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==Revising this article==
I am currently revising this article for a Poverty, Justice, and Human Capabilities class that I am taking at Rice University. I have added a lot of additional information, including a lot of statistics on maternal and child mortality rates and reasons why women do not use birth control or why it is not available. I am also planning to include data from studies that have been done on family planning issues in those countries. I have also edited the writing and tried to improve the organization. My sources will consist of scholarly articles and possibly newspaper articles. There will be a full list of the sources I have used in my preliminary research and more information about this project on my home page. Any feedback about this project would be appreciated. Thank you.[[User:Juliannadrew|Juliannadrew]] ([[User talk:Juliannadrew|talk]]) 05:10, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
==Peer Review 1==
Good job adding so many relevant statistics!
I think the “Economic” section of the article would benefit most from some more editing. The source used does not keep a neutral point of view, so it should be removed, or another source presenting a different argument should be added. I think this section’s comprehensiveness is not as high as it could be, so hopefully you can find more sources to add additional, pertinent information. There are a few more problems of neutrality in the article, specifically the introduction. By deleting words like “only” you can create neutrality because then you will be simply stating facts and not making comments on those facts. Finally, the map at the top is somewhat hard to read. I think this problem can be fixed by simply making the image bigger on the page.
Overall, I enjoyed the readability of your article and I thought you did a great job of reorganizing it. [[User:Alardenoit|Alardenoit]] ([[User talk:Alardenoit|talk]]) 05:52, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
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