User contributions for 98.247.224.9

8 August 2018

• 19:5719:57, 8 August 2018 diff hist −150‎ Microcomputer ‎ →‎Origins: The date given here for the Sord is contradicted by later text in this article that goes into more detail; the cited source admits the machine never went into production, doesn't cite its own sources, and doesn't even have a photo of the machine.

28 July 2018

• 18:1918:19, 28 July 2018 diff hist +1‎ Centaurus ‎ →‎Namesakes: Updated verb tense to reflect that these ships are no longer in the inventory.

9 July 2018

• 16:5216:52, 9 July 2018 diff hist +1‎ Tom Reamy ‎ →‎Published writer: Fixed a typo'd "the".
• 16:5116:51, 9 July 2018 diff hist +15‎ Tom Reamy ‎ →‎Published writer: Fixed malformed cn tag from a previous editor.

4 July 2018

• 22:0622:06, 4 July 2018 diff hist +15‎ Glow stick ‎ →‎Safety issues: Cross-linking.

1 July 2018

• 21:2421:24, 1 July 2018 diff hist +258‎ Talk:1973 oil crisis ‎ →‎Mosaddegh name typo: new section

30 June 2018

• 18:4718:47, 30 June 2018 diff hist −38‎ Velveeta ‎ As both of the cited references clearly state, Velveeta does contain cheese, so I removed the counter-factual statement from the sentence.

17 June 2018

• 05:0105:01, 17 June 2018 diff hist 0‎ Red Bull ‎ →‎Litigation: The source gives no indication that the "literal wings" interpretation was limited to corporate media, and the corporate media article itself points out that the term is sometimes used in a pejorative sense, so I've removed it from here.

13 June 2018

• 22:4622:46, 13 June 2018 diff hist +120‎ Talk:MIPS Technologies ‎ →‎Employee Count: Nope.

12 June 2018

• 16:0016:00, 12 June 2018 diff hist +8‎ Geostorm ‎ →‎Plot: Improved a sentence.

22 May 2018

• 05:3605:36, 22 May 2018 diff hist +22‎ Jean-Michel Basquiat ‎ →‎Reviews: Kramer was wrong about Basquiat's artistry, but Wikipedia is not the place to insult him for that.

7 May 2018

• 03:3703:37, 7 May 2018 diff hist +251‎ Talk:George Lycurgus ‎ →‎Likely copyright violations: new section

6 May 2018

• 20:1720:17, 6 May 2018 diff hist +518‎ Talk:Pasta processing ‎ →‎Extrusion vs. rolling: new section
• 20:1320:13, 6 May 2018 diff hist +83‎ Pasta ‎ →‎Pasta made fresh: Removing incorrect references to extrusion. See talk page.
• 20:0920:09, 6 May 2018 diff hist +876‎ Talk:Pasta ‎ →‎Extrusion vs. rolling: new section

3 May 2018

• 01:2401:24, 3 May 2018 diff hist +18‎ SGI Visual Workstation ‎ Clarifying that these machines couldn't run "other" (that is, not NT4 or Win2K) versions of Windows. As written, the paragraph could be misunderstood as self-contradictory.

29 April 2018

• 02:5802:58, 29 April 2018 diff hist −2‎ Stratolaunch Systems ‎ Undid revision 838619497 by 83.166.50.217 (talk) -- Straight-up vandalism. Tag: Undo

28 April 2018

• 03:5503:55, 28 April 2018 diff hist −10‎ 432 Park Avenue ‎ Correcting inelegant phrasing from previous edit
• 03:5203:52, 28 April 2018 diff hist −2‎ George Nakashima ‎ →‎External links: Correcting typo.

17 April 2018

• 04:3804:38, 17 April 2018 diff hist −5‎ Lechuguilla Cave ‎ →‎Filming: Fixing minor typo.

7 April 2018

• 22:1822:18, 7 April 2018 diff hist −21‎ Remote manipulator ‎ Undid revision 833390187 by 185.171.157.244 (talk) Straight-up vandalism. Tag: Undo

4 April 2018

• 16:4216:42, 4 April 2018 diff hist +638‎ Talk:432 Park Avenue ‎ →‎Tallest or second tallest?: new section
• 16:4116:41, 4 April 2018 diff hist −214‎ 432 Park Avenue ‎ →‎Height and slenderness: Deleted weaker claim in favor of stronger and more properly supported claim in the intro. Tag: references removed

27 March 2018

• 17:5917:59, 27 March 2018 diff hist −96‎ Festool ‎ Removed redundant text.

14 March 2018

• 21:4821:48, 14 March 2018 diff hist 0‎ Shawangunk Ridge ‎ →‎Name: Correcting an apparent typo. See also https://www.facebook.com/notes/written-in-stone-ulster-countys-historic-legacy/shawangunk-is-a-three-syllable-word-the-k-modifies-the-last-syllable/1743166475723592/ .

