Talk:2013 United States federal government shutdown/Archive 2
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Claim that Neugebauer voted to close the park
There's a line in the NPS closure debate section citing this that read as follows:
The Huffington Post claimed that it was Neugebauer's vote that led to closure of the memorial.
I considered changing it to this:
A Huffington Post article claimed that it was because of Neugebauer's vote that the memorial was closed.
However, I don't see any merit of being in there. It's not notable to cite a borderline news/opinion piece that blames one senator (called an "idiot who really needs to learn his place" in the article) for a vote that indirectly resulted in NPS being shut down. No one voted for the NPS to close; that was OMB's call, necessary or not. On top of that, Neugebauer voted to reopen the parks prior to this incident, though that would be original research as it stands and is also not worth including. For now, I've removed the line and welcome community feedback. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:08, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- This is also an opinion piece, and yet you added it as a valid citation supporting Cruz's opinion that Obama is intentionally making the park closures worse than they need to be. Are opinions citable in this article or not? Which is it?
- I note that the article in question contains not a single shred of evidence in support of Cruz's opinion - he just baldly asserts that "they believe that the shutdown benefits them politically, and so they are cynically trying to make it as painful as possible for the American people." How is that any different than the Huffington Post writer asserting hypocrisy on Neugebauer's part?
- Also, your assertion that closing NPS was "OMB's call" is cynical nonsense. Congress has not appropriated money for the NPS' operations and Congress has enacted a law making it illegal for the agency to operate without appropriations. Hence, Congress' decision not to fund NPS operations is responsible for the closure. Any other reading of this set of facts is just a tortured attempt at blame-shifting. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 03:20, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The finger-pointing toward the Obama administration, valid or not, by various conservatives, is widely covered across the spectrum of media. The reported opinion of a public figure is news. The opinion of a non-notable person is not, until said opinion/hypocrisy is called out by RS. Regarding the houstonnews article, it's an opinion piece by Ted Cruz, who is clearly notable and fairly central to this event, which is why his opinion, fair or not, is valid in the article. But I'll add other RS that state the same thing if you prefer. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:30, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The Huffington Post is widely accepted as a reliable source. I will add other sources claiming that Neugebauer is a hypocrite if you prefer. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 03:32, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- By all means, if several RS are labeling him a hypocrite voting to close the parks, in news articles, then source it and add it. HuffPo is a tricky source, as it's both a blog and a news aggregator. See Wikipedia:Objective_Sources, which explicitly mentions Huffington Post.
- Regarding what closes, that's completely OMB's job. It's not an accusation, it's a fact: they decide what is deemed essential and what is not. It's got nothing to do with who's right or wrong. Politics aside, the House voted on a budget that the Senate didn't accept, and hence the shutdown was triggered. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:43, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- Again, you're welcome to adhere to that illogic, but nobody else is buying it. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 03:47, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- No need to take things personally or make personal attacks...we're here to work on the article together. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:58, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- Again, you're welcome to adhere to that illogic, but nobody else is buying it. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 03:47, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The Huffington Post is widely accepted as a reliable source. I will add other sources claiming that Neugebauer is a hypocrite if you prefer. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 03:32, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The finger-pointing toward the Obama administration, valid or not, by various conservatives, is widely covered across the spectrum of media. The reported opinion of a public figure is news. The opinion of a non-notable person is not, until said opinion/hypocrisy is called out by RS. Regarding the houstonnews article, it's an opinion piece by Ted Cruz, who is clearly notable and fairly central to this event, which is why his opinion, fair or not, is valid in the article. But I'll add other RS that state the same thing if you prefer. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:30, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
To NorthBySouthBaranof: Can you identify (from the sources given or any other reliable source) any vote by Neugebauer for a resolution which would deny funding to national parks or any vote by Neugebauer against a resolution which would grant funding to national parks? If not (and I think that you will not be able to do so), then you and those sources owe him an apology for misrepresenting him. JRSpriggs (talk) 10:53, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The reliable sources refer to the fact that Neugebauer is part of a Republican majority in the House that is widely considered by reliable sources to be significantly responsible for the shutdown due to its refusal to pass a clean continuing resolution and fund the government - that the GOP's attempt to tie the ACA to the budget is irresponsible, Neugebauer has supported that strategy and thus is viewed by reliable sources as responsible for its ramifications. The fact that you disagree with this viewpoint does not, in any way, make it invalid or a misrepresentation. It is a point of view expressed by a wide array of reliable sources.
- As the NPOV policy states, "neutrality requires that each article... fairly represents all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources. " It is trivial to demonstrate that the predominant viewpoint among published, reliable sources is that the Republican majority in the House is primarily (though not entirely) responsible for the shutdown — including the shutdown's impact on national parks. Therefore, this mainstream viewpoint should and must be given prominence in the article. If you believe this viewpoint needs to be balanced or rebutted, you are free to be bold and add reliable sources which present the opposing viewpoint. You are not free to remove this viewpoint or to present it as factually false. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 12:23, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
Why is there no elapse time listed in any kind of informational box?
