User contributions for Dieter.Meinertzhagen
A user with 5,352 edits. Account created on 1 January 2021.
15 August 2024
- 17:2817:28, 15 August 2024 diff hist −63 Douglas SBD Dauntless If the nickname was only rarely-used, I suggest it isn't notable enough to include in the article, especially if we don't have a citation to verify that the nickname was used at all. current
- 17:1317:13, 15 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Curtiss SB2C Helldiver →Surviving aircraft: Scuba -> scuba because "scuba" is not a proper noun. current
- 07:2307:23, 15 August 2024 diff hist −20 Tikka Khan Undid revision 1240405051 by DizzyEd (talk) (1) Please, could you re-add the assertion that the figures are uncertain and cite (for example) the Hamood Ur Rehman Commission Report to back up the assertion? I have reverted the assertion because we can't back it up with the currently cited sources. Thank you! (2) Your edit was not a minor edit -- please see WP:MINOR. Tag: Undo
- 01:3501:35, 15 August 2024 diff hist −958 Nigerian Civil War Remove the "supported by" lists from the "Belligerents" section per this RfC; briefly, the "Belligerents" section is intended to summarize the belligerents described in the article. In particular, the involvement of listed supporters Bulgaria, Senegal, Somalia, West Germany, Spain, Vatican City, and Czechoslovakia in the war is not mentioned in the text of the article at all. current
14 August 2024
- 05:0905:09, 14 August 2024 diff hist +98 ALCO 251 →Marine Uses: Expand CGC Spencer list entry to include entire "Famous" class of cutters. Add list entry for "Reliance" class of cutters. current
- 01:5901:59, 14 August 2024 diff hist −1,221 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: (1) Remove citations of WLRN-TV and Keysnews.com references which predict the commissioning date of CGC Raymond Evans because they are superceded by the citation of the Key West Navy League reference which reports the actual commissioning date after the event.. (2) Change quote from Key West Navy League reference which is no longer on the webpage to a quote which is on the webpage.
- 01:2001:20, 14 August 2024 diff hist −23 Sentinel-class cutter →References: Correct quote in citation of reference for USCGC Bailey Barco.
- 00:3600:36, 14 August 2024 diff hist +502 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Move citation of reference which does not support launch or commissioning date of CGC Bernard C. Webber. Move it to the history of the contract with Bollinger, where it will be useful.
- 00:0300:03, 14 August 2024 diff hist +70 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite reference for hull number, name, and homeport of CGC Melvin Bell and David Duren.
13 August 2024
- 23:5423:54, 13 August 2024 diff hist +13 Sentinel-class cutter Define acronym "FRC" which is used in article.
- 23:4923:49, 13 August 2024 diff hist +651 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Add detail about May 2024 order of two FRCs.
- 23:2923:29, 13 August 2024 diff hist +694 ALCO 251 →Marine Uses: Add USCGC Spencer as marine user of ALCO 251 diesel engines.
- 23:1523:15, 13 August 2024 diff hist +835 USCGC Spencer (WMEC-905) →2020s: (1) Describe events that began in July 2023 and were scheduled to end in October 2024 in present tense, not future tense, unless the events are known to have already occurred, in which case past tense is used. (2) Add details about main engine replacement during SLEP. current
- 22:5022:50, 13 August 2024 diff hist +34 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Replace citation of reference for delivery date of CGC Clarence Sutphin which only provides month-year date with citation of reference that provides day-month-year date.
- 22:4122:41, 13 August 2024 diff hist +391 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Replace citation of reference for delivery date that provides only a month-year delivery date with citation of reference that provides a day-month-year delivery date.
- 22:3222:32, 13 August 2024 diff hist −265 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Remove citation for Navy League reference for CGC Clarence Sutphen's commissioning date. The reference only includes a month-year commissioning date and is superceded by a neighboring citation to a reference that provides a day-month-year commissioning date.
