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23 September 2023
- 17:3317:33, 23 September 2023 diff hist −223 Fred Astaire Restructured sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:2717:27, 23 September 2023 diff hist −75 Fred Astaire →Death: We cannot possibly include language that describes a person's last wish without a source to support it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 September 2023
- 17:1317:13, 20 September 2023 diff hist −4 Yukon Sorry, kitty stepped on keyboard right as I hit publish! Corrected the mistake. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:1217:12, 20 September 2023 diff hist +3 Yukon Corrected misspelling. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 September 2023
- 22:4122:41, 12 September 2023 diff hist −103 Jake Lacy Removed unnecessary language, not appropriate for encyclopedia content. Separated sentence that had an unnecessary semicolon. Periods and commas are the workhorses of the English language and should be punctuation of first choice. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 September 2023
- 22:0022:00, 9 September 2023 diff hist +60 Inky Johnson Improved source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:5721:57, 9 September 2023 diff hist +156 Inky Johnson Made style corrections, removed content not verified by sources, corrected sources and added a section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 August 2023
- 05:0605:06, 31 August 2023 diff hist +102 Steve Cropper Fixed style, grammar and source errors. Removed unnecessary quotation. Always paraphrase quotations except in rare instances. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 August 2023
- 19:2519:25, 29 August 2023 diff hist −10 Cat Stevens Fixed style and grammar errors. Tag: Visual edit
27 August 2023
- 17:3617:36, 27 August 2023 diff hist −8 Charles M. Blow Removed time reference "current." "Current" as of when? The minute his job changes this becomes an inaccurate statement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 August 2023
- 19:0319:03, 26 August 2023 diff hist −44 Ruth Etting Removed unnecessary words and restructured sentences for better style and readability. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 August 2023
- 17:2017:20, 24 August 2023 diff hist −6 Geodis Park Removed link that does not exist Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 August 2023
- 18:4518:45, 22 August 2023 diff hist −406 Derrick Henry Since Wikipedia articles are to be a summary of the facts of the subject, quotations rarely achieve that limited goal. They should be either removed or paraphrased. In this case, paraphrasing was not necessary since the only thing the quote did was to prove what was already sufficiently stated in four simple words in the previous sentence. Also, we need to make efforts to not simply cut, paste and quote information from third parties, but to paraphrase there, also. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:3618:36, 22 August 2023 diff hist −9 D. J. Moore Removed unnecessary word. The word "previously" is almost never needed, if ever. When you make the verb past tense, that indicates "previously." Also removed a comma. A simple compound sentence does not need a comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 August 2023
- 04:2004:20, 21 August 2023 diff hist −34 Shane Fontayne Removed peacock language. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2004:20, 21 August 2023 diff hist −65 Peter Barakan Fixed section, removing style errors and unnecessary content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 August 2023
- 20:2920:29, 14 August 2023 diff hist −68 Walter Pidgeon Removed editorial content, specifically "...that his popularity reached its height." That is when Pidgeon's popularity was at its height? Says who? There is no source for such a statement, which makes it an editorial comment, which is never allowed. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2520:25, 14 August 2023 diff hist −892 Walter Pidgeon Removing editorialized content. Recast sentences to reflect proper Encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1120:11, 14 August 2023 diff hist −56 Walter Pidgeon Corrected content to conform to encyclopedia style. Tip to editors: never write "as well as." "And" is always the preferred use. Never used three words when one word is sufficient. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0820:08, 14 August 2023 diff hist −38 Walter Pidgeon Removed unnecessary content. We do not have to mention that Pidgeon had two marriages, we simply need only to mention the two marriages and people can count. Also, he did not marry the "former Edna Muriel Pickles." She wasn't the "former" Ms. Pickles until after they married. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0020:00, 14 August 2023 diff hist −93 Walter Pidgeon Removed unnecessary con tent, and corrected grammar. Added a location and corrected a style error. Walter Pidgeon probably died eight days after a lot of people. Simply because someone with whom he had starred died eight days prior to him by is not relevant information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 August 2023
- 06:3006:30, 7 August 2023 diff hist −3 All This, and Heaven Too →Cast Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3006:30, 7 August 2023 diff hist −3 All This, and Heaven Too Fixed my error Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2806:28, 7 August 2023 diff hist +4 All This, and Heaven Too →Cast Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2706:27, 7 August 2023 diff hist −104 All This, and Heaven Too →Cast: Removed redundant links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:0906:09, 7 August 2023 diff hist +739 Talk:Bette Davis →Bette Davis and the Hollywood Canteen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:4605:46, 7 August 2023 diff hist +206 Talk:Bette Davis →Unbelievably bloated article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3805:38, 7 August 2023 diff hist +10 Talk:Bette Davis →Unbelievably bloated article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3605:36, 7 August 2023 diff hist +783 Talk:Bette Davis →Unbelievably bloated article: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
6 August 2023
- 21:1321:13, 6 August 2023 diff hist +1 Dan Haggerty Restructured the awards list, so it was in a form that made sense to the reader. Just as fair warning, I am researching some of the claims made in this awards list, and I'm having trouble substantiating some. Those that cannot be verified will have to be deleted. I am digging deeply to try to substantiate them, even emailing the founders and/or presidents of the organizations involved. I hope I will be able to verify then. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0921:09, 6 August 2023 diff hist −1 Kanab, Utah Corrected grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3220:32, 6 August 2023 diff hist +93 Dan Haggerty Restructured some sentences for proper style and better readability. Removed a questionable source and added a respected source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4017:40, 6 August 2023 diff hist −108 Johnny Unitas The source did not indicate that this subject was the first superstar of the game and one guy putting him in his top 10 quarterbacks does not indicate that this subject is "consistently" considered one of the top 10 quarterbacks of all time. Please do not editorialize in Wikipedia. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 August 2023