This would be HIGHLY useful to readers, to know how many days, etc have elapsed since the start of the shut down. Herp Derp (talk) 19:55, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the lede indicates that the shut down started at the start of October 1st, 2013. I think the average reader is capable of noting that date, and comparing it to the present date, whatever that date might be, during the second week of the shut-down,
-- Yellowdesk (talk) 05:27, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Also please bear WP:RECENTISM and WP:NOTNEWS in mind. This is an encyclopedia. It should be written from the long view, not as a by-the-day update of current events. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 21:51, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
False Equivalency
As currently written the article seems to imply both sides in the debate are responsible for the shutdown. I understand that neutrality is a goal on Wikipedia and we don't want to imply either side is to blame but as it stands the article is in fact not neutral but biased towards the mainstream media's favorite "both sides are to blame!". I suggest a section discussing the debate on who is to blame, as it stands the article doesn't really even give the impression that there is a debate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.180.127.184 (talk) 21:17, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- "We don't want to imply either side is to blame" but we need "a section discussing the debate on who is to blame"? I'm not quite sure I follow. If you have something in mind, create an account, be WP:BOLD, and feel free to edit away. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 23:15, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree with 24.*; covering the "debate" is exactly what it sounds like, simply covering the merits of why to blame either the GOP or Democrats, or both. (And I agree there is a false equivalency being made in the media to be "neutral" and blame both sides, but that's just my personal opinion.) The article does currently avoid assigning any blame, which seems correct (for Wikipedia.) But there are sources analyzing who should be blamed...unfortunately, at this point most of them are partisan sources that aren't reasonable for us to use for that type of analysis. It may not be possible to add such a section until some future point when there's less-biased analysis. Odg2vcLR (talk) 23:51, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Just to clarify, "neutrality" in Wikipedia doesn't mean that the article is neutral with respect to different partisans, it means that the article is neutral with respect to the sources.--Nowa (talk) 01:09, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
- Right, and we are reasonably neutral with respect to those sources right now. But what the IP editor was noting, and I agree with, is many sources themselves seem to be taking a "neutral" view that may not actually be representative of the situation (ratings? "fairness?" something else?); but the analyses of this possible lack of neutrality do not seem unbiased enough to be sourced past things like the current blurb about Media Matters specifically mentioning "false equivalency" in the "Reactions" section. It's possible that more-distanced academic analysis of the event may provide appropriate sourcing for ascribing blame in a more concrete fashion at some future point. We also have polling data, but that's not really useful yet past just reporting the numbers, until properly analyzed by unbiased sources. Odg2vcLR (talk) 03:51, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
- Just to clarify, "neutrality" in Wikipedia doesn't mean that the article is neutral with respect to different partisans, it means that the article is neutral with respect to the sources.--Nowa (talk) 01:09, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree with 24.*; covering the "debate" is exactly what it sounds like, simply covering the merits of why to blame either the GOP or Democrats, or both. (And I agree there is a false equivalency being made in the media to be "neutral" and blame both sides, but that's just my personal opinion.) The article does currently avoid assigning any blame, which seems correct (for Wikipedia.) But there are sources analyzing who should be blamed...unfortunately, at this point most of them are partisan sources that aren't reasonable for us to use for that type of analysis. It may not be possible to add such a section until some future point when there's less-biased analysis. Odg2vcLR (talk) 23:51, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
Effects of the 2013 Shutdown on Science Research
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The effects that the government shutdown is having on scientific research is being documented in the "Shutdown" section of the American Association for the Advancement of Science in their Scientific Community page. This page can be used as a resource for compiling a general summary of how the 2013 shutdown has impacted science research72.203.142.175 (talk) 16:29, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
Some National Park Service units opened by state funding
See for example [1]. I wonder if we should thus add an exception clause to the statement saying all 401 units will be closed ("except <list of parks opened>"). It definitely should be included under the NPS section.--Jasper Deng (talk) 18:40, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
- They all were closed, so it should be modified to note that certain units reopened temporarily. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 20:11, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
Preceding Events section I
I propose removing the first two paragraphs about Edwin Meese and FreedomPartners. There doesn't appear to be a causal connection to the shutdown, or specifically to the Meadows letter in the following paragraphs. Didn't the 2012 election demonstrate that reelection candidates shouldn't be swayed by millions and billions of pre$$ure?
And about that letter: do we have to write about which representative initially proposed the idea to defund Obamacare—devoting several paragraphs and even a list of every signatory to the letter? Every proposal is assumed to have an initiator, or "architect", so why include it—unless there's evidence that the shutdown was Meadows' real goal...
The next paragraph about the negative media campaigns offers a single uncited sentence suggesting that the campaigns have been effective. Unless there's a quoted citation, the whole paragraph lacks effect.
I also propose removing or summarizing the paragraph that lists all the cities on the itineraries of two campaign tours. KinkyLipids (talk) 06:21, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
Wikipedia is neither news, nor a crystal ball
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The economic impact section focuses on the economic impact of a possible longtime shut-down. This appears crystal to me. Likewise, the effect of departments sections say "will shut down"; shouldn't we rather say "has shut down" ? Regards, Iselilja (talk) 08:33, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Reporting what reliable sources have said about the potential for an economic impact is not a violation of WP:CRYSTAL any more than reporting what reliable sources say about the hyperloop is a violation of WP:CRYSTAL. Wikipedia often writes about things that may happen in the future, when sufficient reliable sources report on those projected or proposed events. As the policy states, It is appropriate to report discussion and arguments about the prospects for success of future proposals and projects or whether some development will occur, if discussion is properly referenced. There is no legitimate dispute that there will be some economic impact from the shutdown - you can't put 800,000 people out of work overnight and not have an impact on the economy. The only debate is what the level of impact will be. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 08:50, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, of course there will be an economic impact and that obviously belongs in the article. But speculations about the impact of a 2-3 week shut-down won't be very relevant anymore once we know how long the actual shut-down lasted and we have estimate for the actual economic loss/impact. So, I don't believe that pure speculations about the future have lasting encyclopedic value, except for noting shortly and generally that a long shut-down was expected to have high costs. I am not going to insist on removal here though. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 10:02, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Agreed it certainly is crystall ball. Just because a RS said it doesnt mean it has to be included on Wikipedia. It is merely spspeculation, WP does not write about what may happened in future, please show that (and it would be a cviolation of CRYSTAL)(also see OSE). Yes there will be SOEM economic impact, but without any economic impact (other than costing 300, a day) it is speculative to say WHAT that impact will be.
- Also per BRD it was removed, till consensus is formed there is no need to restore it.(Lihaas (talk) 19:15, 2 October 2013 (UTC)).
