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I have added considerable amount of design history information compiled from several sources to give a summary of how the design came to be. I believe this article can be considered for A-class. Steve7c8 (talk) 14:35, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Source review
edit- GlobalSecurity.org is not considered a reliable source (WP:GLOBALSECURITY)
- The details in the Notes section require references
- Mullin (1992) is not used
- fn 53 and 58 say "William" instead of "Williams"
- Hehs, Mullin, Williams: location?
- I am not sure what issue Flight International (1990) refers to.
- fn 37, 45, 55: page numbers?
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:39, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- That Global Security image is a direct scan from the print version of the Code One Magazine article written by Eric Hehs, I'll adjust the citation accordingly.
- I've added references in the second, more detailed note.
- I'll move that to additional reading, but it's sort of a shorter summary that Mullin would expand his 2012 writing on.
- Fixed.
- Code One Magazine is for Hehs is based in Fort Worth, Texas. Mullin's publication is by USAFA affiliated Mitchell Aerospace Institute based in Arlington, VA. Williams' book publisher is based in Norwalk, CT or London depending on distribution.
- Those are listed again under bibliography with the full citation, I've moved it to references as the more appropriate section.
- Page numbers have been added for the first two, the last one doesn't have a page number.
- Steve7c8 (talk) 00:42, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Image review
edit- File:YF-22A Advanced Technology Fighter.jpg, File:Two Lockheed-Boeing-General Dynamics YF-22s.jpg, File:YF-22 and YF-23.jpg, File:F-22 Raptor resumes flight testing - 030328-F-0000C-001.jpg, File:Lockheed-Boeing-General Dynamics YF-22 USAF.jpg - USAF images - PD in the United States - okay
- File:An air-to-air overhead view of the YF-22 advanced tactical fighter aircraft during a test flight DF-ST-92-09938.jpg - DOD image - PD in the United States - okay
- File:F-22 RFI.jpg - USAF image - a source would be nice
- File:Lockheed Faceted ATF.jpg, File:Lockheed Model 090P 300x172.jpg, File:Lockheed Boeing General Dynamics DemVal Proposal 300x359.jpg, File:F-22 design evolution 595 to 645 200x592.png, File:NATF-22 305x170.jpg - no-free image - has Fair Use rationale - okay
- File:YF-22 Lightning II "Rzuty" outline drawing.png - Wikipedian-generated image - PD - okay
All images have appropriate licences. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:39, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
Matarisvan
editHi Steve7c8, saving a spot, will add comments soon. Also, if you could wikimail me the two sources required for the YF-23 article, that would be great. Matarisvan (talk) 17:24, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
Schierbecker
editHiking the AT. Connection may be sporadic. Apologies if my comments seem curt.
- US or U.S.? Consistency needed.
- The distinction between WP:GENREF and "Additional sources" is not usually seen on well-developed articles. Might be better to merge the Bibliography and Additional sources.
- MOS:DATETIES issues. Personally my eyes tend to glaze over when an article contains to many dates. Maybe only mention the exact date if its important (and it's going to be on the test) Also does Halloween need to wikilinked?
- Would prefer less passive voice (e.g. not Template:The Lockheed team was announced by Secretary of the Air Force Donald Rice as the winner of the ATF competition.)
- Pilot-induced oscillation is wikilinked only on the second mention. Also were any design issues identified and corrected as a result of this accident. Schierbecker (talk) 18:18, 12 August 2024 (UTC)