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GA Review

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Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 16:51, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

lead and infobox

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  • "describes the narrators inability" → "describes the narrator's inability"
    • Done.
      • Actually done. (I somehow forgot to save the edits, sorry about that)
  • The song debuted atop Billboard Country Digital Songs and Country Streaming Songs charts" → "The song debuted atop the Billboard Country Digital Songs and Country Streaming Songs charts"
    • Done.
  • The lyric video has more than 6.8 million views now
    • Updated to 7 million views.
  • infobox looks good

background and release

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  • some context should be given regarding the masters situation, including a mention and wikilink of Scooter Braun
    • Done.
      • It appears BawinV has an issue with the context I added; I'm not really sure what to do now because I have no experience with good article reviews. Where should this be discussed?

composition and lyrics

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  • not sure why there's a comma next to "lilting" but that should be removed
    • Done.

critical reception

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  • Good

commercial performance

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  • Good

credits and personnel

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  • Good

charts

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  • Good

release history

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  • Good

notes

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  • Good

references

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  • refs 5, 12, 16, 22, 24: un-wikilink billboard
    • This isn't really significant, but per MOS:OVERLINK, "Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article".

comments

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 On hold versacespaceleave a message! 09:49, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All concerns seem to have been addressed. I'll allow the Scooter Braun pointer to slide below since another editor had an issue with it. I'll  Pass this, thank you. versacespaceleave a message! 21:48, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oh wow, thank you! This is my first ever good article, and thanks again for passing it. Have a great day. PassedDown (talk | contribs)