- I strongly disagree with your application of BRD here. Your removal of the information was the bold action. Ryan Vesey 19:22, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Just so the sequence of events is absolutely clear, Lihaas originally removed the section referring to WP:CRYSTAL. In response, GabrielF started the section above to oppose and I reverted, under the rationale explained in that section. That is textbook BRD, except that Lihaas made no attempt to engage in discussion at that time. Lihaas then repeated the removal under the same rationale. In both cases the inclusion of the section is clearly the status quo, and the section removal is the Bold (and reverted) action that would require consensus to implement. - BanyanTree 22:46, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with your application of BRD here. Your removal of the information was the bold action. Ryan Vesey 19:22, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, of course there will be an economic impact and that obviously belongs in the article. But speculations about the impact of a 2-3 week shut-down won't be very relevant anymore once we know how long the actual shut-down lasted and we have estimate for the actual economic loss/impact. So, I don't believe that pure speculations about the future have lasting encyclopedic value, except for noting shortly and generally that a long shut-down was expected to have high costs. I am not going to insist on removal here though. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 10:02, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- As I stated above, this is a misapplication of WP:CRYSTAL. Ryan Vesey 19:22, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Agreed, crystal does not apply here for the same reason it does not apply for the possible effects of global warming. Sepsis II (talk) 19:31, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
- Umm, BRD is the insertion of content, that removal is a reversion. How can you revert something by adding it?
- You still have not explained WHY it misapplies to crystal. youve just stated it does.
- I came right here to discuss and then removed it citing BRD, btw.
- Nevertheless, you have not explained why it is not crystal. 1 OP did, then 2 others disagreed. CONVERSELY, instead of arguing, I explained exactly what was strong with the edit (as did the other user above). that there is NO content to the article, is is PURE speculation of what MAY happen. Nothing HAS happened.
- As a compromise, perhaps cut the jargon, and move it to the economic section of REACTIONS (as that is what it is, a reaction, not an impact (the impact is speculationas it has not happened YET)). Then cut it down to something like analysts and financial advisors have suggested...
- sUGESTING compromises isa lot better hthan attacking editors and accusing and seeking them wrong. There has been only this as a compromise solution...and you can read here that NO ONE has provided an attempt to find consensus by compromiseLihaas (talk) 00:09, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
- There is a clear consensus here that you are wrong to apply WP:CRYSTAL here, and that your understanding of the policy is flawed. I would suggest that you stop edit-warring and discuss. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 00:37, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
- Clearly you have no understanding of what you are blindly reverting [2]. I did not remove any content. As mentioned above (and you should read it before blindly reverting), I am suggesting an alternative accommodation that KEEPS the content. The edit I cited above wshows that you readded redundant and DOUBLE content. (if its so difficlit then do a control+f and see the content is in there, with perhaps slight different wording.(Lihaas (talk) 00:40, 3 October 2013 (UTC)).
- THIS IS ABJECTLY STUPID AND DUMB BEYOND BELIEF! and is the most obvious indication that nothing is read here, war is the first option. its quite clearly stated here that NO content was removed, there is now the SAME content listed twice on the page that any ctrl+f search can show. Yet if this was to reverted it would count as 3RR or some such shit because no one bothers to read/discuss but just wants one [blind][version to revert to per NPA and personality politics. Please see the damn page! THE SAME CONTENT IS ALREADY ON IT!!! And considering it was reverted to twice just cancels out any possible AGF which was thre the first time.
- Further I have not reverted theice, because the edit that moved stuff in accommodation per this discussion did not REVERT ANYTHING. conetnet is still there(Lihaas (talk) 00:46, 3 October 2013 (UTC)).
- That the shutdown has an economic impact is undisputed fact. The economic impact is already happening. There is no consensus to remove that section or split it into "reactions," whatever those are. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 00:51, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
- NO ONE is disputing here that there is an economic impact. The disputeis WHAT the impact is.
- Consensus is based ona ccomodation and compromise. that was what was changed and y9u wnet and quite clearly BLINDLY readded content.
- Now if you care you can discuss this issue as per the questions posed. Because what the MEDIA say and analsysts suggest is REACTION/speculation (and if you knw anything about financial markets you wllknow it works on speculation_) and THAT is not fact on the ground.
- That was amongst the most stupidest edits I've seen here. and ive been here for nearly 4-5 uears now, not a few months.(Lihaas (talk) 00:55, 3 October 2013 (UTC)).
- Now if you care you can discuss this issue as per the questions posed. Because what the MEDIA say and analsysts suggest is REACTION/speculation (and if you knw anything about financial markets you wllknow it works on speculation_) and THAT is not fact on the ground.
- That the shutdown has an economic impact is undisputed fact. The economic impact is already happening. There is no consensus to remove that section or split it into "reactions," whatever those are. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 00:51, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
- Clearly you have no understanding of what you are blindly reverting [2]. I did not remove any content. As mentioned above (and you should read it before blindly reverting), I am suggesting an alternative accommodation that KEEPS the content. The edit I cited above wshows that you readded redundant and DOUBLE content. (if its so difficlit then do a control+f and see the content is in there, with perhaps slight different wording.(Lihaas (talk) 00:40, 3 October 2013 (UTC)).
- There is a clear consensus here that you are wrong to apply WP:CRYSTAL here, and that your understanding of the policy is flawed. I would suggest that you stop edit-warring and discuss. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 00:37, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
- Nevertheless, you have not explained why it is not crystal. 1 OP did, then 2 others disagreed. CONVERSELY, instead of arguing, I explained exactly what was strong with the edit (as did the other user above). that there is NO content to the article, is is PURE speculation of what MAY happen. Nothing HAS happened.
- Agreed, crystal does not apply here for the same reason it does not apply for the possible effects of global warming. Sepsis II (talk) 19:31, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
I strongly object to moving the economic impact section under reactions. First, the economic impact is not a "reaction" in the same way that opinion polls or media reports are reactions. Second, it is an important aspect of the story and deserves its own top-level section. Third, these are not necessarily reactions. The source for Maryland tax revenues was published several days before the shutdown. Nor is the WP:CRYSTAL argument valid as that policy explicitly allows well-sourced, reasonable predictions of near-term events. GabrielF (talk) 01:15, 3 October 2013 (UTC)
Edit requests for lead
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"Obamacare" is not an appropriate descriptor for an encyclopedia, except when quoting people, statements like "(commonly known as Obamacare)", and similar.
