User contributions for 66.92.185.225

4 August 2007

• 12:0612:06, 4 August 2007 diff hist −3‎ Comparison of BSD operating systems ‎ →‎Aims and philosophies: clarify that OpenSSH and CARP are child products, not restricted alternatives.
• 11:2311:23, 4 August 2007 diff hist +2‎ W^X ‎ re-sentence

20 July 2007

• 01:4301:43, 20 July 2007 diff hist +210‎ Talk:Device driver ‎ →‎Acronym mania?

17 July 2007

• 02:3302:33, 17 July 2007 diff hist +730‎ Talk:Device driver ‎ Acronym mania?

15 July 2007

• 13:3613:36, 15 July 2007 diff hist +57‎ Device driver ‎ →‎Rationale: split run on sentence; approach manf. revision with more conceptual gradation; internal links

8 June 2007

• 10:1810:18, 8 June 2007 diff hist −38‎ Fourth wall ‎ re-link to apropriate wiki page.

22 May 2007

• 01:3101:31, 22 May 2007 diff hist +147‎ Scientology in popular culture ‎ finish spelling "Mind"; add ref links including screenshot from movie; leave citation request in place for eval of experienced editors.
• 01:1301:13, 22 May 2007 diff hist −142‎ Memory protection ‎ turn fragments into sentences

16 May 2007

• 02:4102:41, 16 May 2007 diff hist +101‎ Scientology in popular culture ‎ →‎In film

11 May 2007

• 03:3203:32, 11 May 2007 diff hist −47‎ 9P (protocol) ‎ (compress language) Comment: {{IPstack}} looks really inapropriate here. Why not a photo of cat-5 cable as well?

4 May 2007

• 10:3410:34, 4 May 2007 diff hist −5‎ Common law ‎ →‎Different connotations of the term: grammatical fix
• 10:3110:31, 4 May 2007 diff hist +3‎ Common law ‎ →‎Different connotations of the term: fix broken grammar
• 00:4900:49, 4 May 2007 diff hist −4‎ Use of Free and Open-Source Software (FOSS) in the U.S. Department of Defense ‎ →‎Impact: remove "brain-o"

3 May 2007

• 14:5914:59, 3 May 2007 diff hist −83‎ Device driver ‎ →‎Rationale: first stab at compressing and clarifying language
• 14:3314:33, 3 May 2007 diff hist −44‎ Device driver ‎ clip redundant tail of sentance
• 14:3114:31, 3 May 2007 diff hist +11‎ Device driver ‎ split "philosophy" into less grandiose why and how sections
• 13:5713:57, 3 May 2007 diff hist −4‎ Free and open-source graphics device driver ‎ →‎Opinions on binary drivers: clarify cumbersome language

1 May 2007

• 14:4314:43, 1 May 2007 diff hist −146‎ Device driver ‎ →‎Philosophy: Hopefully I've ended up improving a paragraph that needed grammatical fixes. That's all I set out to do at first...

30 April 2007

• 00:4900:49, 30 April 2007 diff hist −1‎ Causes of World War II ‎ →‎Appeasement: split run on sentence
• 00:4700:47, 30 April 2007 diff hist +2‎ Causes of World War II ‎ →‎Appeasement: correct conjugation
• 00:4300:43, 30 April 2007 diff hist +2‎ Causes of World War II ‎ →‎Militarism: turn fragment into sentence
• 00:4000:40, 30 April 2007 diff hist +1‎ Causes of World War II ‎ →‎Fascism: space after reference link
• 00:3800:38, 30 April 2007 diff hist +1‎ Causes of World War II ‎ →‎Fascism: space after period

29 April 2007

• 01:3301:33, 29 April 2007 diff hist −2‎ Eastern Front (World War II) ‎ →‎Results: corrected preposition
• 01:2501:25, 29 April 2007 diff hist −17‎ Eastern Front (World War II) ‎ →‎Forces: The word "partisans" had 18 extra consonants.