User contributions for Atakdoug

00:4300:43, 19 October 2022 diff hist −43 m High-temperature superconductivity copyedit (but it is still terrible, albeit better than the gobbledygook it started as)

01:4801:48, 12 September 2022 diff hist +31 m Kline–Fogleman airfoil →Applications of the KF airfoil today: tag
01:4601:46, 12 September 2022 diff hist −485 Kline–Fogleman airfoil rmv much unencyclopedic language, but I enventually gave up; there is a serious npv problem that I can't easily fix, along with a fair number of unsourced claims. I hope someone who cares but isn't selling this airfoil can pick up where I left off

17:4917:49, 11 September 2022 diff hist +6 m Harrier jump jet →Operation: copyedit
17:2017:20, 11 September 2022 diff hist −3 m Avro 730 →Design: copyedit
17:1217:12, 11 September 2022 diff hist +12 m Aircraft in fiction →Boeing 737: copyedit
17:1117:11, 11 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Aircraft in fiction →Boeing 247: correct my error
17:1017:10, 11 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Aircraft in fiction →Boeing 247: add link

03:0503:05, 9 September 2022 diff hist +8 m Rainbow →Explanation: copyedit
03:0103:01, 9 September 2022 diff hist +13 m Rainbow →Visibility: copyedit

02:4602:46, 7 September 2022 diff hist +4 m Ganges shark →Conservation: copyedit
02:3102:31, 7 September 2022 diff hist +1 m Outline of sharks →Notable researchers and people: add space
02:3102:31, 7 September 2022 diff hist −15 m Outline of sharks →Notable researchers and people: copyedit
02:1802:18, 7 September 2022 diff hist +4 m Bull shark →Interactions with humans: copyedit (someone can't write for ___)
02:0902:09, 7 September 2022 diff hist −141 m Bull shark →Exceptional specimens: rmv redundant sentence (information also above).

08:5508:55, 20 June 2022 diff hist +6 m Nubian ibex correct name of bird species

07:4007:40, 6 April 2022 diff hist −8 m Satellite imagery →GeoEye: copyedit

23:0823:08, 24 November 2021 diff hist −27 m North American Bridge Championships →Future tournament locations: update link and table

03:3203:32, 27 October 2021 diff hist +376 Talk:Sunlight →Messed up table: response

20:4520:45, 26 October 2021 diff hist +774 Talk:Sunlight added note about reverted edit
11:1111:11, 26 October 2021 diff hist −3 m Sunlight →Intensity in the Solar System: undo last attempt Tags: Manual revert Reverted
11:1011:10, 26 October 2021 diff hist +3 m Sunlight →Intensity in the Solar System: further cleanup of table Tag: Reverted
11:0811:08, 26 October 2021 diff hist +2 Sunlight →Intensity in the Solar System: fix table headings (I hope) Tag: Reverted

04:4504:45, 13 August 2021 diff hist −6 m Rule against perpetuities →Statutory modification

00:5900:59, 7 August 2021 diff hist −12 m Lightning strike →Epidemiology: copyedit

22:2022:20, 11 July 2021 diff hist +7 m Steve Sion →Sion-Cokin Affair: clarification and copyedit

06:2706:27, 6 July 2021 diff hist +23 m Bath coup copyedit

01:4701:47, 30 June 2021 diff hist −2 m Creatine kinase →Atomic structure

09:3509:35, 24 May 2021 diff hist +8 m Arsène Lupin →Origin: copyedit

07:3307:33, 6 May 2021 diff hist −12 m Hypercarnivore copyedit
05:4405:44, 6 May 2021 diff hist −89 m Saltwater crocodile →Male size: cleanup (but still awful and needing rewrite; someone should learn English before making further edits)
05:2905:29, 6 May 2021 diff hist −7 m Saltwater crocodile →Male size: copyedit
05:1605:16, 6 May 2021 diff hist +1 m Saltwater crocodile copyedit
05:0805:08, 6 May 2021 diff hist −9 m False gharial →Diet: copyedit
05:0605:06, 6 May 2021 diff hist −16 m False gharial →Characteristics: copyedit
04:5804:58, 6 May 2021 diff hist −1 m Gharial →Evolution: copyedit my earlier change
04:5804:58, 6 May 2021 diff hist +11 Gharial →Evolution: correct reference to study (shich doesn't say what the article said it did)
04:4904:49, 6 May 2021 diff hist −18 m Orinoco crocodile →Reproduction: copyedit
02:5002:50, 6 May 2021 diff hist −1 m List of largest snakes copyedit