- 22:2222:22, 13 August 2024 diff hist +644 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Expand on Coast Guard's order of FRC #65.
- 21:4721:47, 13 August 2024 diff hist −1 m USCGC Dauntless →Construction and career: Remove spurious space after emdash. current
- 21:4421:44, 13 August 2024 diff hist −319 USCGC Dauntless →Construction and career: (1) Add information about two drydocking periods where CGC Dauntless has been out of action for extended periods. (2) Remove quote from citation because quote only represents a small part of the material in the article supported by the cited reference.
- 21:3021:30, 13 August 2024 diff hist +154 USCGC Dauntless →Construction and career: Add {{citation needed}} and minor fixes for Revision as of 23:27, 15 December 2023.
- 21:1321:13, 13 August 2024 diff hist +541 USCGC Dauntless →Construction and career: Note Dauntless's place in the series of Reliance-class cutters.
- 20:5220:52, 13 August 2024 diff hist +216 USCGC Dauntless →Construction and career: Change quote in citation so it is more relevant to the article paragraph where it appears.
- 19:4519:45, 13 August 2024 diff hist +7 Corruption in Afghanistan Zarghona Badakhsh is not reporting a consensus in their article, they are reporting the results of their own research. current
- 19:2719:27, 13 August 2024 diff hist −15 Corruption in Chile →Corruption in Chile: Remove wikilink from Luis Mella to Luis Malla. Luis Mella Gajardo, Christian Democrat party politician and former mayor of Quillota, is a different person from Luis Malla Valenzuela, Liberal Party politician. current
- 03:5603:56, 13 August 2024 diff hist +501 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite reference for commissioning date of CGC Charles Moulthrope.
- 03:4503:45, 13 August 2024 diff hist +390 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: In CGC Glen Harris table row, replace citation of source which only provides a month-year delivery date with citation of source which provides a day-month-year delivery date.
- 03:1403:14, 13 August 2024 diff hist +490 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite reference for delivery date of CGC Emlen Tunnell in table.. Remove stray "s" from hull number of CGC John Scheuerman
- 02:5202:52, 13 August 2024 diff hist −552 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Remove citation of reference from table line for CGC Charles Moulthrope. The reference is about Charles Moulthrope, the human, and does not mention the CGC Charles Moulthrope at all.
- 02:0002:00, 13 August 2024 diff hist −45 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: (1) Add citation of reference for precise (year-month-day) acceptance date of CGC Oliver Henry. (2) Remove citation of reference calling for volunteers for pre-commissioning crew of CGC Oliver Henry -- this contains an estimated and incorrect delivery date of 2020-8-1. (3) Remove citation of reference which records an approximate (month-year) delivery date for CGC Oliver Henry.
12 August 2024
- 06:5006:50, 12 August 2024 diff hist −549 Sentinel-class cutter In the Revision as of 03:54, 10 August 2024, I removed the only citation of named reference "NavalToday2018-06-08" but I did not remove the named reference itself. Remove "NavalToday2018-06-08".
- 06:3706:37, 12 August 2024 diff hist −778 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Remove citations of 2019 named reference "Contract options" from table rows for WPC-1151, WPC-1152, WPC-1153, WPC-1154, and WPC-1155. Named reference "Contract options" reported that FRCs #51 through #56 have been ordered and predicts delivery in late 2022 into late 2023, but this information has been superceded by citations of references with actual delivery dates.
- 06:2406:24, 12 August 2024 diff hist −420 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Remove citation of Duluth News-Tribune article which incorrectly predicts that CGC Edgar Culbertson will be completed in January 2020 and commissioned in April or May 2020. It is superceded by other references which provide the actual delivery and commissioning dates.
- 06:1306:13, 12 August 2024 diff hist +248 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: (1) Cite reference for commissioning date of CGC Harold Miller (2) Remove citations of 2020 named reference "Galveston cutters" which incorrectly predicts the commissioning dates of CGC Edgar Culbertson and CGC Harold Miller. This reference is superceded by other cited references which correctly report the actual commissioning dates.
