Talk:Hotel Wolcott/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Happy to review this article. It may take me more than a week because I am traveling. Bruxton (talk) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Thanks Bruxton, I appreciate it. And feel free to take your time. Epicgenius (talk) 13:46, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Lead

Y good lead summary. All of the elements are cited in the body and the lead summarizes the article.

Grammar

Y consider removing had from "42nd Street had contained brownstones"

Y "and eastern elevations contain plain brick facades" consider "and eastern elevations have plain brick facades"

Y "to the west (right) are a wood-and-glass door" consider "is"

Y "The third through eighth stories contain a pink-brick facade" consider "have" a pink...

Y "the two center bays of the Wolcott's facade has oriel windows" consider "have"

Y "Near the center of the hotel, there were also a palm room to the left of the lobby" consider "was".

Y "The ground story also contains a ballroom covering 3,500" consider has instead of contains

Y "little chicken that come unplucked from the Jersey farms" does the quote say "come" or came?

Y "the hotel become a shelter for homeless former prisoners" consider "became"

I have done all of the above. Regarding the chicken quote, the original source says "come", as it was a contemporary brochure published from the time of the hotel's opening. Epicgenius (talk) 13:45, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Citations

Y Site section citations check out,

Y Architecture section cotations check out

Y Facade citations check out

Y Features sections checks out

Y Public rooms section, I am having trouble confirming this citation for "The lobby ends at a checkout counter."

The source says: "But the lobby ends abruptly with a modest check-in desk, which shuts off what was formerly an equally elaborate ballroom." I've fixed this. Epicgenius (talk) 21:59, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Y Guestrooms spot checked citations check out

Y History the citations I can access check out AGF

Y Development and opening citations check out

Y 1900s to 1960s citations check out

Y 1970s to present spot checked citations check out

Y Critical reception Cannot access the citations AGF

Other

Y I think per MOS:ORDER we need to move the portal bar below the navigation footer templates

I have fixed this. Thanks for the review. Epicgenius (talk) 22:00, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Images

Y Images are relevant and free

Review chart

Status:  Reviewing...

100% reviewed

   

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Yes
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Yes
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	Yes
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	Yes
	2c. it contains no original research.	Yes
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	Yes
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Yes
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Yes
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Yes
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	Yes
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	Yes
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Yes
	7. Overall assessment.	Good work!

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