- Change "The Senate stripped the bill of the measures related to Obamacare, passed it in revised form on Friday, September 27, 2013." to "The Senate stripped the bill of the measures related to the Affordable Care Act, and passed it in revised form on September 27, 2013." (it's missing an "and" as well)
- Change "The Senate refused to pass the bill while it still had measures to delay Obamacare" to "The Senate refused to pass the bill while it still had measures to delay the Affordable Care Act"
- Change "The fight centered on the Continuing Appropriations Resolution, 2014 (H.J.Res 59; 113th Congress)" to something simpler. Maybe "...on a continuing appropriations resolution for 2014"
- "the two sides could not make a compromise bill" is also clunky. You don't "make" a bill. Change it to "pass", or some language like "reach a compromise ...".
Is it really necessary for this page to still be semi-protected?
Odg2vcLR (talk) 17:34, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
- "Obamacare" is not an appropriate descriptor for an encyclopedia Then why does Barack Obama's PAC operate the Obamacare twitter account? https://twitter.com/obamacare Shii (tock) 21:05, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
- I wasn't aware that Twitter was an encyclopedia. Of course Obama, his allies, and his opponents use Obamacare in everyday usage, as do I. None of us are encyclopedias, either. Consensus on pages like Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act is to use PPACA/ACA, except when describing the term "Obamacare", or in quotations. Are you saying all of those pages should primarily use "Obamacare" instead? Odg2vcLR (talk) 21:29, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
- That is what I'm saying, but it sounds like there are a lot of people upset about something Organizing for Change is not upset about. Shii (tock) 15:32, 5 October 2013 (UTC)
- I wasn't aware that Twitter was an encyclopedia. Of course Obama, his allies, and his opponents use Obamacare in everyday usage, as do I. None of us are encyclopedias, either. Consensus on pages like Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act is to use PPACA/ACA, except when describing the term "Obamacare", or in quotations. Are you saying all of those pages should primarily use "Obamacare" instead? Odg2vcLR (talk) 21:29, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
- I literally came to the talk page to ask why the usage of Obamacare, a term spurred by pure political playings, was being used on a theoretically encyclopedic article. All instances, except for the initial blurb of the common usage of the term Obamacare should be changed to refer to the plan as it was introduced and is legally referred to - The Affordable Care Act. Chainsol (talk) 02:26, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
- Although "Obamacare" was coined by its enemies, it has come to be used by virtually everyone including Obama himself. It is similar to "Medicare" and Obama welcomed it as indicating that he cares about people. "Affordable Care Act", "Patient Protection Act", or full name "Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act" are simply too long to be used in casual conversation. More importantly, they beg the question of what the effect of the act is. Some conservatives have referred to it as the "Unaffordable Care Act". JRSpriggs (talk) 08:12, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
- You say "too long to be used in casual conversation" and that is Odg2vcLR's point. This is not a casual conversation, this is an encyclopedic article. "Some conservatives have referred to it as the "Unaffordable Care Act"." is completely irrelevant to the fact it should be named by its proper name. 46.18.96.82 (talk) 16:17, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
- Although "Obamacare" was coined by its enemies, it has come to be used by virtually everyone including Obama himself. It is similar to "Medicare" and Obama welcomed it as indicating that he cares about people. "Affordable Care Act", "Patient Protection Act", or full name "Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act" are simply too long to be used in casual conversation. More importantly, they beg the question of what the effect of the act is. Some conservatives have referred to it as the "Unaffordable Care Act". JRSpriggs (talk) 08:12, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
- My vote is in favor of using the proper name. It is commonly used; it is not an unknown. The fact that it has a nickname doesn't mean we have to use it. Both ACA and Obamacare are used in common parlance. Given that, I think the proper name wins out, especially as the latter is more commonly used as a pejorative than the former.204.65.34.128 (talk) 20:22, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
- Just because Obama calls it Obamacare doesn't mean some people shouldn't have a reason to be upset, but I'm in a third category. I don't think this article should have to defer to the consensus in the article on the Affordable Care Act; A short name should be preferred for WP:Concise, but using the abbreviations PPACA or ACA would be confusing in an article that doesn't focus on the PPACA/ACA. I think it should be introduced by it's official name, but referred to thereafter by a shorter, recognizable name, and I think Obamacare is the best available choice, albeit imperfect...
- Which leads to my second point. The name shouldn't be perfect. After all, we use the name "People's Republic" in the China article, even though the intro makes it clear that it's a one-party communist state. We also use the name "National Socialist" in the Nazi article, even though they were socialist only in their early intellectual phase and became anti-communist once they were given power. The Nazi article also routinely refers to it's subject by it's nickname.
- Therefore, I oppose. KinkyLipids (talk) 03:56, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
- To 46.18.96.82: The reason I mentioned "Unaffordable Care Act" is to illustrate that allowing its supporters to name it "Affordable Care Act" is at least as unfair as allowing its detractors to name it "Unaffordable Care Act". Calling it "affordable" is assuming a fact for which there is NO evidence; on the contrary, the evidence so far suggests that "unaffordable" is a better description. At least, "Obamacare" does not assume any fact other than it is supported by Obama (which it is) and that it has to do with healthcare (which it does). JRSpriggs (talk) 07:26, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
Proposed split
This article is now overly long. I suggest that per WP:SUMMARYSTYLE we should move the detail lists to separate articles. This article could then concentrate on being about the shutdown as a whole. Specifically I suggest the folowing:
- "List of agencies and affected operations" → List of US federal government agencies and operations affected by the shutdown of 2013 (itself this will be a long article)
- "Reactions" → Reactions to the United States federal government shutdown of 2013
I'm not set on those titles, so do suggest improvements. Also, the two proposed splits are independent so please don't support or oppose both just because you support or oppose one. Thryduulf (talk) 01:15, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Looks like you want to do something like mentioned just above. I'm for both your suggestions. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 02:26, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- I would definitely support splitting the list of agencies and I would also support including the other effects (non-profit organizations, Native Americans, etc.) in there too. I would oppose the reactions section being split off at this time, since I think it just looks worse because of the list of effects. Also, some of the content in the reactions could be merged with existing sections (like the "Domestic political" subsection with the "Attempts to restore funding" section or the "Debate over national park closures" with the "Department of Interior" section). - Maximusveritas (talk) 02:58, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree with Maximus entirely.. That list is *huge*, and really affects the readability; it's tough to even get down to the reaction section. Nomader (talk) 03:10, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- If we take the "List of agencies and affected operations" section into a separate article and have a summary in this article, this article will not be overly long. We can group the six "Effect of..." / "Economic effect" sections as sub-sections under "Other effects". We can keep the "Reactions" section as it is not long. After the change, the navigation through the table of contents will be easy enough. Currently, even the table of contents is too long. Z22 (talk) 04:08, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Agreed with the first... not entirely sure the second needs to be done right now, but if the shutdown extends much longer and the reactions continue to pile up, it would probably be necessary. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 05:08, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose for the moment given the complexity and uncertainty of the shutdown and the public's interest in knowing how the shutdown will affect things that they care about or rely on. Please see my more detailed comment above in the "Overdose on detailed departmental effects" section. GabrielF (talk) 16:14, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- This isn't a proposal to delete any information, just a proposal to make it more accessible. This article would still contain a summary of the effects and the details for those that want them would still be available but wouldn't be in the way of those who only want a summary. Thryduulf (talk) 17:40, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- If anything, I think a split on the first would make such information more easily accessible to someone trying to find out what is affected. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 19:52, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- I support a split for the effects. I think a more natural split would be to have an article Effects of the 2013 United States government shutdown that includes not only the federal government effects, but also the collection of short sections describing effects on other entities, with a summary retained here. I oppose a split of the reactions at this time, since it's not as overwhelmingly long as the effects, but this could change if the reactions section grows significantly in the future. Antony–22 (talk⁄contribs) 01:20, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
- If anything, I think a split on the first would make such information more easily accessible to someone trying to find out what is affected. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 19:52, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Support as per WP:NOTNEWS 18.51.3.206 (talk) 02:29, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
- This isn't a proposal to delete any information, just a proposal to make it more accessible. This article would still contain a summary of the effects and the details for those that want them would still be available but wouldn't be in the way of those who only want a summary. Thryduulf (talk) 17:40, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Personally, the length of this article only bothers me from an aesthetic angle; from a practical angle I have no trouble navigating by searching keywords, clicking links in the table of contents, or dragging my scroll bar. I guess it might be intimidating if I just wanted a quick skim-through of the table of contents to get an overview of the content, but the way it's indented makes it easy to ignore sections I'm not interested in. I hear GabrielF's point that the information is currently important, but if you're a directly affected citizen who wants details, clicking on a link labeled "List of affected government operations" at the top of the "Effect on federal government operations" section should get you there, though it should be renamed "Effects". As long as the consensus solution is a win-win.
- On another note, I think the sections starting with "Effect..." that don't have any subsections should be combined into a section labeled "Other Effects". KinkyLipids (talk) 04:22, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
- Thus far several supports (6-8) for splitting the first, and one opposed...If there aren't any further objections, I'll start that tomorrow (unless someone else does it). ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:12, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- To reiterate what I said above, I don't see any urgency for this move. We're above the recommended article length, but significantly below the length that would put us in Special:LongPages. By comparison, the length of this article is either equivalent to or less than the length of articles about other important American political events. We're at 148kB right now. Hillary Clinton presidential primary campaign, 2008 is at 202kB, John McCain presidential campaign, 2008 is at 206kB, Barack Obama presidential primary campaign, 2008 is at 210kB, Political positions of Mitt Romney is at 214kB, 2013 mass surveillance disclosures is at 315KB. Even the article Republican Party presidential debates, 2012 is at 95KB. Also, the situation is still very much in flux and we are seeing important government agencies either recall workers (e.g. DoD) or impose additional furloughs (e.g. the Nuclear Regulatory Commission) on a daily basis. Even the shutdown of relatively minor agencies like the Nuclear Regulatory Commission would be a massive news story in any other context.
- I recognize that there is a difference between moving content and deleting it, but moving content to a list article which will require finding the link, clicking on it and then waiting for a page load will significantly reduce the accessibility of the information to our readers.
- If impact on government section is too cumbersome, can we explore alternative ways of presenting the information before removing it from the article? If the table of contents is too lengthy, can we consider suppressing the agency names from the TOC? Might there be alternative ways to organize the information that would be more readable? Perhaps instead of one section per agency we might have sections that discuss impacts in specific areas (e.g. science or veterans).GabrielF (talk) 05:06, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- Your comments about there being much more information to add is a good argument for the split. Going into detail about the effects on individual agencies is not appropriate for what should be a high-level article. This is the equivalent of United States presidential election, 2008 which has summaries of and links to the articles about individual campaigns and debates, etc. just as this should have equally accessible sub articles that go into the detail about individual aspects. Thryduulf (talk) 12:42, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- While correct that it's not one of the longest articles out there, it's much easier to split before it becomes one. That being said, per WP:SIZESPLIT, over 100KB should "almost certainly" be split. The problem is that there is so much information in the article on so many topics already that I think it'd be easier to find the specific content on a more detailed subpage. Note that on a split, it's not an outright removal of content. There would likely be the same top-level header called "Effects of the 2013 United States government shutdown" with a "see more" link, and a paragraph or two of summary. Anyone looking for the information would end up the same place and should be able to easily a) get the summary they want, or b) click the link for further details. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 13:23, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
- I've moved the affected agencies list to List of US federal government agencies and operations affected by the shutdown of 2013. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 02:12, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
- Split - I support splitting "Reactions" to Reactions_to_the_United_States_federal_government_shutdown_of_2013 so long as a summary is left in the main article. --Jax 0677 (talk) 18:15, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- I've moved the affected agencies list to List of US federal government agencies and operations affected by the shutdown of 2013. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 02:12, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
- Thus far several supports (6-8) for splitting the first, and one opposed...If there aren't any further objections, I'll start that tomorrow (unless someone else does it). ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 03:12, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
"Current" template
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I have readded the "Current" template,as the reason for removal given was, "Removed [']Current['], intended for articles edited by many on the same day," which, as I saw 42 changes (not including minor, bot or my edits) in a day, is obviously true.Bettering the Wiki (talk) 02:15, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Upon a more careful reading of the edit summary, you may notice that it said in addition: "Only two editors in the last five hours." Obviously, editors were not stepping on each other's edits at that time, hence the template was not needed at that time, and further, the later edits that day were merely two to three an hour. Rather handle-able.