- 05:4405:44, 12 August 2024 diff hist −313 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Remove citations to 2021 named reference "GuamFRC" in CGC Myrtle Hazard and CGC Oliver Henry lines of table. The reference says only that seven FRCs will be stationed in the Indo-Pacific region in the near future and that three of them will be commissioned in Guam in August 2021. It does not say which FRCs they are, and in fact the three Guam FRCs were commissioned in July 2021.
- 05:0505:05, 12 August 2024 diff hist +2,000 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite references for delivery date of CGC Joseph Doyle and commissioning dates of CGC Benjamin Bottoms, CGC Terrell Horne and CGC Robert Ward.
- 04:3904:39, 12 August 2024 diff hist +1,187 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Add information about how, as the Coast Guard approached the contract limit of 58 cutters, it modified the contract to move the limit to 64 cutters.
- 04:2004:20, 12 August 2024 diff hist +497 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite reference for commissioning date of CGC William Hart.
10 August 2024
- 04:1804:18, 10 August 2024 diff hist +854 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Add paragraph documenting order of FRCs #45 through #50.
- 03:5503:55, 10 August 2024 diff hist 0 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Correct malformed markup in reference citation.
- 03:5403:54, 10 August 2024 diff hist +2,387 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Cite sources for delivery and commissioning dates of CGC Nathan Bruckenthal. Cite sources for commissioning dates of CGC Richard Snyder and CGC Joseph Gerczak. Cite better source for delivery date of CGC Forrest Rednour
9 August 2024
- 05:4005:40, 9 August 2024 diff hist +540 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Add citation for source of CGC Lawrence Lawson commissioning date.
- 04:3304:33, 9 August 2024 diff hist +2,554 Sentinel-class cutter →Ships: Add references for delivery dates of CGC Joseph Gerczak and CGC Oliver Berry, commissioning dates of CGC Oliver Berry, CGC Benjamin Dailey and CGC Bailey Barco
- 04:1204:12, 9 August 2024 diff hist −11 Island-class patrol boat →Overview: The Coast Guard has exercised its contractual option to order more than 58 FRCs, so remove implication that there are only 58. current
7 August 2024
- 15:4915:49, 7 August 2024 diff hist +4 Bahco →The "fish & hook" logo: Add missing word: ft "In 1866 company went into bankruptcy"-> "In 1866 [the] company went into bankruptcy" current
- 04:3004:30, 7 August 2024 diff hist +6 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Move sentences about 2016 from present to past tense.
- 03:0003:00, 7 August 2024 diff hist −8 Nigerian Civil War Undid revision 1238995308 by Moarnighar (talk) This is not an improvement. It is ungrammatical, and even if the grammar is corrected it will not improve the previous form of the sentence. Rather, it will make the sentence more verbose. Tag: Undo
- 02:5102:51, 7 August 2024 diff hist +4 Corruption in India Clarify which media is being talked about here in the phrase "This media".
6 August 2024
- 04:3404:34, 6 August 2024 diff hist 0 RAF Advanced Air Striking Force Undid revision 1238871483 by Chris the speller (talk) MOS:PEOPLETITLES: I believe Director of Plans is capitalized because it is a globally unique title; there was only one Director of Plans at the Air Ministry at that time, and Slessor was it. Tags: Undo Reverted
4 August 2024
- 05:5205:52, 4 August 2024 diff hist −141 Sentinel-class cutter →Planning and acquisition: Merge two paragraphs describing the order of the 61st through 64th FRCs in August 2021.
- 05:4905:49, 4 August 2024 diff hist 0 Sentinel-class cutter Move three paragraphs describing Coast Guard 2014, 2016 and 2021 orders of ships from Bollinger; move them from the "Design and construction" section (where they are not relevant) to the "Planning and acquisition" section (where they are relevant.