- 22:5622:56, 4 August 2023 diff hist −1 Tania Harcourt-Cooze Corrected misspelling Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:5522:55, 4 August 2023 diff hist −138 Tania Harcourt-Cooze Again, tightened sentences and removed unnecessary or unsourced information. A note to editors: at some point we do have to say the name of our subjects instead of continuously using their pronouns. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:5022:50, 4 August 2023 diff hist −66 Tania Harcourt-Cooze Tightened sentences, removed unnecessary words. How does being "directly related" to someone differ from simply being related to someone? "Directly" is a worthless word in that sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:4622:46, 4 August 2023 diff hist −25 Tania Harcourt-Cooze Removed banner. Saying that the article "needs to be updated" is very vague and unhelpful. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 July 2023
- 23:2023:20, 30 July 2023 diff hist −17 George Jung Restructured sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Corrected links and added one. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 July 2023
- 15:1715:17, 22 July 2023 diff hist −125 Freddie King Fixed style errors and writing errors. Removed source that led to a scam site. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 July 2023
- 02:2702:27, 20 July 2023 diff hist −359 Little Big Town Corrected style errors and removed unnecessary quotation. Please note that quotations, while allowed in encyclopedia writing, are discouraged. Encyclopedia writing is a style unlike any other. We write only facts using the fewest, most direct words possible. Quotations rarely achieve that tight sentence structure. If the content of the quotation is necessary, paraphrase it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:2102:21, 20 July 2023 diff hist −51 Little Big Town Corrected style errors Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:1902:19, 20 July 2023 diff hist −126 Little Big Town Restructured content to tighten sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:1202:12, 20 July 2023 diff hist −106 Little Big Town Removed first names. In encyclopedia writing we use last names only except in rare circumstances. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0902:09, 20 July 2023 diff hist −670 Little Big Town Restructured content and reworded content to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 July 2023
- 17:1117:11, 18 July 2023 diff hist −33 Phil Lynott Removed inclusion of the attendance of a particular person at the funeral for this subject. According to all I have read, there were many people at that funeral. The only time where it would be appropriate to acknowledge a person's attendance over others would be if that person was a head of state. Otherwise, it's just another person attending a funeral. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4716:47, 18 July 2023 diff hist −55 Thin Lizzy Corrected grammar and style errors. A band, such as Thin Lizzy, is a single unit and is an "it" not a "they." Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 July 2023
- 14:1614:16, 17 July 2023 diff hist −45 Yukon Removed unnecessary words. "Also" is almost always an unnecessary word in encyclopedia writing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:0705:07, 17 July 2023 diff hist −970 Robert Osborne Continuing to restructure sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. A note to editors: encyclopedia style is different from any other style of writing. We write only facts using the fewest, most direct words. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2104:21, 17 July 2023 diff hist −559 Robert Osborne Remove superfluous content and tightened sentence structure to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1304:13, 17 July 2023 diff hist −91 Robert Osborne Tightened sentence structure to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Removed unnecessary words and paraphrased a sentence that was a quote from the source without having been put in quotations. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:0604:06, 17 July 2023 diff hist −370 Robert Osborne Removed unnecessary words. Removed inaccurate and redundant source. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:0204:02, 17 July 2023 diff hist −11 Robert Osborne Removed unnecessary word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 July 2023
- 16:5616:56, 13 July 2023 diff hist −25 Tonya Harding Fixed style error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 July 2023
- 06:4506:45, 3 July 2023 diff hist +185 Diana Scarwid Minor edits Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:4406:44, 3 July 2023 diff hist +12 Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Limited or Anthology Series or Movie Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3906:39, 3 July 2023 diff hist +12 Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actor in a Limited or Anthology Series or Movie Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3606:36, 3 July 2023 diff hist +34 Academy Award for Best Supporting Actress Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3006:30, 3 July 2023 diff hist +30 Academy Award for Best Picture Minor correction Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2206:22, 3 July 2023 diff hist −213 Academy Award for Best Supporting Actress Removed superfluous content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3905:39, 3 July 2023 diff hist −1 Diana Scarwid Minor Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3805:38, 3 July 2023 diff hist +713 Diana Scarwid Adding sources Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2005:20, 3 July 2023 diff hist +442 Diana Scarwid Adding sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1405:14, 3 July 2023 diff hist +4 Diana Scarwid Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1105:11, 3 July 2023 diff hist −802 Diana Scarwid Restructured content to reflect encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:4804:48, 3 July 2023 diff hist −837 Diana Scarwid Restructured content to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2004:20, 3 July 2023 diff hist −294 Diana Scarwid Removed text unrelated to subject's early life. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1704:17, 3 July 2023 diff hist −14 Diana Scarwid Removed unnecessary word and corrected style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 June 2023
- 20:4520:45, 30 June 2023 diff hist −1,941 Dolores Hart Removed voluminous superfluous text. Re-cast sentences in proper encyclopedia style. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3720:37, 30 June 2023 diff hist −875 Dolores Hart Removed more superfluous text. As dictated in Wikipedia MOS, we write in encyclopedia style, which is different from any other style of writing. We provide only the basic facts to summarize our subject. This is not a biography or a press release. We are not here to entertain. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3120:31, 30 June 2023 diff hist −456 Dolores Hart Removed superfluous text and text not supported by source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1820:18, 30 June 2023 diff hist −1 Dolores Hart Corrected grammar mistake. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5104:51, 30 June 2023 diff hist −10 Yvette Mimieux Fixed the citation even better! Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:4704:47, 30 June 2023 diff hist −78 Yvette Mimieux Provided proper citation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:4304:43, 30 June 2023 diff hist −105 Yvette Mimieux Removed improper source. The Los Angeles Times obit for Mimieux was on January 20, 2020. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:3504:35, 30 June 2023 diff hist −81 Yvette Mimieux →Personal life and death: Fixed wording issues. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 June 2023