The purpose the {{current}} template was originally created for, and is presently used for, is to warn editors to not step on each other's edits because of present activity, and when that activity drops off, it is desirable to take this extraordinary template off of the page.
For some historical perspective, the template was created for an occasion in which there were more than 400 edits in less than 30 hours on an article. This article has somewhere around one fifth or one quarter of that volume on a busy day, and although actively edited, is not, so far, suffering from editors stepping on each others edits for an astronomically phenomenal world event that draws such a significant volume of edits and editors similar to the occasion of the 2004 Madrid train bombings.
-- Yellowdesk (talk) 05:19, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Keep the Current tag because it is an ongoing event that seems to last. Geraldshields11 (talk) 13:43, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Remove - I don't think people are coming to Wikipedia to see if the shutdown has ended, and editors will be aware if it is current or not. I haven't had any edit conflict issues, and I think edit volume has been active but manageable (roughly 20 edits in the last 16 hours). ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 23:13, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
- Keep - This is a current event. Respectfully, Tiyang (talk) 01:58, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
Conservatives excited about shutting down government
The edit made by JRSpriggs here is both factually wrong and goes against the reliable source provided. The members of Congress quoted were not excited because they were blocking Obamacare - indeed, they were not blocking Obamacare and have not blocked Obamacare at any time. The article is very clear that the members of Congress were expressing excitement that they were about to take the action of shutting down the government in order to make a political point about Obamacare. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 09:33, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
- Your own source [3] says, "On Saturday [Sept 28], conservatives rallied House Republicans around a plan to fund the government but delay the Affordable Care Act, President Obama’s signature health-care law, for a year." [date] and emphasis added. They were happy because they naively believed that the Democrats would have no choice but to accept the Republican CR which would delay Obamacare while still funding the government. JRSpriggs (talk) 13:02, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
- Rather than your fantasy that the Tea Party consists of nihilists, a more accurate view would be that they are like children who are trying to do the right thing and are being out-maneuvered by cynical adults (Democrat leaders) who are more dishonest and treacherous than they realize. JRSpriggs (talk) 16:14, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
- This talk page is not the place to debate our personal opinions about the shutdown. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 08:26, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
- Rather than your fantasy that the Tea Party consists of nihilists, a more accurate view would be that they are like children who are trying to do the right thing and are being out-maneuvered by cynical adults (Democrat leaders) who are more dishonest and treacherous than they realize. JRSpriggs (talk) 16:14, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
- The Washington Post says what it says, even according to the Mediaite rebuttal. "As it appeared in The Washington Post on Saturday, September 28th, before the shutdown went into effect, Bachmann’s quote did appear to refer to the inevitability of the government shutdown." [4] The Washington Post article states one thing, Bachmann states a different thing. We present each of those claims fairly. We cannot assert that Bachmann's claim is accurate and the Washington Post's claim is not. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 08:24, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
- I am not saying that the Washington Post is wrong in that article. What I am saying is that YOU are reading things into it which are not there. I am not familiar with the Mediate. JRSpriggs (talk) 01:45, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
Not enough diagrams (too much text)
This is getting to be a fairly long article. Text may eventually be summarized or separated out into other articles, but it would also be nice to have some more figures and diagrams if anyone cares to put some in. I found one that seemed pretty illustrative here: [[5]] The existing photos are nice, but don't really say much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.129.23.146 (talk) 20:42, 13 October 2013 (UTC) yes, the article is too long. There was a dispute in 2013, a few paragraphs, it was resolved. This is not a newspaper or a blow by blow account.Stephanie Bowman (talk) 20:42, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- You might want to consider making your own diagrams. Alas, we cannot republish diagrams from most news sources since they are copyrighted.--Nowa (talk) 01:15, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- I wish I could. I can do simple text edits of existing articles, but images and diagrams are a bit beyond my expertise. I can do Excel charts and stuff, but I don't even know what program to use to make an svg file (or whatever they are). If I get around to it I might do a bit of research as I'm guessing gimp can do it but I've never tried. Your advice is welcome and appreciated though. Cheers. 203.129.23.146 (talk) 21:07, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Mini-CR bills
Hi! I found a source of updating information about the mini-CR bills the House has been passing to fund portions of the government, most of which have been blocked by the Senate. The source is Speaker Boehner's Official website. Obviously the language on the list is pro-Republican, but they can't lie about what was passed. Can someone incorporate this in a neutral way? It might be helpful to put it with the other data on mini-CRs and the House's strategy. Thanks. HistoricMN44 (talk) 14:31, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- I think there is undue weight on those bills as is. I notice that all of the individual pages for the bills are currently being debated for deletion here. Ideally I think the individual pages should be merged into a main article on all of the mini-CR bils and then this section could link to that article after a summary. - Maximusveritas (talk) 15:39, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- Boehner's website will never be cited for facts on this subject. You couldn't have chosen a more biased and unreliable source. If his site makes it into this article it will be to show Boehner's opinions or political positions (with inline attribution, of course) and that's it. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 18:00, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree. That's what I meant to suggest - the page can be a good source of explanation of the Republican strategy and the rhetoric they are using. It's also an up-to-date list of which bills actually are mini-CRs, which is suggestive, if nothing else. Thanks. HistoricMN44 (talk) 18:16, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- There's WP:NORUSH to get this information into our article. If the mini-CRs are sufficiently notable then there will be more reliable news stories about them in the coming days. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 18:22, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree. That's what I meant to suggest - the page can be a good source of explanation of the Republican strategy and the rhetoric they are using. It's also an up-to-date list of which bills actually are mini-CRs, which is suggestive, if nothing else. Thanks. HistoricMN44 (talk) 18:16, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
Wikipedia must stop lying
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Ok, might be lying in good faith, but still lying. See the introduction. The government has NOT shutdown. What has happened is large scale personnel furloughs. No department has closed. The EPA and Navy have not been abolished. Wikipedia should stop being so sloppy. The other thing is that personnel are not losing pay. What they are suffering is a delay in paychecks. All government workers will essentially get a free paid vacation. This is a fact. Stephanie Bowman (talk) 20:39, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
It is not "possible", it is fact. This is what the FDA is telling employees. Also, if it is common to be sloppy, Wikipedia should not do the same and use the word "shutdown" in a sloppy manner. Stephanie Bowman (talk) 20:58, 15 October 2013 Not all reliable sources are inaccurate. In the UK, the word furlough is being used, an uncommon word in the UK Stephanie Bowman (talk) 21:01, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