04:4404:44, 29 November 2020 diff hist +6 m Historical rankings of presidents of the United States →Notable scholar surveys: copyedit
04:3904:39, 29 November 2020 diff hist +2 m Historical rankings of presidents of the United States →General findings: correction (table shows omission in fewer than half; copyedit
04:0304:03, 29 November 2020 diff hist −1 m 2020 United States presidential election very minor copyedit

03:4103:41, 18 November 2020 diff hist +1 m Combine harvester →History: copyedit
03:2103:21, 18 November 2020 diff hist +1 m Grits →In popular culture: copyedit

04:2504:25, 13 November 2020 diff hist +1 m McLaren F1 →Record claims: copyedit Tag: Reverted

02:1002:10, 2 November 2020 diff hist +4 m Selective immunoglobulin A deficiency →Signs and symptoms: copyedit

06:2506:25, 30 October 2020 diff hist 0 m User:Atakdoug copyedit
06:2306:23, 30 October 2020 diff hist +14 User:Atakdoug updates (it's been a while)
06:1606:16, 30 October 2020 diff hist −856 List of fatal snake bites in the United States some copyedit, but mostly rmv OR — cited sources often do not support conclusions about possible species
05:5205:52, 30 October 2020 diff hist 0 m List of fatal snake bites in the United States →2010s: copyedit
05:2605:26, 30 October 2020 diff hist +48 m List of wolf attacks in North America copyedit (clarification)
05:1705:17, 30 October 2020 diff hist +151 m Fatal dog attacks in the United States →Fatalities in 2020: copyedit, for correctness and consistency

05:0805:08, 20 October 2020 diff hist +1 m Greater roadrunner →Cultural references: copyedit

04:3404:34, 1 September 2020 diff hist 0 m Ohio-class submarine →Replacement: copyedit

05:0805:08, 16 June 2020 diff hist −7 m Theravada →Forms: copyedit (spelling, grammar, and someone liked commas a bit too much)
05:0005:00, 16 June 2020 diff hist +1 m Theravada →Forms: copyedit
04:3404:34, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0 m Swastika →United States: copyedit

01:3501:35, 15 June 2020 diff hist −17 m California condor →Ecology and behavior: copyedit

06:1106:11, 18 April 2020 diff hist −1 m Adaptation (eye) →Experimental evidence: copyedit

07:0607:06, 7 April 2020 diff hist +14 m Henry Hudson →Expedition of 1610–1611: copyedit
06:4006:40, 7 April 2020 diff hist −1 m Court-martial of Breaker Morant →The letter: copyedit

07:2607:26, 21 March 2020 diff hist +1 m Polio →Southeast Asia: copyedit

20:1120:11, 16 March 2020 diff hist −14 m Kawaii →Industry: copyedit (article is barely in English; I fixed a few things but gave up)

02:0402:04, 14 March 2020 diff hist +5 m Lotus effect →Functional principle: copyedit
01:5301:53, 14 March 2020 diff hist −1 m Verbascum thapsus →Agricultural impacts and control: copyedit

03:4903:49, 29 February 2020 diff hist +1 m Six Nations Championship →History and expansion: copyedit

06:1706:17, 28 January 2020 diff hist 0 m Baltimore classification →Group IV: Single-stranded RNA viruses - Positive-sense: copyedit

03:3503:35, 14 January 2020 diff hist +11 m Natural units →Choosing constants to normalize: copyedit

15:4315:43, 8 January 2020 diff hist +40 Psychic bid →Regulations: correct statement about psychic controls, which was written for WBF play but didn't say as much
15:3415:34, 8 January 2020 diff hist −92 m Talk:Psychic bid signed previous comment twice Fixing style/layout errors
15:3315:33, 8 January 2020 diff hist +427 Talk:Psychic bid →(Mis)spelling?~~~~ Comment: new section