- 18:0618:06, 17 June 2023 diff hist −230 Phil Valentine →Early life and education: corrected source information. Restructured a couple of sentences for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5217:52, 17 June 2023 diff hist −5 Phil Valentine Remove unnecessary word Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4817:48, 17 June 2023 diff hist −11 Capital of Japan Remove superfluous words Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4717:47, 17 June 2023 diff hist −8 Capital of Japan Removed redundancy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 June 2023
- 19:1419:14, 16 June 2023 diff hist −73 Song of Love (1947 film) Removed peacock language and vague time references. Restructured sentence to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 June 2023
- 00:2600:26, 11 June 2023 diff hist −131 Don Novello Removed unnecessary words and unsourced content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:2400:24, 11 June 2023 diff hist −68 Don Novello Removed editorial comment and unnecessary words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 June 2023
- 23:1923:19, 4 June 2023 diff hist +338 Gregg Burge Added a much needed source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:1623:16, 4 June 2023 diff hist −39 Gregg Burge Removed peacock language, and restructured run-on sentences. Where are the sources for this article? Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 June 2023
- 03:4903:49, 2 June 2023 diff hist −33 Joe Kenda Corrected misconstructed sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 June 2023
- 20:2520:25, 1 June 2023 diff hist −74 Joe Kenda Tightened sentences for proper style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2320:23, 1 June 2023 diff hist −94 Joe Kenda Restructured sentence in keeping with proper style. Please note how the cumbersome sentences of "With the Colorado Springs Police Department (CSPD), Kenda eventually became a homicide detective. He worked in the CSPD homicide unit from 1977 to 1981 and 1984–1996" is changed to the direct, simple sentence of "Kendall worked as a homicide detective with the Colorado Springs Police Department from 1977 to 1981, and from 1984-1996." We must keep information direct, using the fewest words possible. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1620:16, 1 June 2023 diff hist −570 Joe Kenda Tightened text to keep in proper encyclopedia style. Removed on necessary text neighborhood. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1220:12, 1 June 2023 diff hist −109 Joe Kenda Removed more unnecessary information. We must keep in mind that Wikipedia MOS indicates that articles are to be a summarization of the subject. We do not add facts simply because we have them. That is taken directly from the MOS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1020:10, 1 June 2023 diff hist −57 Joe Kenda These subject's hometown's proximity to Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania is not relevant information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0920:09, 1 June 2023 diff hist +11 Joe Kenda Restructured sentence for better readability and in keeping with encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:5103:51, 1 June 2023 diff hist +4 William Powell Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:5003:50, 1 June 2023 diff hist −2,104 William Powell Made significant edits of puffery content, peacock, content, and other unnecessary text. Articles should be written in encyclopedia style. Encyclopedia style is vastly different from writing found in books, magazines, newspapers, press, releases, and biographies. Added several sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:1603:16, 1 June 2023 diff hist −145 William Powell Removed redundant information, and content that was unnecessary. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:1303:13, 1 June 2023 diff hist +5 William Powell Minor correction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:1203:12, 1 June 2023 diff hist −41 William Powell Removed unnecessary content and corrected grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 May 2023
- 23:4923:49, 31 May 2023 diff hist −115 Beverly Sanders Restructure sentences to be more in line with encyclopedia style. Removed a sentence that is a conclusion or observation drawn by the editor, which violates Wikipedia's original research rule. This article is vastly in need of sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 May 2023
- 23:0223:02, 30 May 2023 diff hist −94 Dolores Moran I got confused on my previous edit. There was so much time that elapsed between when I made the edit and when I saved it that I forgot whose article it was. Please forgive my mistake. My edits here were for tightening the text in keeping with proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:5922:59, 30 May 2023 diff hist −615 Dolores Moran Removed content that was not supported in the source given. Removed some content that is not important enough for this article. The affair between Hawks and Moran should be in their Wikipedia articles. It may be true that Hawks' affair was the result of being snubbed by Bacall, but that is not important. Articles are to be summaries of subjects, according to Wikipedia MOS. The MOS says specifically that we don't include facts just because we have them. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 May 2023
- 04:2404:24, 22 May 2023 diff hist −9 Terrence Mann Removed redundancy, the bane of writing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 May 2023
- 22:0322:03, 21 May 2023 diff hist −197 Norma Shearer Removed unsourced quotation. Quotations are never, ever used without a proper citation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 May 2023
- 01:0201:02, 20 May 2023 diff hist −525 Edward G. Robinson Removed information gained by an improper source. If the information can be found in a proper, Wikipedia–approved source, then it remains in the history section to be returned to the article. I could find no source for the information. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0001:00, 20 May 2023 diff hist +42 Edward G. Robinson Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5700:57, 20 May 2023 diff hist −6 Alan Simpson (theatre director) Removed bracketed information that appear to be the initials of something that I have never heard of. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5100:51, 20 May 2023 diff hist −45 Edward G. Robinson Removed information that was not represented in the source provided. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:4100:41, 20 May 2023 diff hist −420 Edward G. Robinson Recast sentences to reflect Encyclopedia style. When writing for encyclopedias, we provide facts in the most direct manner using the fewest word. For example, I removed the phrase "as well as." Never write "as well as" when a simple "and" will do. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:3200:32, 20 May 2023 diff hist −8 Edward G. Robinson Minor removal of unnecessary word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:3200:32, 20 May 2023 diff hist +31 Edward G. Robinson Corrected citations. Minor style correction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 May 2023
- 04:2804:28, 18 May 2023 diff hist −8 Joan Didion →Published works: corrected link error. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2704:27, 18 May 2023 diff hist +1,849 Joan Didion Moved sections to keep with style typically used in Wikipedia to maintain consistency. Made minor grammatical correction.