6 March 2018

• 19:1419:14, 6 March 2018 diff hist +394‎ N File talk:Dumbarton Oaks site plan (HABS).jpg ‎ Noting an apparent error in the drawing. current

4 March 2018

• 18:5518:55, 4 March 2018 diff hist −443‎ Edsel Ford ‎ →‎Life and career: Removed a lot of vague, unsourced, and incorrect information in favor of a reference to a more factual history.

1 March 2018

• 23:3523:35, 1 March 2018 diff hist +24‎ Bane (DC Comics) ‎ →‎Legacy: Identifying Ubu.
• 07:3807:38, 1 March 2018 diff hist +23‎ Induction motor ‎ →‎Construction: Clarifying that speed alone doesn't determine frame size.

19 February 2018

• 20:3820:38, 19 February 2018 diff hist +8‎ Hubble Space Telescope ‎ →‎Design of a solution: Making consistent the presentation of the actual and intended conic constant values.
• 19:5519:55, 19 February 2018 diff hist +44‎ Crawler-transporter ‎ →‎Specifications: Clarifying that according to the original reference, the new space was in the VAB, not a new "high-bay building."

13 February 2018

• 06:5006:50, 13 February 2018 diff hist +2‎ The Washington Post ‎ →‎Meyer–Graham period: Bad date.
• 06:3006:30, 13 February 2018 diff hist +198‎ Talk:The Washington Post ‎ →‎Unable to find reference in Wikipedia to the date of Washington Post Initial Public Offering. This significant media business event is used dramatically in recent Hollywood film , but cannot verify the historicity so far.: Task completed.
• 06:2906:29, 13 February 2018 diff hist +1,303‎ The Washington Post ‎ →‎Meyer–Graham period: Describing and sourcing the parent company's initial public stock offering in 1971.
• 04:5704:57, 13 February 2018 diff hist +792‎ Quark (TV series) ‎ →‎Characters: Checked and copied the references from the current Richard Kelton article instead of citing a specific outdated version of that article as a reference.

10 February 2018

• 04:4804:48, 10 February 2018 diff hist +4‎ Beverley Allitt ‎ →‎Died: Cross-linking.

9 February 2018

• 17:4117:41, 9 February 2018 diff hist 0‎ Overclocking ‎ Fixing image location to not interfere with disambiguation link.

5 February 2018

• 21:1621:16, 5 February 2018 diff hist +41‎ Dexter King ‎ →‎Support of conspiracy theory: Clarifying what King did not know, based on his quoted statement at the end of the Jet article.

4 February 2018

• 09:0109:01, 4 February 2018 diff hist +722‎ Cygnus X-1 ‎ →‎Stephen Hawking and Kip Thorne: Clarifying the actual date of the wager.
• 08:5808:58, 4 February 2018 diff hist 0‎ Cygnus X-1 ‎ Correcting the date. See next edit for references.
• 08:5708:57, 4 February 2018 diff hist +727‎ Thorne–Hawking–Preskill bet ‎ →‎Earlier Thorne–Hawking bet: While preserving the Hawking quotes, I've clarified that the bet took place in 1974.
• 08:3008:30, 4 February 2018 diff hist −110‎ Aerospike engine ‎ →‎Performance: Updating link to current version of original reference, now at new URL. Removed archive.org supplement, no longer required.

27 January 2018

• 02:1802:18, 27 January 2018 diff hist −14‎ Archimedean spiral ‎ →‎Applications: Rephrasing the line about cutting records for consistency with the already cited reference.

24 January 2018

• 04:5704:57, 24 January 2018 diff hist −139‎ The Washington Post ‎ →‎Executive officers and editors (past and present): Removed 'incomplete' tag as the section now shows continuous coverage around Bradlee. Moved reference to Bezos to the same line as Nash Holdings, Nash is wholly owned by Bezos.

22 January 2018

• 04:1104:11, 22 January 2018 diff hist +1‎ Sargasso Sea ‎ →‎Depictions in popular culture: Clarifying.

20 January 2018

• 04:5104:51, 20 January 2018 diff hist −50‎ Guyford Stever ‎ →‎References: Found and fixed the lost reference.
• 04:4704:47, 20 January 2018 diff hist 0‎ Guyford Stever ‎ →‎Biography: There was no Science Advisor from 1973 to 1976 as explained on the Science Advisor to the President page.

16 January 2018

• 07:4407:44, 16 January 2018 diff hist +95‎ Haile Selassie ‎ →‎Wollo famine: Converting a quote from what appears to be Wikipedia's own voice to that of the actual author using a block quote. Also corrected the quote from the original source and removed a surplus period from earlier text.

11 January 2018

• 06:4606:46, 11 January 2018 diff hist −22‎ Talk:Cygnus X-1 ‎ Fixing a mistake.
• 06:4606:46, 11 January 2018 diff hist +1,262‎ Talk:Cygnus X-1 ‎ →‎1974, not 1975: new section