04:1904:19, 21 November 2019 diff hist −1 m Lincoln County War →The Fritz insurance policy: copy edit

06:2506:25, 21 October 2019 diff hist +3 m Adaptation (eye) →Evolutionary context: copyedit
05:0405:04, 21 October 2019 diff hist −6 m Infrared →Thermography: rmv unencyclopedic (here, a euphemism for juvenile) language (costs are not "massive")

05:2705:27, 27 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Nanofiltration →Solute transport and rejection: copyedit

17:4917:49, 27 March 2019 diff hist +3 Proteinogenic amino acid →Stoichiometry and metabolic cost in cell: copyedit

15:2615:26, 19 March 2019 diff hist −6 m Gel electrophoresis →Physical basis: copyedit

06:3006:30, 15 March 2019 diff hist −1 m Normal number →Properties and examples: copyedit

03:3003:30, 7 March 2019 diff hist +3 m Acidity function →Comparison of acidity functions with aqueous acidity: copyedit

16:3516:35, 20 December 2018 diff hist +4 Spermatozoon →Humans: add internal link
16:3016:30, 20 December 2018 diff hist −24 Mitochondrial DNA →Protists: copyedit
16:2516:25, 20 December 2018 diff hist +26 Mitochondrial DNA →In mammals: copyedit
16:1516:15, 20 December 2018 diff hist +19 m Mitochondrial DNA →Circular versus linear: copyedit

06:4306:43, 15 November 2018 diff hist +8 m Galicia (Eastern Europe) copyedit (but it still needs lots of help)

01:4701:47, 29 October 2018 diff hist −2 m Dana Rohrabacher →Tax reform: correct text to square with linked source

06:5206:52, 20 October 2018 diff hist −13 m List of surgical procedures copyedit

16:2416:24, 10 October 2018 diff hist +4 m Thermogenic plant →Examples of thermogenic plants: punctuation
16:2316:23, 10 October 2018 diff hist +1 m Thermogenic plant →Examples of thermogenic plants: copyedit
16:2216:22, 10 October 2018 diff hist −8 m Thermogenic plant →Characteristics of thermogenic plants: copyedit — cleanup (but it's still bad)
16:1216:12, 10 October 2018 diff hist +7 m Thermogenesis →Non-shivering: clarification
16:0616:06, 10 October 2018 diff hist −4 m Dormancy →Aestivation: copyedit for parallelism
16:0516:05, 10 October 2018 diff hist +3 m Dormancy →Diapause: copyedit

00:2400:24, 20 August 2018 diff hist −3 m Vitamin D copyedit

14:4114:41, 8 August 2018 diff hist +10 m Cetacea →Skeleton: copyedit

22:0222:02, 24 July 2018 diff hist +6 m Tom Lehrer →That Was The Week That Was: copyedit

17:4517:45, 12 May 2018 diff hist −1 m Alcohol withdrawal syndrome →Pathophysiology: copyedit
17:4117:41, 12 May 2018 diff hist +24 m Alcohol withdrawal syndrome →Progression: copyedit (just grammar, but it was a mess)
17:3017:30, 12 May 2018 diff hist −1 m Delirium tremens →Pathophysiology: copyedit

17:2417:24, 2 December 2017 diff hist 0 User:Atakdoug No edit summary
17:2317:23, 2 December 2017 diff hist 0 m Misprision of felony →United States federal law: copyedit

04:0504:05, 10 November 2017 diff hist −14 m Ivermectin →Veterinary use: copyedit
03:2603:26, 10 November 2017 diff hist +17 m Cyclic compound →Principle uses of cyclic structures: copyedit
03:2003:20, 10 November 2017 diff hist +9 m Cyclic compound →Heterocyclic compounds: copyedit
03:1903:19, 10 November 2017 diff hist −15 m Cyclic compound →Carbocycles: copyedit (clearer)

04:2804:28, 15 October 2017 diff hist 0 m Lacosamide →Partial-onset seizures: copyedit

18:5318:53, 22 September 2017 diff hist +3 m Horseshoe copyedit

00:0800:08, 21 September 2017 diff hist +15 m Restaurant rating →Ratings impact: copyedit