- 04:2004:20, 18 May 2023 diff hist −1,876 Joan Didion Moving sections. More to come. Tags: section blanking Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1804:18, 18 May 2023 diff hist −131 Joan Didion "She is considered one of the pioneers of New Journalism along with Gay Talese, Hunter S. Thompson, and Tom Wolfe." By whom? Who had the authority to make that assertion after researching it and having it published by a respectable third-party? Even though it is in the lead, such a claim must be supported by a reputable secondary source with a proper citation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 May 2023
- 21:4421:44, 13 May 2023 diff hist +32 Anthony Edwards (actor) Corrected style error, minor link repair and added a film Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:3621:36, 13 May 2023 diff hist −23 Anthony Edwards (actor) Remove vague numerical reference and corrected grammatical errors. Removed unnecessary quotation marks. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:0518:05, 13 May 2023 diff hist −351 Sid Vicious Restructured content to reflect encyclopedia writing. Removed inappropriate subjective content. Also removed a denial of a rumor. We don't perpetuate rumors in Wikipedia, and denying a rumor does not override that rule. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5817:58, 13 May 2023 diff hist −10 Sid Vicious Corrected style errors. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:0306:03, 13 May 2023 diff hist −56 John Gregory Dunne Removed peacock language. Restructured sentence to reflect the information that was actually in the source and removed information that was not. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:5505:55, 13 May 2023 diff hist −20 John Gregory Dunne Corrected link Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 May 2023
- 00:2100:21, 9 May 2023 diff hist −255 If I Didn't Care Removed numerous peacock statements and editorial comments, and restructured sentences and lists section to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Added a film in which this song was included. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2023
- 21:3621:36, 3 May 2023 diff hist +120 Ray McKinnon (actor) Removed another link that provided no information regarding the subject, but found a link that did and added it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:2721:27, 3 May 2023 diff hist −67 Ray McKinnon (actor) Recast sentences for proper encyclopedia style. Removed a source that contained no information from the sentence preceding it, but added a source that I located that did. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4220:42, 3 May 2023 diff hist −32 Ray McKinnon (actor) Corrected text to reflect encyclopedia style, removing unnecessary language Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 May 2023
- 16:3016:30, 1 May 2023 diff hist −30 Twilight Zone accident Corrected more style errors and remove some vague references of time. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2616:26, 1 May 2023 diff hist −6 Twilight Zone accident Fixed style errors. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2416:24, 1 May 2023 diff hist −1 Vic Morrow Fixed link. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 April 2023
- 22:3522:35, 30 April 2023 diff hist −32 John Ray Clemmons →Political career: corrected a sentence I wrote that could have been better - now it is! Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3322:33, 30 April 2023 diff hist −1,807 John Ray Clemmons →Early life: Restructured sentences to properly reflect encyclopedia style. Improved links that were only partially completed. Removed a cumbersome and wholly unnecessary table. The information within the table is very clearly provided within the article. Given the size of this article, readers should have no trouble finding the information. Tags: references removed Visual edit
- 20:1420:14, 30 April 2023 diff hist −1,158 Gus Grissom Moving around sections. Tags: section blanking Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1120:11, 30 April 2023 diff hist −1,428 Gus Grissom Significantly reduced superfluous text to properly, reflect encyclopedia style. In keeping with Wikipedia MOS, articles are a summarization of a of a subject, not a detailed recounting. We don't include facts just because we know them. That is directly from the Wikipedia MOS. We write in encyclopedia style, not as if we were writing for magazines, press releases, biographies or newspapers. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 April 2023
- 20:5720:57, 24 April 2023 diff hist −19 The Tale of Peter Rabbit Correction of style error. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 April 2023
- 23:1423:14, 20 April 2023 diff hist −63 Infidel Removed redirect from "non-believer" to this article. Few religions refer to nonbelievers as "infidels" and an indirect a redirect to this article from the word "non-believers" is inaccurate. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:1123:11, 20 April 2023 diff hist −22 They'll Know We Are Christians Removed a leak to the word "non-believers" which directed the reader to the Wikipedia page regarding "infidels." Not all religions refer to nonbelievers as "infidels." I will also address that bad redirect. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:0923:09, 20 April 2023 diff hist −136 They'll Know We Are Christians Restructured some sentences to conform to encyclopedia style. Removed a sentence that indicated what inspired this song, given the fact that it referenced only a single verse of Scripture. Unless the author indicated what his inspiration was, we are in no position to assume. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2023
- 17:5517:55, 10 April 2023 diff hist −6 List of states with nuclear weapons Removed unnecessary quotation marks. We especially do not quote someone and then provide no source for the quotation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 April 2023
