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Something from a different continent this time. I’ve modelled it on similar heads of state FLs. I’ve improved the lead and table accessibility. -[[User:MPGuy2824|MPGuy2824]] ([[User talk:MPGuy2824|talk]]) 14:19, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
:P.S. This is for the [[WP:DCWC|Developing Countries WikiContest]]. I encourage reviewers to join soon, if it seems interesting (since July 15 is the last date that they are accepting new signups). -[[User:MPGuy2824|MPGuy2824]] ([[User talk:MPGuy2824|talk]]) 14:21, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
==== Comments by Staraction ====
* "The first constitution to specify the powers and duties of the president was the constitution of 1974 adopted in 1976." --> "The first constitution to specify the powers and duties of the president was the constitution of 1974, ''which was'' adopted in 1976."
* "The constitution, written by Micombero, affirmed his position as the first president of Burundi." --> "Written by Micombero, the consistution affirmed his position as the first president of Burundi"; also include some more details on what this affirmation meant, perhaps? What powers did it grant him (back then)?
* "The powers of the president derive from the 2005 constitution implemented as a result of the 2000 Arusha Accords after the Burundian Civil War." --> "''Currently'', the powers of the president derive from the [...]"
* Include more Wikilinks for clarity - ie. [[Supreme Court of Burundi|Supreme Court]], [[List of current Burundian governors|provincial governors]], etc.
* See also section has an indented bullet - is this intentional?
* I might be mistaken but I believe source [1] (the Xinhua article) does not verify the claim in the article that "Nkurunziza was elected for a third term, as the Constitutional Court considered that first, indirectly elected term, did not count towards the limit". [https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2015/5/14/burundi-court-forced-to-validate-leaders-third-term This Al-Jazeera article for the footnote] might be a better source, while the Xinhua article can still be used for the infobox. (Personally I wouldn't use Xinhua but I suppose it isn't deprecated)
Thanks for this list, it's quite important and I'm excited to see it become featured! [[User:Staraction|<span style="color: #FF9079">Star</span><span style="color: purple">action</span>]] ([[User_talk:Staraction|<span style="color: #FF9079">talk</span>]] | [[Special:Contribs/Staraction|<span style="color: purple">contribs</span>]]) 19:12, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
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