07:1407:14, 8 September 2017 diff hist +1,031 Talk:Gulfstream G650/G700/G800 →Something is wrong with the speed figures: add comment

08:2508:25, 6 September 2017 diff hist +3 m UC3 Nautilus →Specifications: copyedit (verb tense)

16:3416:34, 28 August 2017 diff hist −17 m Applications of the Stirling engine →Solar power generation: copyedit (no reason to retain grammatical error from source, as it is not in a direct quotation)
16:2216:22, 28 August 2017 diff hist +59 m Stirling engine →Operation: copyedit (but is should be cleaned up further by someone who knows the material; I'm just trying to make it moderately grammatical)
16:0316:03, 28 August 2017 diff hist −18 m Stirling engine →Other types: copyedit
15:3415:34, 28 August 2017 diff hist +24 m Stirling engine →Later nineteenth century: copyedit
15:2715:27, 28 August 2017 diff hist 0 m Stirling engine →Invention and early development: copyedit (move citation)
15:2615:26, 28 August 2017 diff hist −7 m Stirling engine →Invention and early development: copyedit

09:0409:04, 22 July 2017 diff hist −1 m Mixed martial arts →Brazilian jiu-jitsu/Jujutso: copyedit

15:2515:25, 26 May 2017 diff hist +11 m Siloam tunnel changed expression of gradient to match WP manual of style (cf. MOS:PERCENT)

18:4818:48, 15 April 2017 diff hist +4 m Povidone-iodine copyedit
18:4618:46, 15 April 2017 diff hist −43 m Cytoskeleton →Eukaryotic cytoskeleton: copyedit (but it remains terrible; please don't write science articles if you cannot communicate in English)
18:2418:24, 15 April 2017 diff hist −26 m Lipopolysaccharide →Discovery: copyedit to clarify
18:2118:21, 15 April 2017 diff hist −9 m Gram-positive bacteria →Orthographic note: clarify and bring into line with more detailed explanation

19:0919:09, 28 February 2017 diff hist −6 Islam in Africa copyedit (of ridiculously badly written text)

23:2223:22, 14 July 2016 diff hist +5 List of largest protected areas →Largest protected areas of the world

20:4820:48, 8 July 2016 diff hist −6 m Diabetes →Prevention: copyedit for clarity
20:4520:45, 8 July 2016 diff hist +18 Diabetes →Prevention: copyedit (for parallelism)
20:4020:40, 8 July 2016 diff hist +21 m Urinalysis →Smell: copyedit
20:3820:38, 8 July 2016 diff hist +69 m Urinalysis →Color: copyedit for consistency
20:3220:32, 8 July 2016 diff hist +3 m Bilirubinuria minor copyedit
20:0520:05, 8 July 2016 diff hist +40 m Urinalysis →Smell: copyedit (clean up language)
19:4119:41, 8 July 2016 diff hist +13 m Diabetes insipidus →Etymology: copyedit
19:3919:39, 8 July 2016 diff hist +53 m Diabetes insipidus →Etymology: minor copyedits
19:3019:30, 8 July 2016 diff hist 0 m Diabetes insipidus →Pathophysiology: capitalization error
19:2819:28, 8 July 2016 diff hist +4 m Diabetes insipidus →Pathophysiology: minor copyedits

05:0405:04, 1 April 2016 diff hist −4 m Triops →top: copyedit

05:0805:08, 24 March 2016 diff hist +14 m Wood ash →Variability in assessment: copyedit
05:0405:04, 24 March 2016 diff hist −8 m Charcoal →Types: copy edit (but it is still terrible; someone needs to learn English before writing these entries)
04:0004:00, 24 March 2016 diff hist +8 m Excavator →Configurations: copy edit

05:1405:14, 5 February 2016 diff hist −1 m Freedom of assembly minor copyedit
05:1005:10, 5 February 2016 diff hist +2 m Freedom of assembly minor copyedit
05:0905:09, 5 February 2016 diff hist +36 Freedom of assembly copyedit... but OMG, this article stinks. Do the editors who wrote it understand law... or speak English?

20:0220:02, 29 January 2016 diff hist +234 TechJect Dragonfly UAV Fix lede to clarify that product was not manufactured and there are no current plans