- 01:3801:38, 8 April 2023 diff hist −299 Claude Rains Removed an inappropriate source. We do not use fan sites as sources. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:3501:35, 8 April 2023 diff hist −672 Claude Rains Rephrase content to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Removed unsourced content that could be prejudicial against this subject. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:3001:30, 8 April 2023 diff hist −368 Claude Rains Remove peacock language, paraphrased quotations in keeping with proper encyclopedia style, and removed praise and a list of celebrities that was unsourced. Without a source, such a statement cannot be substantiated. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 April 2023
- 19:2019:20, 7 April 2023 diff hist −271 Vincent Price Removed unnecessary language and restructured sentences to conform with Encyclopedia style. Please note that words like "subsequently," "also," and "then" are vague references to time that are unnecessary. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 March 2023
- 19:0519:05, 28 March 2023 diff hist −178 The Incredible Dr. Pol I re-structured the cast information to make it consistent and in proper form. Removed unnecessary content in some areas. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 March 2023
- 14:4714:47, 27 March 2023 diff hist −77 LaTanya Richardson Jackson I added some links, removed some links. Removed reference to her husband being in her directorial debut, as it takes away from her on achievement, and this article was about her. Also added his full name in a paragraph. Although his full name is mentioned in another section, each section in in Wikipedia must be written as a stand-alone section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:3514:35, 27 March 2023 diff hist −22 LaTanya Richardson Jackson Remove the word "historically" that is a vague time reference and offers no real information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:3414:34, 27 March 2023 diff hist −358 LaTanya Richardson Jackson Removed notation that she and Jackson have been married for 50 years and the Instagram post that was its source. First, Instagram is not a proper source, and second, any person intelligent enough to look up and read information and read it is intelligent enough to do the math. Also paraphrased a quotation, which is the preferred method of presenting information in an encyclopedia. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 March 2023
- 19:3719:37, 20 March 2023 diff hist −936 Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec Removed information attributed to an insufficient source. The previous information regarding his last words are the ones documented by his foundation. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:2919:29, 20 March 2023 diff hist −535 Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec Removed and sourced information, and information that was added in and given a phony source. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1819:18, 20 March 2023 diff hist −91 Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec Removed "Rickets aggravated by praecox virilism has also been suggested." By whom? That statement was nowhere to be found in the nearest source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1619:16, 20 March 2023 diff hist −95 Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec Removed vague time reference, restructured sentence to reflect encyclopedia style. Removed comment about subjects family realizing his art talent. We don't know what his family realized. That draws a conclusion about the frame of mind of a group of people. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 March 2023
- 01:2401:24, 15 March 2023 diff hist −10 Jan Pol Removed a necessary word. It is not necessary in the bio information to indicate his children are adopted. In this table, we ask only how many children he has, and we do not indicate whether children were biologically conceived by the subject or adopted. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:2301:23, 15 March 2023 diff hist −98 Jan Pol Restructured sentences to properly reflect encyclopedia style Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1901:19, 15 March 2023 diff hist −1,067 Jan Pol Removed unnecessary statements, keeping all sentences based in fact and not subjectiveness. Improved sentence structure. Standards for biographies of living people are very high and strict regarding content. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0801:08, 15 March 2023 diff hist +4 Jan Pol Added link Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0701:07, 15 March 2023 diff hist −155 Jan Pol Improved sentence structure to reflect Encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5900:59, 15 March 2023 diff hist −18 Jan Pol Change wording of sentence to reflect a fact instead of an opinion. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5800:58, 15 March 2023 diff hist −41 The Incredible Dr. Pol Removed on necessary information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 March 2023
- 05:3005:30, 10 March 2023 diff hist −39 Nate Bargatze Restructured sentence to properly reflect encyclopedia style. Encyclopedia style is not the same style as biographies, press releases or website content. When writing for encyclopedias, we write only the facts. We are not here to entertain. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2805:28, 10 March 2023 diff hist −1,250 Nate Bargatze Removed peacock language and unnecessary content. If this subject attended college, for only one semester, it is hardly newsworthy to reference what classes he took. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2405:24, 10 March 2023 diff hist −783 Nate Bargatze Removed information that was not supported by the sources cited. Removed unnecessary content and restructured sentences to properly reflect encyclopedia style. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 March 2023
