User talk:Johannes Maximilian
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Dear Johannes, you previously reviewed an article I submitted to Wikipedia. Thank you for your feedback on this. I have been trying to understand what I need to do to improve the article but I am getting stuck on the measures I need to take to have it published on Wikipedia. I wondered if you could be a bit more specific in your feedback please? I have checked the in-line citation, footnote and referencing for beginners guides but I don't fully understand what I need to do. Any help you can give me would be much appreciated. With many thanks, Kerry-Ann
Kavrigo (talk) 07:33, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Draft:Johannes Drerup[edit]
Hi @Johannes Maximilian, Thank you for your comments on the submitted draft. I think the tenses in the draft are correct. Ongoing events in the present tense and past events in the past tense. If you have spotted specific tense mistakes, could you please point them out to me? I'd be happy to fix them if that helps. Belchford (talk) 09:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Johannes Maximilian for helping out with the grammar. I noticied the draft has been classified as 'start-class'. Was that your assessment or is it done automatically? Is there anything else I can or should do other than wait for the decision on the draft? I'd appreciate it if you had the time and patience to guide me as a newbie through the process. Belchford (talk) 10:30, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Draft:Doppelganger Releasing[edit]
Hi @Johannes Maximilian, I'm hoping you can help advise on the draft I've begun about Doppelganger Releasing, a company whose credits I have listed and cited from secondary sources. Can you please assist with creating a page for our company that will be approved? Doppelgangerreleasing (talk) 18:26, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Draft: Village Enterprise revision[edit]
Hi @Johannes Maximilian,
Thank you for your review of Draft: Village Enterprise. I've added timestamps to the BBC radio program as you've suggested. I've also re-attributed footnote 1 to the BBC program (note that previously it was attributed to Marketplace, a program that runs on NPR). I've removed the sentence that required footnote two about Village Enterprise's mission. That seemed to be causing problems as a primary source.
Apologies for these sourcing errors, I had looked at some other pages and saw it was common for companies and nonprofits to often have a primary source as one of their first ones to include the mission statement, including Apple Inc., Facebook, Amazon (company) — as well as other nonprofits similar to Village Enterprise such as One Acre Fund, The BOMA Project, Charity: Water.
Would you be able to review the page again now that these edits have been made? I really appreciate you reviewing the page and providing feedback. BrettSlezak (talk) 18:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
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Submission Declined[edit]
I 've noticed that you've declined a draft under this name "Pierre Timaitre". I understand that wikipedia must have his own way of verifying online sources, however all the informations given had been verified by the french wikipedia team.
I've given all the sources and the online links for them to be verified and knowing the fact all these informations are about me, i can guarantee you that they're legit.
Let me know if there is something else that need to be done.
Btw, i've been contacted via IG to help me "fix" this issue in exchange for some money..
Best Regards. Phantomlord66 (talk) 06:44, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Draft:Ramallah Friends Meeting (Quakers)[edit]
I have added a book citation to the introduction of Draft:Ramallah Friends Meeting (Quakers). Other sources and citations are from primary and secondary sources, including books, University papers, and associated organizations. I hope this satisfies the issue. If not, please let me know what manner of verifiable sourcing is lacking. Thank you. InquisitiveALot (talk) 17:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC)