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One Night with the King: Revision history


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  • curprev 14:3414:34, 3 April 2023Mike Schwartz talk contribs 14,070 bytes +7 →‎Plot: Remedy another long run-on sentence by breaking it up into two sentences. Also replace a pronoun, ("he") by a noun [phrase] ("The king"), near the new sentence boundary, in the middle of (what was) an extremely long sentence that was -- again -- missing a conjunction in the middle. In this case, even inserting a conjunction in the middle of this run-on sentence would not have helped very much, since it was already more like two sentences, that were just missing a period between them.) undo
  • curprev 14:1814:18, 3 April 2023Mike Schwartz talk contribsm 14,063 bytes +12 →‎Plot: Remedy a -- (stupendously long) -- run-on sentence, which -- (besides being excessively long) -- (and having multiple parenthetical phrases, analogous to this edit comment) -- was actually MISSING a conjunction or something like that, right before the part where it says "she is taken in with the rest of the selected women [...]". Instead of adding the missing conjunction to this sentence, insert a sentence boundary, and add a word ("Eventually") instead of capitalizing the word "she". undo

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