- 06:2306:23, 6 March 2023 diff hist −22 2021 Percy Priest Lake Cessna Citation crash Removed vague time references per Wikipedia MOS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 March 2023
- 08:0108:01, 4 March 2023 diff hist −13 Beth Moore Minor changes. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5807:58, 4 March 2023 diff hist −49 Beth Moore Removed unnecessary words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5707:57, 4 March 2023 diff hist −103 Beth Moore No relation to Russell Moore.? She is also not related - that I know of - to Roger Moore, Bill Moore, Daniel Moore, Melba Moore...this could go on forever. We occasionally, when there is some compelling reason to do so, mention people to whom the subject IS related. What we don't do is list people to whom the subject is NOT related. Those lists could go on for eternity! Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5107:51, 4 March 2023 diff hist +2 Beth Moore Fixed capitalization error. Did something I never do: created a quote. This is one of those rare times when a quote needs to be created to avoid what appeared to be peacock language. If we are going to say Moore "is one of the most prominent..." then it needs to be attributed to someone through a quote and proper citation. Will probably be another 12-13 years before I create another quote. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 March 2023
- 20:0920:09, 1 March 2023 diff hist 0 Hair receiver Moved citation Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0820:08, 1 March 2023 diff hist −4 Hair receiver Removed dead link Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 February 2023
- 02:2702:27, 27 February 2023 diff hist −4 Deep Throat (Watergate) Removed dead link Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 February 2023
- 13:0613:06, 26 February 2023 diff hist −86 Geraldine McEwan Removed redundant quote but kept the source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 February 2023
- 22:3322:33, 24 February 2023 diff hist −187 The Harvey Girls Removed original research that was not mentioned in any manner in the source cited. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2922:29, 24 February 2023 diff hist −148 The Harvey Girls Removed original research content, and source. We cannot use something we heard on television as a source. Our sources can only be published resources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2722:27, 24 February 2023 diff hist +53 The Harvey Girls Removed original re-search, pared the sentence down to just the facts and added a proper source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2122:21, 24 February 2023 diff hist −11 The Harvey Girls Removed unnecessary text Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2022:20, 24 February 2023 diff hist −15 The Harvey Girls Removed editorialized content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 February 2023
- 06:1306:13, 21 February 2023 diff hist −1,539 Lebanon, Tennessee Under whose authority has an editor determined which people who have lived in Lebanon are to be declared "notable," out of the hundreds of thousands of people who have lived there since the city was settled and developed? "Notable people" violates Wikipedia's policy against original research (WP:OR). It was deleted. Tags: Reverted section blanking Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:0106:01, 21 February 2023 diff hist +422 Lebanon, Tennessee Corrected information. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3905:39, 21 February 2023 diff hist −152 Lebanon, Tennessee Removed original research (WP:OR) and subjective term (small). Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3405:34, 21 February 2023 diff hist −4 Lebanon, Tennessee Still trying to correct link. Hard to correct link on cell phone. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3205:32, 21 February 2023 diff hist −306 Lebanon, Tennessee Error correction Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3005:30, 21 February 2023 diff hist −31 Lebanon, Tennessee Correct inaccurate information and source, and add proper source. Tags: Reverted nowiki added Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1305:13, 21 February 2023 diff hist −8 Lebanon, Tennessee Minor edits Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 February 2023
- 02:0802:08, 10 February 2023 diff hist −273 Dede Allen Removed peacock language in first paragraphs. Notice should be made that we are editing for an encyclopedia, not a press release for this subject. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:1801:18, 10 February 2023 diff hist +766 User talk:69.180.218.186 →Dede Allen: Reply Tag: Reply
7 February 2023
- 23:2123:21, 7 February 2023 diff hist −45 Shriners Removed information not supported in the source. If the information is accurate, it needs to be properly sourced before being returned to the article. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:3422:34, 7 February 2023 diff hist −363 Shriners Removed a paragraph that had no proper sourcing. It remains in the history of this article and can be returned to the article when a proper, reputable third-party source is identified. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:3222:32, 7 February 2023 diff hist −93 Shriners Continuing to improve sentences for proper encyclopedia style, although this is largely a well-written article, and I applaud its editors. Paraphrased two quotations. In encyclopedia writing, quotations are discouraged. They should be paraphrased and properly sourced. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:1522:15, 7 February 2023 diff hist +13 User talk:Adakiko →What?
- 22:1422:14, 7 February 2023 diff hist +821 User talk:Adakiko →What?: new section Tag: New topic
- 21:4021:40, 7 February 2023 diff hist −58 Shriners Continuing to structure sentences to better reflect encyclopedia writing. Removed the phrase "In an effort to." Phrases like "in an effort to" and "in order to" are unnecessarily wordy and lack meaning. Simply using the word "to" is more than sufficient. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:3221:32, 7 February 2023 diff hist −61 Shriners Improved readability of a sentence and removed an unnecessary word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:2921:29, 7 February 2023 diff hist −82 Shriners Remove the phrase "best known for." It is not possible to say with certainty what any people or thing are best known for unless some type of survey or research was undertaken and reported upon by a reputable third-party. "Best known for" is a peacock term that should not be used in Wikipedia. Case in point, I don't associate Shriners with their hospital or their hats. There is another part of their existence that is memorable to me. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0221:02, 7 February 2023 diff hist +177 Shriners Moved a section, created a new section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2920:29, 7 February 2023 diff hist −6 Shriners Removed and unnecessary word in a hearing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2920:29, 7 February 2023 diff hist −1,224 Shriners Removed a completely on sourced section. This information remains in the history of this article and can't be returned when sources supporting it or found. I was unable to locate such sources. Tags: section blanking Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2820:28, 7 February 2023 diff hist −39 Shriners Restructured a sentence or two and removed unnecessary words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:3807:38, 7 February 2023 diff hist −3,445 Dennis Potter Removed exhaustive content that was full of statements of fact without even ONE of those statements supported by a reputable third source. I have removed the entire section. It remains in the History, so if someone wants to research each statement and source them all, then it would be a welcome addition. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:3307:33, 7 February 2023 diff hist −209 Dennis Potter In encyclopedia writing, we NEVER watch a television program and then come to Wikipedia to write what we saw. That is original research and violates Wikipedia's TOS. Then, telling how you watched that program and using that language as your source is absolutely forbidden. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:2307:23, 7 February 2023 diff hist +606 Dennis Potter Completed final section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:1607:16, 7 February 2023 diff hist −378 Dennis Potter Completed one section Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:1407:14, 7 February 2023 diff hist −22 Dennis Potter Bringing together a new section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:1107:11, 7 February 2023 diff hist −10 Dennis Potter Corrected mistake Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:1007:10, 7 February 2023 diff hist −383 Dennis Potter Rearranging sections to make more sense. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:0407:04, 7 February 2023 diff hist +774 Dennis Potter Made new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3306:33, 7 February 2023 diff hist +57 Dennis Potter Added death. Will probably improve this later. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3106:31, 7 February 2023 diff hist −272 Dennis Potter Improved clumsy sentence structure and removed extraneous content about family members. Encyclopedia writing is written with the fewest, most direct words. We mention others only as they pertain to the subject. Further exploration of those people belong on their Wikipedia pages, not here. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 February 2023
- 20:2120:21, 6 February 2023 diff hist −35 Charlie Hunnam We don't use words like "subsequently" or phrases like "went on to" in encyclopedia writing. Those are vague and meaningless words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 January 2023
- 12:4312:43, 30 January 2023 diff hist +2 Dede Allen Removed semicolon. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:4012:40, 30 January 2023 diff hist −30 Dede Allen Removed nonexistent link Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 January 2023
- 18:3918:39, 21 January 2023 diff hist −169 Francis Capra Corrected style error, removed peacock language, and other unnecessary text to reflect proper encyclopedia style Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 January 2023
- 23:0023:00, 20 January 2023 diff hist +399 Dolores Hart →Background: Improved Source Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3422:34, 20 January 2023 diff hist −370 Dolores Hart Removed extraneous text and text that was unsourced. Paraphrased quotation. Quotations are discouraged in encyclopedia style. Always paraphrase the quote unless unusual circumstances require the quote. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2122:21, 20 January 2023 diff hist +280 Talk:Dolores Hart →Name: new section Tag: New topic
- 22:2022:20, 20 January 2023 diff hist −9 Dolores Hart Removed peacock word "prominent."
- 22:1822:18, 20 January 2023 diff hist +279 Talk:Dolores Hart →Her Autobiography: Reply Tag: Reply
- 22:1622:16, 20 January 2023 diff hist +399 Talk:Dolores Hart →Quality
- 22:1322:13, 20 January 2023 diff hist +223 Talk:Dolores Hart →Filmography.: Reply Tag: Reply
- 21:5921:59, 20 January 2023 diff hist −111 Dolores Hart Corrected grammatical error and removed excess content to make the same point with fewer words. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 January 2023
- 19:2319:23, 10 January 2023 diff hist −14 Rance Howard Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1419:14, 10 January 2023 diff hist +663 Rance Howard Added content removed from another section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1219:12, 10 January 2023 diff hist −703 Rance Howard Removed "also," a word that almost never, if ever, is needed in encyclopedia writing. Removed content unrelated to the heading. I will put it as written under another heading. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 January 2023
- 21:3721:37, 9 January 2023 diff hist −126 Sue Monk Kidd There were no significant changes to the information that was intended in the original text, just brought it more into agreement with the source cited. Added some information that was in the source to bring increased understanding for the reader and removed text that was not represented in the source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1321:13, 9 January 2023 diff hist −10 Sue Monk Kidd We don't use the word "currently" in encyclopedia writing. When you use present-tense verbs, that informs the reader that the information is happening now. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:1606:16, 9 January 2023 diff hist −125 Mike McDaniel Removed unnecessary quote that stated what had been sufficiently said in the preceding sentence. Removed text that added nothing to the point of the sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:1206:12, 9 January 2023 diff hist −70 Mike McDaniel Editors cannot unilaterally declare someone "...an offensive-minded coach." A Wikipedia editor does not know what type of mind someone has and is in no position to make that kind of discernment. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 January 2023