Please STOP falsely accusing me of trolling. I agree that there is no media coverage over federal employees getting a free paid holiday. However, it is common knowledge that this will happen. It is fact that it has happened before. To deny it is biased writing. A good compromise would not state that they are not paid but to either say that they have been paid after previous shutdowns have been resolved or that the status of their paycheck is temporarily on hold. As for the FDA, it is fact that an employee was told he would be paid later. Stephanie Bowman (talk) 20:35, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
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Chinese editorial
I realize that the news organization is state-run, but is it appropriate to cite an editorial as a reaction of the PRC? I feel like "International Reactions" should be limited to the public reactions of the governments themselves. What is Xi Jinping's reaction? Ryan Vesey 19:48, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- Can you find a reference?--Nowa (talk) 01:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- While the article might be an editorial, I see no reason not to think the editorial could be reflecting the opinions of the highest levels of the Chinese government. After all, it is a state-run news organization. Mbinebri talk ← 15:27, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- Editorials are by definition opinion pieces of the author. Since it is a state-run news organization, it can be assumed that the opinion is not contrary to that of the state, but that doesn't make it an official position of the state. I'd be more comfortable with only including official statements in the section. Ryan Vesey 15:39, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- True, the ed isn't an official state position, but it might be as close as we get. That said, even if we decided it was more of a media position than an official one, the content doesn't need to be removed - it could simply be moved to the following "Media" subsection of the international reaction section. Mbinebri talk ← 15:50, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- I'd be fine with moving it under the Media subsection, I didn't even realize it was there. Ryan Vesey 16:13, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- True, the ed isn't an official state position, but it might be as close as we get. That said, even if we decided it was more of a media position than an official one, the content doesn't need to be removed - it could simply be moved to the following "Media" subsection of the international reaction section. Mbinebri talk ← 15:50, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- Editorials are by definition opinion pieces of the author. Since it is a state-run news organization, it can be assumed that the opinion is not contrary to that of the state, but that doesn't make it an official position of the state. I'd be more comfortable with only including official statements in the section. Ryan Vesey 15:39, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Furlough vs. paid leave
http://money.cnn.com/2013/10/09/news/economy/federal-employees-pay/
This is a reliable source saying the federal employees will likely get a free paid vacation by getting paid for not working. The FDA is telling their employees not to worry because they'll get paid.
WP should not falsely state that employees are on unpaid furloughs. That is deceptive. All Wikipedia should do is report the facts honestly. Stephanie Bowman (talk) 20:51, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- You've really got to get better at writing section headers. I've modified this for you. Productive discussion will never result from a section titled "wikipedia is misleading, possibly due to politcal agenda". As of this point, workers were furloughed. If no further action is taken on the matter, they will not be paid, so what is stated in the article is accurate. The article does mention that the house passed a bill giving back pay to the employees. It is possible that the issue deserves its own section. Ryan Vesey 20:57, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- The article that you linked makes no mention of the FDA or what it is telling its employees.GabrielF (talk) 20:59, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- While I certainly don't agree with Stephanie Bowman's unproductive screed, I do agree that at this point we should stop saying that workers were furloughed without pay. The Senate deal gives back pay and that is likely to be the law of the land very soon. Saying "furloughed without pay" may be technically accurate, but
will soon be misleadingis misleading at this point. Moreover there's nothing inaccurate about saying they were simply "furloughed." After the Senate deal is passed we can explain pay was withheld during the furlough but back pay was given after it was over. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 21:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)- I've removed "without pay" for now since it was redundant. The use of without pay seemed to give extra emphasis to that aspect which is certainly unnecessary given the discussion above. Ryan Vesey 21:45, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree, and agree that there needs to be a discussion of the fact that it was withheld somewhere in the article, because that is a significant impact on federal workers - the vast majority of whom are middle-class folks and for whom even missing one paycheck out of the regular cycle can work financial hardships. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 22:58, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
- When the information is available, I'd like to see a breakdown of which departments were temporarily reduced, which type of furloughs (paid, unpaid, reduced pay, etc.) and other technical details .
- I'm imagining a table with columns, Department , reduction , furlough type , Notes
JamesThomasMoon1979
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Preceding events section II
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This has to be one of the most putridly biased articles I've ever read. I thought Wikipedia held themselves to a higher standard than this. Honestly, what do you have to say for yourselves? "With funds from the billionaires Koch Brothers and conservative political action committees..." Do you know how many funds that Democrats have received behind this from organizations like George Soros, Goldman Sachs, et al, backing Democratic politicians that helped create the travesty you see before you? Talking points, talking points, on a freaking Wikipedia article. Get your heads together and make a decent article. This is a government shutdown, not a Wikimedia one. User:Decentman12 [[User talk:Decentman12] 18:11, 16 October 2013 (EST)
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- That wording scertainly needs to changs as biased in accusing the Rep side. WP doesnt take sides#Lihaas (talk) 11:32, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- That section is extrememly biased. It basically takes one biased source and presents all the information in that source as factual. I have attributed it. Arzel (talk) 20:33, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
- I haven't evaluated our text for bias, but generally speaking, factual content supported by reliable sources doesn't require attribution. What makes the Times article itself biased? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 20:42, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
- The Times article is full of allegations against the Koch's and their supposed ties to various funding. The NYT in general is known to be biased, so I don't see the problem in attributing the allegations to the source rather than stating them as fact. Arzel (talk) 20:59, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
- Ah, one can always count on Arzel for a jolly fine edit war. So in response to your edit comment, which actually addresses a slightly separate issue, the Times article has a paragraph that starts, "The billionaire Koch brothers, Charles and David, have been deeply involved with financing the overall effort." And, as to your comment that the Times "in general is known to be biased," that horse was been beaten to death long ago. Generally known according to what? The Book of Arzel? (That actually sounds biblical!) --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 21:05, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
- I agree with User:Arzel accusations, besides the adjectives he uses to state them, about noting that the New York Times is a biased political news source and should not be the only citation.
