While I felt that the book started out strong I felt that after about three quarters of the way through that it started to repeat itself. Maybe repeatWhile I felt that the book started out strong I felt that after about three quarters of the way through that it started to repeat itself. Maybe repeat itself isn't the right word but it certainly did not keep my attention the way that the first half did. The attention to detail is still there and the feeling is still there but the needs and desire are less than they should be. I don't think they are carried all the way through the book like they should be....more
This book was amazing and incredibly fun. I love the story of our thief and our royal mage finding each other and their lives. It is well written and This book was amazing and incredibly fun. I love the story of our thief and our royal mage finding each other and their lives. It is well written and developed and the erotic content is secondary to the story even though it is very supportive of it. I love the story as a whole and the development of the characters. Sometimes though it can be hard to follow as there are changes in venue that are not previewed or followed up much without any warning. I am waiting for part two....more
An amazing thriller that would be amazing if only they had made it just a bit longer and focused a bit more on the two main characters. I really want An amazing thriller that would be amazing if only they had made it just a bit longer and focused a bit more on the two main characters. I really want the next couple of books to be more focused and have more to do with the main villain than I do anything else....more
A well written and entertaining book that is entertaining and fun I had issues with the story. It is missing some key points that I hope are resolved A well written and entertaining book that is entertaining and fun I had issues with the story. It is missing some key points that I hope are resolved in the later books. I really wish that more was resolved in this book but it is still very enjoyable. ...more
This is a really well written, innovative and fun book. I really enjoyed it. I think that some of the ideas are well worth the thought that went into This is a really well written, innovative and fun book. I really enjoyed it. I think that some of the ideas are well worth the thought that went into it and it is more fun than it has any right to be for being as short as it is....more
While a fun idea for a novel a short book like this is wasted on just principle of what it could be. The characters are not given the time they deservWhile a fun idea for a novel a short book like this is wasted on just principle of what it could be. The characters are not given the time they deserve because there is no space to work on creating them. The writing style though is very well done and has a great flow and can be so much better if the just develop the characters....more
While a fun read and quick with some mystery elements I did find it rather like a lot of other erotic books in the same genres that are out there sadlWhile a fun read and quick with some mystery elements I did find it rather like a lot of other erotic books in the same genres that are out there sadly. I did however find the characters well developed and worth following. When I get a chance I will be reading the next book....more
What an interesting story. I really enjoyed the way that the detectives in the story end up being the main characters even though they are outside theWhat an interesting story. I really enjoyed the way that the detectives in the story end up being the main characters even though they are outside the actual events on the whole. They are more important as storytellers than any others that I have seen in a long time....more
History and paranormal activity with a good mix of erotic writing to make everything in the whole story just great. The only t hing that bothered me iHistory and paranormal activity with a good mix of erotic writing to make everything in the whole story just great. The only t hing that bothered me is that it was just too darn short. A well written and good story that I wish I could have read all night long instead of just the short time it took....more
This is a great collection of erotica shorts that are stimulating and very well written even if they are a bit over the top for my tastes though I didThis is a great collection of erotica shorts that are stimulating and very well written even if they are a bit over the top for my tastes though I did have to remind myself that they are sci-fi and probably a bit more experimental than based in any reality....more
While this book tries to be more than just erotica or science fiction it ends up being a sort of end of the world, start of a new world, erotic, thrilWhile this book tries to be more than just erotica or science fiction it ends up being a sort of end of the world, start of a new world, erotic, thriller, love triangle, family involved, cross over sort of mess that is hard to follow. It is not a bad read and the characters are really good, not great mind you just good but they are very likable. I will say that I could not find one of them that I could love as a main character and I think that is because they changed just as I started to get to know them. ...more
While a fun short read I would not call this a true sci-fi book nor a true erotica book either as it has some of the best and worst of both worlds. ThWhile a fun short read I would not call this a true sci-fi book nor a true erotica book either as it has some of the best and worst of both worlds. The fact that the traveling woman here feels the need to debase herself in so many ways makes me angry but yet in some ways she also is arousing when she stands up for herself and uses her power and intelligence to get what she wants and deserves. Overal not as well written as I wanted but not as bad as it could have been....more
This book couldn't be less erotic or sexual if I had read it on a bathroom wall. I have actually been sort of cruel there but there was some things abThis book couldn't be less erotic or sexual if I had read it on a bathroom wall. I have actually been sort of cruel there but there was some things about it that are redeaming in the fact that it was written as part of a whole that I have not yet read so the rest of the story may be better....more
A quick and fun retelling of the Little Red Riding Hood Tale in a very adult setting. I would not let a child read this but I would let anyone who wouA quick and fun retelling of the Little Red Riding Hood Tale in a very adult setting. I would not let a child read this but I would let anyone who would like to hear a cautionary tale about being in the wrong place at the wrong time with an adult twist. ...more
While an amazingly strong intro to this book makes it well worth reading the later part is not as strong as I wanted. I love the style that the authorWhile an amazingly strong intro to this book makes it well worth reading the later part is not as strong as I wanted. I love the style that the author writes in and the fact that they are great at creating characters that one can get involved in and really care about. I just find the more sexual parts of the books at the end to be lacking somehow. I really enjoy the books though I am not sure if I could afford to buy them all. The amount of writing the author has is amazing and I need to check out more....more
While this book has plenty of development and is rather fun to read it lacks true readability. There is not much here that is bad but I have to say thWhile this book has plenty of development and is rather fun to read it lacks true readability. There is not much here that is bad but I have to say that I wanted more from this book. I wanted more in total of everything in the book. I wish it was longer and had more development though there was more development in this book than in most adult books and it does draw you in I wanted more....more
Once again not a bad story and surprising character development for such a short story as well. I was impressed with the way and means of the story anOnce again not a bad story and surprising character development for such a short story as well. I was impressed with the way and means of the story and the follow up of the entire story though I will say that the sex in this one was a bit disappointing overall compared to what I was expecting. ...more