- 02:1802:18, 8 January 2023 diff hist −131 Curly Putman Removed unsourced content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0702:07, 8 January 2023 diff hist −112 Curly Putman Changed, heading to a more appropriate heading and removed, vague, unsupported content Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0502:05, 8 January 2023 diff hist +3 Curly Putman Repaired sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0402:04, 8 January 2023 diff hist +102 Curly Putman Added citation Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 January 2023
- 23:1023:10, 7 January 2023 diff hist −33 Flurazepam →Misuse: "Society and culture" is not an appropriate heading for the content that is within this section. The only information under that heading is regarding misuse of the drug, so that should be the heading. Actually, one or two sentences draws into question as to whether there needs to be a separate section for misuse at all. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4120:41, 7 January 2023 diff hist −24 Michael Shannon Never write that an actor appeared in a "minor" role. That is a subjective call and we, as editors, are in no position to determine what is a minor role and what is not. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3820:38, 7 January 2023 diff hist −245 Michael Shannon Corrected vague reference to "several" performances in London's West End. If he did appear in several plays in London, we either need to name them and provide a source, or remove any reference to them and include the information we DO have and CAN source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3020:30, 7 January 2023 diff hist −45 Michael Shannon Minor grammatical correction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2820:28, 7 January 2023 diff hist +1 Michael Shannon Corrected a space error I created. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2820:28, 7 January 2023 diff hist −133 Michael Shannon One cannot write that Shannon has appeared in "all" of Nichols' films, considering that Nichols is alive and still making films. To say Shannon has appeared in "all" of Nichols' films renders this article inaccurate, and does so very quickly. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2520:25, 7 January 2023 diff hist −82 Jeff Nichols "So far"? That is a pointless, vague time reference that is disallowed by Wikipedia's MoS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1520:15, 7 January 2023 diff hist −1,499 Michael Shannon Reworked some sentences for proper encyclopedia style. Made various other style corrections. Removed some references to co-stars of films. This article is about Michael Shannon, and the characters and films in which he appears. There are certainly dozens of actors who could be listed as costars in each of his films. The only relevant information is that HE was in the films, not other cast and/or crew members. that information should be reserved for their Wikipedia articles. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1719:17, 7 January 2023 diff hist −15 Michael Shannon Never use the word "even" to stress a point. Also, re-worked a couple of sentences for better readability, but did not alter any of the facts that were in the sentences before my edit. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 January 2023
- 05:0505:05, 3 January 2023 diff hist −49 Ryan Clark (American football) Wikipedia MoS requires all paragraphs to be able to stand alone. Removed a reference to an event that was explained in earlier paragraphs. It is not essential to the point of the sentence so I removed it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 January 2023
- 20:1120:11, 2 January 2023 diff hist −66 Tivity Health Removed language that appeared to be written as a pro-company remark. Also, never, ever use the phrase "in order." There is no circumstance that requires the use of that phrase. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0920:09, 2 January 2023 diff hist −46 Tivity Health Made a minor, edit and removed what appeared to be a complaint that a sentence included a "buzzword." Concerns about violations of Wikipedia policy should be discussed in Talk or left as an edit summary after it has been corrected. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:3919:39, 2 January 2023 diff hist +11 Ardent Health Services Minor correction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 January 2023
- 22:3022:30, 1 January 2023 diff hist −8 Tennessee Performing Arts Center Removed unnecessary word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3220:32, 1 January 2023 diff hist −965 Offside (American football) Removed unnecessary language. It is easy when explaining a sport to over-explain. Encyclopedia style dictates that facts should be stated in the most direct manner using the fewest words possible. As per Wikipedia MoS, we don't provide facts simply because we know them. A Wikipedia article is to be a summary of the subject and not a detailed explanation, also as per Wikipedia MoS. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5519:55, 1 January 2023 diff hist −2 Offside (American football) I will be changing references to this being a defensive foul to reflect the fact that the offense can be charged with being offsides as well. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 December 2022
- 07:0107:01, 28 December 2022 diff hist −205 Phil Bredesen Removed unsubstantiated claims. Statements of fact require sources. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:5706:57, 28 December 2022 diff hist +114 Phil Bredesen Corrected title. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:5506:55, 28 December 2022 diff hist −11 Phil Bredesen Removed another redundancy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:5406:54, 28 December 2022 diff hist −6 Phil Bredesen Corrected redundancy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 December 2022
- 18:0618:06, 24 December 2022 diff hist −871 Snowplow Game Removed a multitude of unnecessary text, as well as a name unsupported by a source and, most importantly, a quotation not properly sourced. Quotes are discouraged in Wikipedia, but disallowed without proper source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 December 2022
- 01:2001:20, 17 December 2022 diff hist −224 John Allen Muhammad Corrected capitalization errors, removed extraneous text. Also removed a sentence referencing what Muhammad thought. It is bad enough that this text has no proper source, but we are certainly not going to assume what a person thought without a proper source to support that information. We cannot assume to know what someone thought. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1401:14, 17 December 2022 diff hist −66 John Allen Muhammad Removed unnecessary language that provided only bulk. In encyclopedia style, we make statements of fact using the fewest and strongest words possible. I will. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1001:10, 17 December 2022 diff hist −167 John Allen Muhammad Corrected style error and removed source information from the text. The source of the information is in the citation so to include it in the text is redundant and not encyclopedia style. Removed unnecessary quotes to conform to proper style. Quotations are discouraged in encyclopedia style. It is preferable to paraphrase a quotation and provide a proper citation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 December 2022
- 19:0619:06, 1 December 2022 diff hist −12 Mistinguett Everything that happens in life happens "at one time." That is a useless phrase. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 November 2022
- 22:0122:01, 29 November 2022 diff hist −528 Rob Halford Removed paragraph that used an unreliable source. The source was a blog created by a fan. Tightened up some language, but left the intent. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit