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
It is surprising (?) how many sports article fail to mention the actual sport. Nobody knows what WNBA stands for, so initially the article lead needs to talk about what sport is involved. Once the lead is fixed, the SD often follows naturally — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 20:14, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've struggled with what to do for sports draft articles. I think the annual event articles could be WP:SDNONE while articles like WNBA draft and NFL draft could indicate the sport and the frequency of the event. I don't think any of these aforementioned articles' SDs should describe what a sports draft is, since Draft (sports) exists to do this. Perhaps something like:
I explained above that one should avoid restating words from the article title but I should clarify that my general rule is that one word being restated is okay. Uhai (talk) 04:39, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
It's really important to indicate the sport: "WNBA", for example, means nothing to many (most?) readers outside the US. WP:SDNONE is not appropriate for 2004 WNBA draft. It could be "US Women's basketball player selection" (38 characters). MichaelMaggs (talk) 19:59, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I'd not be against draft articles being handled this way, although I think the addition of the word "league" may be beneficial for clarity. The way that is written makes me think of a player selection for the US national team or something rather than for a league. Uhai (talk) 23:03, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I also want to give attention to some types of pages that I would appreciate people adding short descriptions to.

  • Gaelic sports
  • Locomotives
  • Satellites
  • Minor planets/asteroids
  • Finishing infobox book (I did most of them in June)
  • It took 87 days to get from under a million to 900,000. By that rate, all articles will have a short description by October 2026. However, if we have consensus on formats, I believe that we can achieve that target sooner. Here's some admins I want input from: GhostInTheMachine Uhai Qwerfjkl-1ctinus📝🗨 12:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

WMF project on Machine Assisted Article Descriptions

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WMF developers have been working for some time on a tool for mobile users, providing editors working across various different language Wikipedias with automated suggestions for writing an 'article description' (their term for what is known here as a short description). They have recently reported on the results of their trials, and are seeking further feedback. As the main project is hosted on MediaWiki, at mw:Wikimedia Apps/Team/Android/Machine Assisted Article Descriptions and discussion is at mw:Talk:Wikimedia Apps/Team/Android/Machine Assisted Article Descriptions, many experienced English Wikipedia SD contributors may not be aware of it. User:Jonesey95 and I have commented on the talk page, and additional views would be welcome there. MichaelMaggs (talk) 22:18, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Was this a trial on 2 May 2023? If so, I saw 61 SD edits tagged as #machine-suggestion. My notes say that I subsequently changed 47 of them. — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 20:30, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

"WP:SD" listed at Redirects for discussion

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  The redirect WP:SD has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 August 18 § WP:SD until a consensus is reached. unsigned post by HouseBlaster (talk · he/they) 22:25, 18 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Countries considered harmful

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Steve Mann (inventor) is a researcher known for his work on wearable computing, but the examples here seem to suggest he should be described as "Canadian engineer (born 1962)", which is absurd and, more to the point, actively harmful even for disambiguation purposes: I'm very familiar with his work but had no idea he was Canadian.

While there are professions like politician or athlete where nationality is important, this is rarely the case for scientists or (say) musicians, plus cases like Nikola Tesla or Freddie Mercury open up a massive can of worms on what exactly that nationality is anyway. Can we add some additional examples of good short descriptions for people without putting nationality up front? Jpatokal (talk) 11:11, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Roastedbeanz1: since I reverted your good faith edit that inspired this. Jpatokal (talk) 11:14, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hmmmm. Come to think of it, there are very large potential sections of biographies (etc.) where there's clearly a more recognizable single qualifier to use. Remsense ‥  11:31, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Short descriptions follow the article. The facts in the short description are derived mainly from the facts as given in the lead. Steve Mann's article starts: William Stephen George Mann (born 8 June 1962) is a Canadian engineer,... and the infobox starts Born William Stephen George Mann 8 June 1962 (age 62) Hamilton, Ontario – Nationality Canadian so he was indeed born in Canada and is Canadian. His nationality is not in any way doubted or confused, so happily belongs in the short description — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 11:51, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sure, but isn't the point of a SD slightly different—i.e. for disambiguation over definition? Remsense ‥  11:58, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
"Canadian wearable tech engineer (born 1962)" is 43 characters, if wearable tech is what he's best known for. -- Patar knight - chat/contributions 19:41, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
That works for that article. There's never any requirement to include the nationality, though, if there's something more important to be covered. And sometimes the nationality is contentious and is best omitted anyway - WP:SDAVOID. MichaelMaggs (talk) 20:09, 19 August 2024 (UTC)Reply