- Arzel The Times has a strong bias
- DrFleischman Generally known according to what?
- @DrFleischman The NYTimes Editor explained that it is biased and intentionally so.
- I suggest a solution to
- • leave out mentions of the Koch Brothers and Funding
- • or put those comments into some sort of Criticisms section
- • or clearly attribute mentions of Koch Brothers and Funding to critics.
JamesThomasMoon1979
01:48, 25 October 2013 (UTC)- Of course, the fair and balanced NewsBusters saves the day! Black is white and white is black. Did you even bother to read the story, or did you just look at the headline? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 02:52, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
- The prior blog link repeats the transcript and shows the video of the interview with the Public Editor. I'm not sure why that's contentious for you. Did you bother to read the story?
- Here's another link about the same topic. The departing Public Editor and current Public Editor generally agree; the New York Times is a politically Progressive newspaper.
JamesThomasMoon1979
06:21, 25 October 2013 (UTC)- The Public Editor said it's a nuanced subject. Regardless, this makes the Times' articles unreliable how exactly? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 05:51, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- Of course, the fair and balanced NewsBusters saves the day! Black is white and white is black. Did you even bother to read the story, or did you just look at the headline? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 02:52, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
- The Times article is full of allegations against the Koch's and their supposed ties to various funding. The NYT in general is known to be biased, so I don't see the problem in attributing the allegations to the source rather than stating them as fact. Arzel (talk) 20:59, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
- I haven't evaluated our text for bias, but generally speaking, factual content supported by reliable sources doesn't require attribution. What makes the Times article itself biased? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 20:42, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
Preceding events section III
The subsection titles, and probably their contents, could use a rewrite. I'm not sure how to best rearrange/retitle the subsections, but right now it has three subsections: "The Meadows letter" (which seems to be mostly a "conservative pressure" section), "September" (which doesn't parallel the header titles very well), and "Change to the rules" (which is no longer a "preceding" event, but which is talking about events during the shutdown). Also, a cosmetic sidenote: at least on my browser, the timeline column is underlapping the collapsed letter signatories. Anyone see this/know how to fix it? ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 02:31, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- I asked if anyone else wanted a significant rewrite earlier in the talk page, but I guess it got buried in all the new talk page sections. The preceding events section seems to be the aftermath of one editor's edit-bomb. I added the titles to give it at least some organization. Looks like another editor chopped off some of the excessive details. I'm thinking we should just take wikipedia's advice to "be bold!" and just edit at will. I noticed the overlap too when I switched to my computer; I added a <div style=width:"70%"></div> to fix it on my browser. You can adjust it if it needs more tweaking on yours. KinkyLipids (talk) 04:14, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- I moved the house rule change one level up, so it is now dis-associated from the "preceding" section. I also narrowed the show/hide sections - see if that's better. The subsection "September" might be improved by a thematic title; there were other preceding events for the prior two years, and even prior five or six years that are worth incorporating for context. See this retrospective example:
Calmes, Jackie (October 15, 2013). "Signs Indicate That Obama's Debt Ceiling Gamble May Be Paying Off". The New York Times.
-- Yellowdesk (talk) 04:52, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks! I was thinking a thematic title would be better too, but couldn't think of a good one. ~Araignee (talk • contribs) 13:31, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Map of votes of Senators by state & Members of Congress by district
I'm wondering if any editors participating on this article are capable of creating and posting map/graphics of Senators and House districts with indications of votes for H.R. 2775, and also indicating party.
- Yellowdesk (talk) 05:49, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Create automatic Archive
Can we please create an automatic Archive for this Talk Page? Not only is the Talk Page painfully long as of now, but also, several Discussion Sections essentially became obsolete the moment the shutdown ended this morning. Therefore, we should Auto-Archive this Talk Page and most of what is on here right now will soon move to Archives. The Mysterious El Willstro (talk) 07:39, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Reactions
[7][8][9](Lihaas (talk) 11:33, 17 October 2013 (UTC)).
Reader feedback: How the bill was rejected by...
64.166.239.205 posted this comment on 3 October 2013 (view all feedback).
How the bill was rejected by Congress. I wanted information on the member of Congress voting record on this issue.
Any thoughts?
[10]. And ofcourse the HOuse version is on that page. All on the record.Lihaas (talk) 11:49, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
- This was discussed above under the subheading "How Representatives & Senators Voted". The article page on H.J.Res. 59 has links to the official roll call votes and several other places where you can get specific voting data. I think the New York Times also has a page where they make formal maps of this stuff. I don't know much about making charts or maps of votes, so someone else would have to do that. It might take up a lot of space too, but if you want to do it, go right ahead. :) The feedback was from October 3, so they can't have been referring to the new bill. That might also be worth adding vote data about. HistoricMN44 (talk) 13:48, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Article about the bill that ended the shutdown
Hi all! I wanted to let you all know that there is already an article about the bill that ended the shutdown, if anyone wants to help edit/improve it. The Senate used a bill that had already been passed by the House (H.R. 2775), gutted the bill, amended it with new text (you can compare the various versions of the text here - the introduced version is about a paragraph and the enrolled (final) version is multiple pages), and then passed the bill "as amended." The House then passed the Senate's amended version (including a name change), and President Obama signed it, ending the shutdown. Anyway, an article already existed about the first version of the bill that passed the House in September. I have updated its infobox, put in the bare minimum of the procedural history, and adjusted the structure of the bill so that data about the original bill is clearly marked as original and we can add in new information afterwards. Antony-22 got this process started. IMHO, we should not delete info about the original version of the bill - it's part of the bill's history and an important (if a little strange) part of the American legislative process. I'd love to see other editors help out by adding in tons of details about the new bill, its provisions, the debate over it, etc. So, you're all invited to edit Continuing Appropriations Act, 2014! :) Good work on this article everyone - it's been really interesting to watch the creation and evolution of this article over the last two weeks. HistoricMN44 (talk) 14:25, 17 October 2013 (UTC)