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==Bibliography==
This article should have a separate Bibliography for the short reference style, ie the inline citations are naming books which are listed separately in the booklist.
== Improvements needed for DYK nomination ==
Editors should accomplish the following prior to DYK nomination
* Change all inline citations to proper citation format (see WP:Cite) using appropriate template {{done}}
* Add appropriate navigational templates {{done}}
* Add further reading section {{done}}
* Add See also section {{done}}
* Add appropriate infobox if one can be found
* Add GeoGroupTemplate and coordinate for major locations during flight. {{done}}, a few more to add through
* Consider citing additional sources on Yellowstone history, not just sources on Nez Perce history--ie, Chittenden, Haines and Schullery {{done}}
--[[User:Mike Cline|Mike Cline]] ([[User talk:Mike Cline|talk]]) 15:00, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
== Info re killings at Mammoth ==
I don't think the two people killed at Mammoth were tourists, rather they were working in the park. I will find source to support and change the text. --[[User:Mike Cline|Mike Cline]] ([[User talk:Mike Cline|talk]]) 15:02, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
::The two people who were killed, Dietrich and Kenck, are called tourists by Hampton, p. 234. Possibly others were also killed? [[User:Smallchief|Smallchief]] ([[User talk:Smallchief|talk]]) 16:53, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
== Info re Red Rock Pass==
The [[Red Rock Pass]] linked in the article is the wrong one. Additionally the correct Red Rock Pass is on the border of Montana/Idaho, so this will need a bit of rewriting.--[[User:Mike Cline|Mike Cline]] ([[User talk:Mike Cline|talk]]) 15:46, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
::Yes,you're right. Wrong Red Rock Pass. [[User:Smallchief|Smallchief]] ([[User talk:Smallchief|talk]]) 16:54, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
== Potential DYK hooks ==
Here are three potential DYK hooks for this article
* ... that in August 1877 a force of [[Nez Perce]] indians under the leadership of [[Chief Joseph]] evaded the pursuing U.S. Army as they made their way across [[Yellowstone National Park]].
* ... that in August 1877 [[Nez Perce]] indians, fleeing the U.S. Army killed two tourists and wounded others in [[Yellowstone National Park]]
* ... that during the [[Nez Perce]] flight across [[Yellowstone National Park]] in 1877 they killed two tourists from [[Helena, Montana]] and wounded others from [[Radersburg, Montana]].
--[[User:Mike Cline|Mike Cline]] ([[User talk:Mike Cline|talk]]) 19:19, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
::Your choice for the DYK. They all look fine to me. And thanks for your hard work on the article. That's a neat trick putting in geographic coordinates for places. I'll see if I can learn how to do that for my next article. [[User:Smallchief|Smallchief]] ([[User talk:Smallchief|talk]]) 20:49, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
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